《Immortal's Life》Real Deal
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It was 9am everyone from team Aryan except Jacob were present in dining room for breakfast. Because there were lot of people Ally choose to let their cook handle all the cooking.
The breakfast menu was a simple egg bhurji with multigrain roti along with boiled egg and fresh watermelon juice prepared at home.
"Eon texted me saying that you all were having a practice session, how does it go?".
"It was very stressing as we have to train with Eon who gave us quite a physical challenges we were ignorant about. It is not my first time to be trained by a immortal but the pressure Eon created for our training was very suppressive in nature ".
As all were eating Evan was only the one who had not put anything in his mouth so he answer Ally with a serious look on his face while Alisha observed any change in expression of her mother.
After hearing this Ally had a little change in expression as she replied.
"You guys really handle that suppressive power, hmm... than it mean he went easy on you huh..."
Everyone look at Ally in hope of getting some answers from her. Expecting them to ask questions Ally smile and said.
"If you want my advice in this I will only said that Rebecca and Jacob both are trained by him well although he only give them some pointers, all their to them were their own labour".
This time everyone who was eating stop at once and were shockingly staring silently at Ally for a few second before it was switch to Rebecca.
"No way that would be true, right Rebecca. Is he the one who you called mysterious teacher?".
It was Edgar who broke the by asking Rebecca the authenticity of the information. Only Edgar and Sage know how powerful Rebecca is, nobody else know about her power level much. She never hang out with rest of them, they only know each other through Sage.
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Being under the spotlight of whole room she was not having a difficult time. She had a helpless look on her face as she spoke.
"It was him, after 3 year when he started the trip he returned home to see Jacob, Eon had come back to earth to help Jacob in evolution. I can still remember it was in the month of may when I bumped into him. He said he was looking for me and he had something for me.
At first I was very confuse, because we were close friend back then I simply followed him. He took me to Alex training site in his car Ace faith and taught me whole bunch of new skill and give me some pointers for next two months and further 5 months via spacelink. The skills he taught me were all out of the world, each and every thing about the skill was at mystical rank but I doubt that and so I never disclose it to anyone".
All were looking at Rebecca as they were in trance and no one speak anything there was a total silence in the dinning room.
"Hey Rex the skills you are teaching me a few months ago don't tell me that it was taught to you by Eon?".
"You are right, Eon teach me that skills. Apparently He was trying to teach you all of that skill during morning session. You all remember all the pose he made us do by his Astral energy that's the first sets of the skill it will stimulate every potential of our body, but in process anyone even immortal will become exhausted in less than an hour at their first try".
Everyone was dumbstruck by the revelation done by her Rebecca, they started to became very grateful to him. They even started to forgive him for his annoying behaviour this morning, until they heard what Ally said.
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"Do not take his kindness to your heart. He was just following his order and doing you all guys a favour. He was order to teach a squad. And if my guess is correct anyone of who will become powerful through him will have two choices, one to join the faction he created and other will be join the faction allied to him and you have to do 10 legal or illegal work for him, expect for Alisha, Eve and Elsa".
When they heard Ally everyone who was present here expect Rebecca and her all had chill ran down to there spine.
"Ooh.... don't worry about today he will give a forceful training for next 2 days and will not except any form of dues from you guys, but if you still continue after two days you have to accept the deal first".
"What kind of training is this. It's like a insurance policy. Why would a sane man would continue that".
Loki questions Eon's training, which was lingering inside all the members present here.
"Don't worry about that he has only given you guys a trailer, when he teach you the real deal all the sane side of your mind will be more than willing to expect the offer even it means making a deal with the devil".
This time Rebecca answer the question with a scorn as she was looking down on all with disdain.
Watching everything which had been transpire Ally sigh and thought to herself
'Why did I ruin another moment of there freindly time"
_________________ At gravity chamber __________________________
Eon was standing in the middle of the room as he watches a shadow circle around him.
"You are too slow Jacob, this way you can never touch me. Faster move faster Jacob".
Jacob who was running further increase his speed.
"Come on Jacob even Rebecca run faster than you. While you are running feel every inch of your body's muscle".
Seeing that this is going nowhere Eon who was standing in the middle suddenly dashes to Jacob. As he reached Jacob he grab his head and forcefully bang it to the ground.
"Boom".
"Grrrr..."
Eon release his grip from Jacob's head who was frowning in pain in his Lycan form. A head that of a wolf with body that of a Lycan with black fur all over his body over 3m tall.
Jacob completed his evolution hours ago, now Eon is training Jacob adapt to his new power while thinking about how to deal with his psychological disturbance.
"You are too much concentrating on controlling everything at once. Stop it and control anyone thing either emotion or adaptation".
Jacob who was smashed on the floor with great difficulty stood up and glare angrily at Eon before reverting back to human form.
"Tell the Fucker who smashed me like a shit".
"Well if you don't run fast this fucker will fuck you like a whore. NOW RUN!!!!"
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