《Captive God》Chapter 4: Snowfall
Advertisement
The next morning, before sunrise.
Yan Wei took the previous day off to calm his mind and practice cultivation. No more strange memories occurred, and the one that did slowly felt more and more like his own, so much so that he didn’t even find it strange anymore.
He also tried reading the second portion of the cultivation manual, but the words squirmed around on the page so fast that his eyes couldn’t keep up. There was clearly a need for better innate talent to do so, further confirming that he would never be able to break through from the Source Realm, much less the first level.
Having refined three more strands of spiritual energy over the past day, Yan Wei was growing accustomed to the refining process. However, he could still tell that there was a well inside his Source, one so deep that he couldn't see the bottom.
Two more strands of spiritual energy that he accumulated through the night became one with the air current that flowed through his nose and into his body, moving down into his dantian where they were instantly devoured.
After taking a deep breath, he sat there on his bed, deep in thought. "At this rate, merely breaking through into the first level of Source Realm seems out of grasp, like trying to reach the clouds in a single jump.
"Be that as it may, no one asks for poor talent, nor does anyone complain about having great talent. Since I have poor talent, I'll just have to work ten times harder."
For hours, Yan Wei sat there with his books, caught in his own soliloquies as sunlight broke the horizon. The occasional loud noise outside would jostle his concentration, only for him to shake his head and sink right back into his studies soon thereafter.
Fortunately for Yan Wei, cultivating didn’t seem to expend any of his stamina; therefore, he didn’t feel tired, even after cultivating all night.
Yan Wei had already given up on the idea of reading more of the cultivation manual, so he started with the first book on medicine, which was written by Pill Master Qiu himself, and contained his recorded thoughts and analyses from his first years of working with medicine.
Advertisement
Although it only consisted of his earlier work, learning from his beginning mistakes would give Yan Wei stable footing for concocting his first medicine later on.
Yan Wei's eyes slowly opened upon hearing an abrupt knock on the door. He ignored it and closed his eyes again, but then an even louder knock sounded.
Prepared to face the Pill Master's scolding, Yan Wei got up and opened the door.
To his surprise, however, there was a young man standing there.
He was only a head shorter than Yan Wei, with hazel eyes, freckles on his cheeks, and a head full of somewhat curly hair.
Despite all of this, Yan Wei could immediately tell who he was by his tattered tunic and familiar expression.
"Chen Yifeng!?" Yan Wei shouted.
"Yeah. I got lots of rest," Chen Yifeng grinned. "The old guy upstairs let me in."
"I didn't expect it to have this much of an effect," Yan Wei said. "How do you feel?"
“I had to convince my father that I was the real me. He thought I was an intruder and nearly killed me.” Chen Yifeng scratched his head with an embarrassed look on his face. "Two cups and a door."
"What?" Yan Wei was caught off-guard.
"My body is so strong now, those are the things I've accidentally broken already..."
They both burst into laughter.
Yan Wei cleared his throat. "Alright, why are you here?"
"I came by to ask if you wanted to tag along and play in the snow with me and my friends," Chen Yifeng said.
"What did you say?" Yan Wei asked.
“I’m not that much younger than you,” Chen Yifeng scoffed.
Yan Wei shook his head with frustration. “No, before that. Did you say snow?”
“Yeah. It started snowing yesterday morning, and it’s been coming and going ever since,” Chen Yifeng replied.
“It has never snowed here,” Yan Wei said.
Chen Yifeng went and opened the front door so Yan Wei could see for himself. “Are you coming or not?”
Advertisement
It was only now that Yan Wei realized that he wasn’t just cold because of the Yin in his blood, the temperature in the room was actually cold.
A surprised look on his face beneath the mask, Yan Wei said, “I just took yesterday off, I can’t miss today as well. You go ahead.”
“Suit yourself.” Chen Yifeng shrugged and left.
As he looked around at the fully stocked shelves, Yan Wei couldn’t help but admire Pill Master Qiu’s skill and dedication in the art.
“I’ll work ten times harder...” Yan Wei thought.
Propping himself up on the counter with both arms and the book in his hand, he managed to guide customers to what they were looking for with his only voice as he read on.
Eventually, he heard a cluster of feet enter the shop with synchronized footsteps.
After a calm silence, a pleasant female voice warmed his ears. “Would you happen to know where any Blood Congealing Pills are, sir?”
“Left side, right shelf, second row from the top, third bottle from the right.” He flipped a page with his thumb and continued with his endeavors in medicine, not even looking up once in the process.
A snap was heard, then a set of eloquent footsteps followed Yan Wei’s previous directions to find exactly what they were looking for. “Impressive,” a young male scoffed.
“Too busy right now?” he asked derisively. “We can come back later, if it’s too inconvenient.”
A small clamor broke out between the male and female pair, then Yan Wei cleared his throat.
“It’s no trouble at all,” Yan Wei said in a carefree manner. “I’m just making the most of my time. If you need anything else, just ask.”
“Don’t act condescending with me!” he barked.
“I’m not being condescending, I’m just being practical,” Yan Wei replied. “I can talk to you without looking at you, but I need to see what I’m reading.”
“You...” His voice cracked time and time again as he tried to find a comeback. “Let’s go, there are other pill shops in the city.”
“But none of them are as nice as this one!” the female groaned. “You can go if you want, I’m staying.”
"I never would have thought the trash in this city would have such gall." With a harrumph, the young man stormed out, only leaving the girl, Yan Wei, and his book, which he still had yet to look up from.
Yan Wei flipped a page indifferently. “Is everyone from Fallen Heaven City as proud as him?”
“How did you know we were from Fallen Heaven City?” she asked in amazement.
“You just told me,” he teased. “Though, you don’t quite fit in here.”
“Neither do you,” she said. “Why do you wear a mask?”
“The same reason anyone wears a mask, there’s something that I don’t want people to see.” Yan Wei closed the book and looked up for the first time.
The girl—garbed in a long, flowing black dress hemmed with silver—radiated innocence and mischief, and could be considered above average in terms of appearance, enough to cause men with insufficient willpower to do everything they could to curry her favor.
“Now,” Yan Wei walked over to a shelf on the left side of the shop, “did you want those Blood Congealing Pills?”
However, before she could answer, an imposing pressure weighed down on the shop as a young man close to Yan Wei’s age swaggered in with guile.
“The place is looking good,” the young man snickered as the shelves rattled. “A little too good… You haven’t been reneging on our terms, have you?”
Advertisement
Wildling
Blurb: Silas--a scavenger living off the ruins of humanity--has spent his entire life fighting tooth and nail to provide for himself and his crew. But when a scavenging run goes awry and he's snatched up by an android patrol, he finds himself thrown into a cage and priced to sell as a pet. And when a suitor comes calling, he fears the worst: that he'll be turned into a Domestic, a human lapdog brainwashed into total obedience. Instead, he discovers an equally disturbing truth: that the creatures who stole his world have created a videogame the likes of which Earth has never seen; a sprawling, game-like theme park where humans are the Avatars and androids are the players who control them. And to make matters worse, his android guide is as hopeless as they come, having gotten all of her previous Avatars killed in record time. So if Silas wants to regain his freedom, he'll not only have to fight his way through a world that was specifically designed to murder him in brutal fashion--he'll also have to convince his android guide that he should be the one calling the shots. FAQS: Q: Who are you, handsome stranger? A: I'm Kyle Kirrin, the author of Shadeslinger, book 1 of The Ripple System, published by Portal Books, and I write crunchy LitRPG. Q: What is Wildling? And is it complete? A: Wildling is a crunchy LitRPG mash up of Fantasy and Science Fiction. And yup, Wildling is already complete at 64 chapters, or about 120,000 thousand words. You're looking at something like a third draft here--it's fairly polished, but it hasn't been picked over by a copy editor yet nor has my developmental editor seen it. Q: Upload schedule? A: 5 initial chapters today (2/15/2021) and one chapter a day for the next month. After that I'll probably slow down to 2 or 3 chapters a week until the story is complete. Q: How crunchy is it? A: It's pretty crunchy. I'd put it on the same tier as Ascend/The Land/RSSG, but it might be a bit crunchier than those three? Q: Is this the first book in a series or a web novel or what? And what are your plans for it? A: It's currently a standalone with series potential. Full disclosure: this story may head the way of my publisher eventually, but will be available on RR for quite a while no matter what. Likely several months after it's complete with plenty of warning before/if it's taken down. Q: What kind of build does the MC create? A: Sword and board! Q: Crafting? A: Plenty! Crafting isn't as center stage as it is in The Way of the Shaman, but it's close. Q: Base building? A: Two fully separate, distinct bases, both of which play a major role in the story. Q: VRMMO? Portal? Reincarnation or what? A: This one's a bit tricky. Basically an advanced race has created a game-like world that closely resembles a theme park. Think Westworld but with copious amounts of loot. And the MC has to fight his way through that to earn his freedom. Q: Permadeath? A: Nope! The MC gets 3 lives to play through the entirety of the game world, and death is extremely punishing, but not fatal. Q: Harem? Or romance? A: No and no. Q: Cursing? Blood? A: Quite a bit of cursing, yeah. There's blood, too, but it's not a gory book by any means. Q: How can I support? A: Instead of a Patreon/donations etc, I'd ask that you consider giving my debut LitRPG Shadeslinger a chance. It's free on Kindle Unlimited and the audio is already out narrated by Travis Baldree. It's an epic fantasy VRMMO where the main character gets 3 days of exclusive access to a new game plus a snarky, talking axe to guide him through it in exchange for agreeing to become the target of a serverwide manhunt once the Head Start period ends. Q: How's it similar to Wildling? And how's it different? A. The crunch level is very similar, but Shadeslinger is a much lighter, epic fantasy take on the genre. It's also VRMMO, but without any real world components aside from the first chapter. The MC is very different--he comes off as a bit of a jerk early on and can take a bit to warm up to, especially before his backstory is revealed--but he's also got a talking axe that constantly puts him in his place. Shadeslinger's a much more humorous story in general, and it's a great deal more polished as well. Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoy Wildling!
8 319The Preying City
The city calls for you. It spins a web around your vulnerable self. Lulls you into a cozy sleep and tightens its grip on you. There is NO escape from the city. The city of Kindlewich entices everyone with promises of riches and happiness. It harbors supernaturals with unimaginable powers while the masses remain ignorant. The strong prey on the weak and the weak exploit each other. The cover art is by Arnaud Imobersteg, a brilliant architecture visualizer. Please show him some love if you can. https://www.artstation.com/artwork/8xlvO
8 204Intertwined Destinies
Malak Elsan always thought he was ordinary. Along with his twin, he was raised by his loving parents and attended school with his friends. But when he turned eighteen, he crossed a man he had never met; yet a man who felt familiar. With danger approaching and memories regained, Malak will once again have to fight a thousand-year-old war alongside his beloved, in a world filled with bizarre creatures and magic. The story starts slowly and may seem plain, but I promise it'll get more interesting over time. The action, fantasy, and magic will be at the rendezvous!
8 193The Demon Lord and I
A world where different races coexist in peace and live in harmony. The humans,werebeasts,undines,elves,dwarves, and many other races.The peace lasted for hundreds of millennia till the GREAT WAR came. It's started with the Gods fighting over power then the world got affected. Many races started fighting with each other like elves and the dwarves, demons and heavenly beings, werebeasts fought each other because of their differences.Many died even the immortal gods got killed by some unknown forces. Then after 600 years all the races and the gods reconciled and have a truce. Still there are still races who still fought with each other.and the year now is 267 A.G.W (After Great War).Bare with me here I'm not good with english...this story is only a teaser(depends if someone want's me to continue this)
8 133Lethal Virtue
Grand Vilstine, the big city that has fallen down into practically anarchistic ruins, 2 detectives attempt to make the city civilians to be in a stabler than the one they are by solving the most important case of their lives, how the city turned into chaos.But within this city, lies powerful men,men with the self-proclaimed powers given upon them by a cooperation with domination in plan and they will get in their way of finding the truth and revealing it to the world about this city. New Name since October 26 2020 is: Lethal Virtue
8 136Rise of the demon god
«The trials ahead to prove my worth? I’ll crush them ! Enemies? I’ll slaughter them!» Waking up in a new body and a new world after dying on Earth, Long Chen embarks on a new journey in a world filled with gods and demons. A world where myriad of life forms exist and humans can cultivate and become immortals.Watch him rise to prominence with a supreme inheritance and his hard work as he slaughtered everyone who stood in his path. Watch His journey as he became known in the Universe as the Demon God, the ruler of death forcing the heavens to bow before him.Known as the second inheritor, what happened to the first one? Who does this legacy belongs to? What secrets is the universe hiding?
8 134