《A Sky of Star and Strength》Hiatus.
Advertisement
This is painful to write.
When I first started this story I was working on a whim, I was bored and wanted to MAKE something rather than just consume others content.
The first few chapters of this were really bad, quoting from one of the most constructive comments I received from TACHYON : "To be frank, this first chapter is a very bad way to start a story." (he then went on to explain his thought process and was EXTREMELY helpful in pointing out places where I could improve in both this story and in general)
However, the first few chapters were also a blast to write, I was having a ton of fun creating jake and the world around him.
at the same time though, my inexperience was also creating chains that would bind the rest of the story. I was basing geography off real-world locations (i literally had to print out a map of Washington state), stats essentially served no purpose, magic (while offering some fun creative development) was a silver bullet type action with no real way to expand it without breaking immersion.
On the other hand I have been mulling over a completely separate idea for years now, I have basic notes for it, the world is based off a trope (VRMMO) so I have a world structure already set. Something much easier for a beginner to develop. and to top it all off it's based around my favorite sub-genre (crafting).
so it really came down to the question, why am I writing this. and my answer was I don't know.
so, for now, I'm gonna let this rest. it will go on hiatus, and with luck in the future ill rewrite it into something more expandable.
and ill start a new story that I've had planned for years.
I'm sorry if anyone was really enjoying the story. I want to say sorry specifically to people who rated and commented, TACHYON in particular, as well as my one discord server member scottf89, tbh I probably would have done this earlier if I hadn't been talking to him over there.
thanks for reading :)
TLDR: I'm dropping this story for now and starting another one that I actually planned out a little. I might restart this at some point.
Advertisement
- In Serial143 Chapters
The Hidden Myth Of Ji Dara
Firstly, I upload chapters at an astonishing frequency of about 7 – 14 Chapters weekly before going premium and 14 – 21 Chapters Weekly after going premium…
8 454 - In Serial874 Chapters
The Strange Adventure of a Broke Mercenary
After the soldiers’ mercenary group where he used to work had been utterly destroyed, Loren, who survived the disaster, decided to walk the adventurer’s path as a way to make a living. However, for Loren who had no acquaintances and nothing but an empty pocket on him, receiving a single quest seemed like a faraway aim. So, as he was contemplating about what he should do next, another adventurer called out to him.
8 707 - In Serial21 Chapters
Against the Odds: A LITRPG Apocalypse
Slated to be executed, Aaron's prospects in life are bleak. However, with the introduction of the system, he gains the chance to escape. It won’t be easy, monsters run rampant, and demonic alien invaders have turned the prison into a stronghold. Not to mention the prison’s original inhabitants - the most dangerous criminals in all of America. Faced with overwhelming odds, his only hope of victory lies in using every dirty trick in the book. Luckily for him, as the self-proclaimed best thief in the world, his bag of tricks runs deep. ............ Hi Everyone, If you want to learn a little bit more about the book before deciding whether to read it, I've included a bullet point list of some of the things that the story features: -A strong but not overpowered protagonist. -Magic -Characters that make reasonable decisions and have more personality than a box of cardboard. -A standard litrpg progression with plenty of level ups and blue screens. -A highly customizable Skill system. For example, with enough Skill Points, Mana Bolt can be upgraded to shoot out multiple orbs at once, follow targets to become undodgeable, or simply hit harder. Anything is possible with the right combination of Skill Paths. -Interesting fight scenes -A morally grey main character. They’re not mustache-twirling levels of evil, but they’re no stranger to crime. -The apocalypse -Frequent updates
8 269 - In Serial6 Chapters
Thiefdom
After being caught stealing, a boy finds himself transported to a fantastic world on the brink of a new era: The Age of Thievery!
8 95 - In Serial17 Chapters
The Altered, The Augmented, And The Ascended
In the not too distant future, humanity had diverged into three distinct races. The Altered who have unlocked the mysteries of genetic code and can alter their biology at will. The Augmented who have taken cybernetic technology to a higher echelon, allowing them to augment thier bodies and become one with their machines. and finally the Ascended who are a mystery. Only fables of them remain for they had uploaded their consciousness and departed from the physical world. Follow the epic interspecies war between the three races vying for dominance on a planet that has endured a millennium of endless strife.
8 150 - In Serial28 Chapters
Peter Parker y Carol Danvers: Como Madre e Hijo.
Un año ya ha pasado, desde la victoria de Los Avengers a Thanos, gracias a la ofensiva, coraje y sacrifico de nuestros Heroes, el universo entero fue salvado. Teniendo como nueva Lider del equipo a Carol Danvers, Tony le deja como ultimo deber, guiar y cuidar del joven Peter Parker. El chico, aun afligido por la muerte de su mentor, ve en la figura de Carol, una nueva forma de seguir adelante, pero, no teniendo en cuenta lo que sus sentimientos, y los de la propia Capitana, formara entre ambos.Como Madre e Hijo, es una serie que toma a nuestros personajes del UCM y los mezcla en esta apasionante historia, llena de Romance y Comedia, aderezado con una pizca de Drama y Accion, al mas puro estilo del Sorprendente Spiderman. (Historia +18. YA CONCLUIDA)
8 86
Prev Chap
Next Chap
Chap List
Boy
Girl
