《The Blessed》System Update!...~
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( Tokyo, Japan )
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"Aaah.....F*ck... that might be the most part of my life that I don't want to experience again..even remember it, it so f*cking hurt....dammit system, is this your way of showing me your love? just to let you know, I'm not a f*cking masochist goddamit!"
Slowly standing up from the floor, Ray moves slowly back to the bed and lazily slam his body down, he started to feel his body if some of his body is still aching but to his surprise, he found nothing but instead he feels great like the extreme hell that he has been through earlier hasn't happened at all, he feels like his body is full of energy, like he can run for an hour and still not getting tired, suddenly he feels like something is weird in his whole body, he quickly stands up from the bed and touches his whole body.
" *tap,tap,tap* .... huh? oh my God."
He quickly runs to the bathroom and goes in front of the mirror, he suddenly removes his upper clothes and looks at his body.
" oh em gee.... look at that, my body changed, it even become much better, I mean it's not like it's not better before, but just look at those, this type of body is the one that every man wish to have, not that muscular and not too skinny, it's perfect hehe, damn system I take back everything I said earlier haha."
(A/N: it's like when Peter from Spider-Man, you know... the moment he wakes up in the day after he got bitten by the spider, he suddenly became ripped, it's like that.)
After a minute of happily admiring and staring at his own body inside the bathroom, he finally decided to come out.
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"mmm, I wonder how long I have been unconscious....*He looks at the clock*, half and an hour eh, good thing no one enters here while I'm unconscious or they would certainly freak out."
He walks back to the bed and sits.
"let's see..... I become strong physically that means my stats should have risen, let's see my system..."
'System'
*Blink*
[ Host, the activation of the blessings have been successful, and they are now completely fused at your body and in the system.]
[ because of a certain condition the system has been given an opportunity for an early update.]
[ Requesting Permission to Update the System.]
______[ Yes / No ]______
"heh, now you are asking me permission? where the hell did that 'yes or no' go earlier, why the f*ck it didn't show up eh? ...*sigh* Whatever, I wonder what would be the update...."
"Yes update it "
[ Permission Granted ]
[ Initiating Update Sequence....]
[ Requesting....]
[ Checking...]
[°°°]
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[✓]
[ Necessary Condition has been met.]
[ Request to Upgrade System 34758 has been granted ]
[ Starting...]
[✓]
[--1%]
(Updating....)
[ Estimated time 14:22:45 ]
" So it will be tomorrow huh, I wonder what would be the update, I guess....maybe, new features? yeah maybe that, *yawn* haysss, now what to do."
He stands up and walks to the window and pulls up the curtains to see the outside.
*shiik*
"...oh it's dark already, I didn't notice that... *sigh* so boring."
" ..... mmmm, why do I feel that I have forgotten something so important? ..... mmm what could it be?...mmm maybe something before the 'zap thing' happ-..."
" O_O "
"Oh sh*t, I forgot about the ****** Anime that I was supposed to watch back then, I'm so late at watching it now goddamit, f*ck that
'the zap' thing I almost completely forgot about it."
He grabbed a chair and take his smartphone and sit down near the window, he opens his phone and started to browse something in it.
*tap,tap,tap.....tap,tap,*
" damn! it's 10 episodes already?... oh ~ frick it's going to be a long night."
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