《(Un)Prophesied Heroes》Plans and Problems
Advertisement
A [Rogue], a [Swordsman], and a [Mage] sit at a table in a tavern.
Absorbed.
Oblivious to the carousing, fighting, drinking, and general goings-on around them, a single-minded devotion to the task at hand.
The midnight oil burned low, and at the table they remained. Still focused.
Still planning.
The plans started loose. Most plans do. A few vague ideas piled up and hammered down until something real started to take shape.
The [Rogue] was the only member of the troika with any experience in theft. Not real experience, mind you, but experience still. Part of the requirements for completing her [Rogue] training had involved skill demonstrations. Picking pockets, locks, and stealth.
She had known her entire life she wanted to be an adventurer, though, so the training had been more perfunctory than functional. With some help and a little magic, she was pretty sure this was doable.
The [Mage] had been raised by [Hunters], then trained by a famous – if reclusive – practitioner of magic for a few years. His goal was to become an [Enchanter], and he was well on his way. He just had trouble getting the enchantments to stick for longer than a few days.
He was pretty confident this plan was going to end in imprisonment. To be fair, he had never dealt with any strategy more complex than a game of chess.
The [Swordsman] had been born a [Lord], and a poor one at that. It was by a stroke of luck, though, that he even got the [Lord] class. Most of his family – brothers, sisters, and cousins – had been stuck with weaker classes. [Barons] and [Baronesses], mostly, as far removed from the actual line of succession as they were.
So his parents and aunts and uncles all humored his whims, paid for tutors and lessons, bought him gifts and toys. Whatever the little [Lord] needed to ensure he grew into the man they knew he could become. Strong and influential, claiming a place at court and protecting the family’s relevance.
The Alderburn name alone meant little if you failed to contribute your share to the family coffer.
His instruction had been thorough, and while he had not been fond of the strategy lessons, some of it had certainly sunk in. He knew they had a pretty good shot at freeing his family with this plan, and he knew it would give him the reputation he needed. Probably a spot at court, too.
Deep down, he hoped that something would go wrong.
Advertisement
-
The castle was the second largest building in the city. The druids’ sprawling temple that was as much a living garden as a structure was the largest, taking up a full quarter of the city on its own. Like about half of the city, most of the building was actually grown from the trees. Knothole windows the size of a person and great arched doorways leading to balconies ringed in elegantly woven, living railings. Branches dense with leaves sprouted in clumps along the structure as well as covering the vaulted roof overhead. Hewn timber and rough stone formed the man-made portions of the complex, a grand entrance hall and the guards’ barracks.
A river flowed through and around the massive tree that made up the majority of the castle, wide and fast. A massive gateway, large enough for a Giant to pass through, was covered by a bizarre, flowery portcullis. Vines of various species clung to a thin wooden frame, the tangled net of flowering plants offering scant views through to the courtyard beyond.
And then a [Guard] near the river called out to another on the castle’s riverbank, and the portcullis – no, drawbridge – began an abrupt decent, it’s first jarring drop shaking loose a mass of nesting birds and a variety of butterflies.
Picturesque, until with an alarming thud you could feel in your chest, the bridge crashed to the opposite bank, yet another chirping mass of birds bursting from every seam like feathers from an overstuffed pillow.
Across the bridge, and past the first several layers of dispassionate security armed with clipboards and truth spells, the massive gate opens into a majestic courtyard.
A beautiful and expertly manicured… Forest?
Smaller, here. And less dense.
But a forest. A smaller, lazier branch of the much busier river ran through here, a few small bridges offering passage along its surprising length. And high above, much like the drawbridge outside, a myriad of flowering vines trellised their way across the open space, forming a porous roof over the whole space.
One might wonder why a castle’s courtyard, least of all one occupied by a forest, would need a roof.
And one would be interrupted by an awful shriek that was so piercing you would consider ear damage a blessing.
And a creature would crest the trees after an earth-shaking take-off, a single flap of the broad wings sending it the rest of the way to the canopy above. Claws six inches long tipped each toe, and powerful hind legs dug in.
Advertisement
A cascade of multicolored blooms floated down around the creature, feline paws snapping at a few before its beaked mouth unleashed another screech more piercing than a toothpick to the eardrum.
Distinctly owlish in the face, it had large tufts of feathers where it’s ears would be, a large and viciously hooked beak preening at feathers and fur. It’s body was that of a mountain lion, lithe and full of sinewy muscle. Wings tucked away along its forelegs and its tail ended in a large swathe of feathers.
More screeching and the ground shook. An entire flock of the owlcats burst from the trees and took off, flying after the first. They all roosted there, hanging from the ceiling and nipping at one another. They were strix, owls twisted and altered by the natural magic that permeated the forest until they became bloodthirsty beasts. Feared as one of the most terrifying creatures on the continent, the Alderburn family had tamed them as guardians generations prior.
Through the courtyard and into the castle proper, you come into the main hall, home to the Stairs. Wide enough to march an army up, the broad and sweeping staircase spiraled from the apex of the castle down to the dungeons. It made up the main thoroughfare in the castle as well, the Stairs connecting each area together.
The dungeons sat deep under the castle, nestled into the roots of the system that fed the complex. Grown from the tree itself, the cells were naturally resistant to magic and most physical attacks. The further into its depths, the more oppressive the security.
Anti-magic and anti-skill sigils etched into the cells suppressed any class-based superpowers or magical abilities, deeper cells even having paralysis or sleep sigils to keep their occupants permanently contained.
There were, of course, many creative and extensive tools of torture and coercion, but in the case of Castle Bastow, they were more decorative than useful. Leftover relics from a harsher time, now providing excellent ambiance for the dungeon’s current residents.
[Guards] patrolled at meticulously planned times, their rounds keeping the halls regularly covered like clockwork. The cells didn’t have any conveniently jingly keys hanging from conspicuously-placed key rings that could be lifted with ease, each cell had a unique invocation that would cause the branches covering the entrance to open or close and the sigils to activate.
The [Head Guard] in charge of the prison, a lazy man who had standing-napped his way up through the ranks by dint of never once leaving his post during a single shift, was expected to keep each spell memorized in order to issue them to a [Guard] once a prisoner or prisoners were assigned to it. He had given it his best shot, but the listing for the job hadn’t included “rote memorization”, at least not as far as he could remember, so he had a convenient slip of paper with each incantation written down. Neatly tucked into an inner pocket of his shirt, kept company by pawn slips and a mostly crumpled paper packet of cigarettes.
A slightly bent specimen was currently burning merrily away, tucked into a corner of the frown the stubble studded face was drawn into. A cramped office with a small desk, a few chairs.
Piles of paperwork, loosely-sorted sheaves stacked feet-deep in places. Never more than three or four feet deep, though. That would be far too close to eye level.
The [Head Guard] was trying to avoid making eye contact with the paperwork lately. The constant reminder of the Sisyphean task that was administration around here was bad enough, it had started to feel like the stacks were looking back at him.
The cherry on his cigarette reached his lip, and he jumped, hastily pulling it out and dropping it into a coffee mug with a hiss. Absentmindedly, another smoke found its way into his mouth, and he regarded the report on his desk. Three people had attempted to sneak into the dungeon through the “secret passage” that led to the basement of an inn nearby.
Unfortunately for the trio, that particular passageway was well known amongst the castle’s guards. Tradition meant every newbie got blindfolded, kidnapped, and smuggled to the inn where the party starts.
It also meant that most of his staff could make their way through the tunnel with their eyes closed and hands tied.
The fifteen or so guards that found them had been on their way to an after-shift drink.
Now, only slightly worse for wear, the three had been unceremoniously tossed into a cell and left to stew there for a while.
That had been a few hours ago.
But there was no hurry. A long, slow drag. The [Head Guard] leaned far back in his chair, exhaling slowly through his nose. He kicked his feet up onto the only clear portion of his desk, put his arms behind his head.
And fell asleep.
Advertisement
- In Serial20 Chapters
In Search Of Harmony
Chris Erikson has been isekai-d to a world of Magical Music! After an unpleasant encounter with a speeding truck, college student Chris finds himself in a new body on a new world, Laroha. His original plan was to study music as a way to meet cute girls, but his discovery that on Laroha music is magical puts a whole new spin on things. Now with his mysterious Isekai Cheat Power, "Leader of the Band," Chris has to find a place for himself on a world where those with the power of magical music are both respected and feared. And, of course, meet cute girls. (Please note that while this story has a moderate amount of swears, it will not have any NSFW content. It is a slow-build harem story but there will be no adult scenes here. There are adult scenes, which can be read on my Patreon. They contain no important plot points.)
8 97 - In Serial35 Chapters
Bob's Ascension to Godhood
Bob is, no, was, always what would be considered as an ordinary man. After dying in the most random way possible, Bob was then resurrected into a world filled with monsters, magic and mayhem. Follow Bob as he slays monsters, clashes with warriors, and beats up mages who are in the middle of chanting their spells, all with his bag of miscellaneous items, big mouth, and questionable thought process. Rate it! If anything seems grammeritically incorrect or doesn't make sense, you can blame it on my godly autocorrect. If anything is mispelled, you can also blame it on my godly autocorrect. Autocorrect, am I right?
8 79 - In Serial7 Chapters
The Jianghu
Authors note: I appreciate feedback! Part of the reason I am releasing my chapters here is to benefit from reader feedback. If you have the time, please leave a review! Brian has lost everything he has ever held dear. Everyone who cared for him has died, in the most tragic manner possible. He no longer knows what to do. He sees no hope for the future in a world where anyone he loves will die. What is the point in trying in this reality if it all leads to sadness?And then along came the Ingenium, the worlds first true Virtual Reality device. And The Jianghu, a Wuxia-themed Virtual Reality MMO, came with it. Brian doesn't understand it yet, but he feels that both are connected with his dead parents and Uncle Jie. With the intent of figuring out what that connection is, or at least forgetting about his tragedy, he enters The Jianghu.
8 132 - In Serial14 Chapters
Rekindle
My Newest, and at the same time, Oldest novel. This is a Rewrite of my very first novel that I begun when I was just starting out. It follows the story of Mark Floyd, a broken man who once tried to do what he thought was right... only to be stabbed in the back and thrown away.Now, pulled into a conflict that spans time and space, Mark has a choice to make; Stand up once more, even if it means facing an unknowable future, or let the Embers of his heart die and sink back into darkness. ----------------------------------- “For gold is tried in the fire, and acceptable men in the furnace of adversity”. Once part of a Special Ops team in the US Army, Mark Floyd thought he had seen the worst that Humanity had to offer. That was until his final mission, one that would leave him a broken and shattered man, betrayed by the Country he served, and abandoned by society as a whole. His dreams filled with nightmares of the ones he failed to protect, mind and memories clouded by booze and more, Mark finds himself stumbling through life without purpose or desire. Life isn't done with Mark yet, however. For as long as even a single ember remains in a persons heart, here is still yet hope for the flames of Passion and Hope to be Rekindled. When the dying embers of Mark's heart catches the eyes of a Being far beyond his understanding, Mark finds himself thrown into a situation not even his years of training could prepare him for. Will this new chance be Mark's hope at both Redemption and Recompense? Or will it simply be the final nail in the coffin for a man already dead to the World? [This is a rework of my very first story. The general story will remain the same, however a few details have been tweaked, the chapters have be Edited better and some chapters have been broken down into smaller chunks for better flow and consistency. The biggest change will be to the System itself; It will be a lot less "Game-like", meaning no stats, levels or similar aspect, though skills will still be present in the form of "Programs". Instead, It'll focus more on the Sigil's nature as super-computers and how they change the world around them. This should make for a much more "natural" and less info-dumpy system.
8 118 - In Serial9 Chapters
Kingdom of Ice
"170 years ago, in a world where humans have evolved such that they could live on the ocean floor, and form cities there, Commandant Franklin led a hunting party on a reconaissance expedition north, traveling from the outer edge of the Indian Ocean, all the way to the High Arctic. His goal: to find the fabled Northwest Passages for the Vicegerent of Tridention, and establish business with underwater arctic cities there. But the expedition went awry, and they never returned. Everyone in the party was presumed dead. Until now. When two of the hunters from that same expedition find their way back to Tridention after all these years, Watson, a retired commandant for one of Tridention's thirty-five hunting parties, agrees to help those hunters form a ragtag party of their own, against their leadership's wishes, and travel all the way back to the same Northwest Passages to recover the rest of the hunting expedition. The hope is that their commandant, and other hunters, are somehow still alive and can be brought back home safely. "
8 82 - In Serial121 Chapters
A Wheel Inside a Wheel
Two brilliant young me, Reinhard von Musel and Yang Wen-li, are forced to flee the countries of their birth and become refugees on opposite sides of a century long galactic war. While they both struggle to adapt to their new lives, their obvious talent propels them to the forefront of the war. Their choices will shape their adoptive homelands forever, and their clash will decide the future of the galaxy. This story is broken up into volumes, each following one half of the conflict. You can read them in chronological order, or you can follow just Yang or Reinhard. See individual descriptions below. Part One - Speaking in Tongues When Yang Wen-li’s father dies, the only thing that he inherits is a mountain of debt, which can only be paid off with fifteen years of his life. Wanting to escape that indentured servitude, Yang flees his homeland and takes up a false identity in the Galactic Empire, a hyper-stratified society where stepping out of line is punishable with imprisonment or death. Yang enrolls in the Imperial Officers’ Academy to study history, but despite his unusual and unmistakeable talent as both a tactician and a scholar, his classmates resent him for being a visible outsider. When tensions at the school boil over and several of Yang’s classmates attempt to murder him, Yang finds an unlikely ally in the top student in the class: the aloof Oskar von Reuenthal. But Reuenthal and Yang both have secrets, secrets which could destroy both their lives and their newfound friendship. [70k words, complete] Part One (Alternate) - Talking Without Speaking When Oskar von Reuenthal enrolls at the Imperial Officers' Academy, he doesn’t expect to make real friends. The IOA is a competitive place, and Reuenthal has never been well liked. But when a foreign student shows up to challenge him for the top spot in the class, Reuenthal can’t look away. [77k words, complete] Part Two - Life out of Balance When Reinhard von Musel's mother learns that her husband is about to sell her daughter to become the concubine of the Kaiser, she takes her two children, Reinhard and Annerose, and flees to the Free Planets Alliance, where the three of them must start a new life. [129k words, complete] Part Three - Servants of the Pharaoh Now an officer in His Majesty's fleet, Yang Wen-li struggles to maintain his principles in the face of everything that is expected of him. When he's unwillingly drawn into the politics of the court, he has to use all of his talents to keep himself and his new friends out of danger. [173k words, complete] Short - Whatever It Takes to Keep the Body Warm After their falling out, Reuenthal and Mittermeyer are both posted to the brutal wasteland of Capche-Lanka. It's difficult to hold a grudge when you're just trying to survive. [23k words, complete] Short - Keep the Home Fires (Burning) Three soldiers. Two bodies to be buried. One haunted house. [33k words, complete] Part Four - Lighting Out for the Territories While his sister has joined the fierce Rosen Ritter regiment, Reinhard's fame has earned him a post stuck on Phezzan. Instead of getting to fight, he's caught up in a web of secrets, including the shelter and care of a mysterious refugee from the Empire. Separated from everyone he cares about, Reinhard is forced to make some unexpected allies, and make connections with old friends. [147k words, complete] Part Five - Serpent's Mouth, Serpent's Teeth After having sacrificed his freedom to save his best friend's life, Yang must figure out how to win, and not just survive, the largest civil war in human history. [In progress] Part Six - Lightless Labyrinth [forthcoming, TBD] Part Seven - Silent Spiral [forthcoming, TBD] This story is crossposted on ao3 at bit.ly/wheelinsideawheel
8 276

