《Heavenly Paragon》chapter 4 - quasi low immortal grade
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For the pass hundred years in the high cloud city only few had been able to gain a high heaven grade fleshly body. Having a powerful body in such a remote place like the high cloud city is very rare thing and it is no surprise that everyone felt a sense of awe.
“This child shall be my disciple.” A middle age man spoke in a dignified tone wearing a silky white robe with sky blue outlines. Everyone look at the middle age man with envious eyes yet did not say any word for they know who's this person is.
“City lord I thought that you only visited due to your daughter but are you really want take one of our heavenly orchard institute student?!” said one of the teacher.
“hahaha of course but do not fret I am only choosing one and won't take more if another mid heaven grade fleshly body come.” He laugh as if It was a joke but to the teacher of heavenly orchard institute it was such big loss for them.
There are 3 grade that is known by the high cloud citizen namely common, earth and heaven then it is divided into low, middle and high grade.
There are rumor about higher grade but no one has able to see it because only people who have travelled to a higher sect would know.
The student who have finish their examination have began chatting.
“Lucky bastard, this chen fan is really amazing!”
“Dammit let me try again!!”
“Chen fan let me follow you!”
Many student have different reaction regarding such an event. Many felt envious, some tried retaking the examination and few admire this prodigy.
“Enough! YOU join the rest of the student who finish their examination!” shouted the vice principle as veins was popping on her face.
“Seem like you have to survive this day.”
“Z-zhang lin don't make such a terrifying joke!” sheng jian turn pale upon realizing that his big sis was really piss. His older sister's has short-temper and easily get mad at him. One time he made fun of his sister for being old yet not having any lover which made his sister so mad that he was left unconscious for the whole month. It was a terrifying nightmare.
“tehehe well its my turn wish me luck!”
As she press her snow white finger on the giant crystal and it began to glow brightly almost blinding everyone.
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“What the hell a..A Heaven high grade!”
The crowds hold their breathe after learning that this little girl's fleshly body is a heaven high grade one. The teacher gaze at the city lord and shook his head then everyone smile at each other.
“This young lady shall be my desciple!”
“No that child would be mine!”
Every teacher start fighting with each other to whoever get Zhang lin as a desciple. Chaos exudes but suddenly one of the teacher spoke stopping the other teachers.
“No she shall be my desciple!” said one of the female teacher wearing a red robe with glossy black hair.
“You lot cannot teach her properly since she's a woman, wouldn't it be better to be me?”
“Xun xaio you always get the best disciple why can't we get one?!”
“Tsk I do not care I am only thinking about the future of this child!” everyone was in silent and did not respond since they know that she was right because they have different method of teaching, it would only limit the child's ability.
“Zhang lin congratulations!” said sheng jian as he gave an applause.
“Sis congratulation!”
“Thanks elder brother and sheng jian!” said zhang lin as she approached his brother.
Everyone look at zhang lin with envious eyes.
“Tsk this bitch dare steal my moment!” said the arrogant brat that gain a heaven mid grade fleshly.
“Don't worry boss Fan we'll make sure to punish them later!”
As this was happening another student approached the giant crystal. He was wearing short orange clothing that was obviously cheap, his messy short orange hair with a single streak falling down between his face. He look like a poor beggar compare to everyone.
“isn't that lei zhou!?”
“hahaha he manage to join with such a POOR family!”
Lei zhou made bitter expression after hearing word of insult to his family. Lei Zhou family was the Silver Night Family that once a well known and respected family in High Cloud city but due their patriarch having been crippled after trying to breakthrough the earth condensing stage, their family was left with no powerful figure backing them up and betrayed and ignore by the family that they once help.
The only reason he was able to enter Heavenly Orchard institute was due getting help of the heavenly Dragon family and red jade wing family.
Seeing Lei Zhou expression sheng jian and his friends began to shout.
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“Lei you could do this!”
“Even if you get common grade we will still be here for you!”
“Yeah don't worry! me, Zhang Lin and Zhang Wei will be here for you!”
With the support of his friends he was able to muster the courage to touch the giant crystal then it shone into a bright yellow light everyone hold their breathe as the scene unfolds.
“W-whats going on!”
“Am I dreaming, another high heaven grade fleshly body!?”
“The future of high cloud city seem going to have big change hahaha!”
This moment was breathtaking since the history of High cloud city, it had never had much Heaven high grade only gaining few mid grade and one high grade for thousands of years.
The city lord did not faze since he had chosen Chen Fan due to his arrogant personality which he wishes to change not bacause he had heaven mid grade fleshly body.
“Hahaha congratulations Lei Zhou seem like we will be holding banquet later!” Zhang wei laugh loudly making every other student piss especially the group of chen fan.
“Once we are in heavenly orchard institute, I swear I'll make you regret for stealing my spotlight!”
After Zhang lin, chen fan and lei zhou only 7 student remain that hasn't touch the giant crystal.
“Well its my turn now.” Said zhang wei as he approached the giant crystal. It gave a bright light giving yellow green color.
“Hmm Compare to the other two this fellow having a quasi low Heaven grade is not bad” said of the teacher.
After the spectacle earlier no body was surprise anymore For seeing a heaven grade.
“Holy crap you guys are really terrifying!” said sheng jian seeing his friend gaining such a wonderful fleshly body. Rather being envious at them, he couldn't help but be proud since they were his friend including lei Zhou.
They were really extremely happy since they would become very powerful in the future.
Time passes and the rest of the student gain only earth mid grade body. Only two student remain and this was sheng Jian and a young girl. She was extremely beautiful with snow white skin and glossy white long hair that reaches her back wearing a white robe with violent outline.
Sheng jian stare at her with amazement, as well as the everyone including the female students.
“Hahaha Make your father proud!!” said the city lord. The young girl was the child of the Jade flame family, the family that rule the high cloud city for generations helping to defend the city from monster beast race that run rampant outside the wall.
“haaa…father..” she sign of embarrassment even though as the daughter of the city lord she would some tolerance but because her father pretty much annoyed her the whole year before the examination. No could blame her if they know her circumstances.
As she touch the giant crystal, it gave dim glow of color red. Every teacher was speechless but the student couldn't help but scratch their head in confusion.
“What grade is that?”
“it's so dim it probably a low common grade."
Everyone start gossiping at each other giving their opinion to what grade the city lord gain. Everyone was ignorant on how to differentiate the grade of a fleshly body.
“F-For the whole history of high cloud city this is the first time I see a quasi low immortal grade!” the whole grand hall was quiet then burst into a deafening sound.
“Amazing a quasi low immortal grade!”
“Wait what did you say!”
Every teacher was in disarray, for the longest time of high cloud city there hasn't been one person who have gain a quasi low immortal grade fleshly body.
“As I expected of my daughter, you really are your father's child!” shouted the city lord while laughing.
“stupid father!” as she said this word she looks at sheng jian as he began approaching the giant crystal.
“Good luck boy, hope you get a high grade!”
“Uhmm a-ah t-thank you!” sheng jian could help but be flustered since he was growing boy and a beautiful lady gave him motivation. Everyone gave death glare at sheng jian as if saying "Your dead."
“Stupid jian!” said zhang lin as she punch jian in the face.
“Aw! What did you do that for!”
“N-nothing!”
“Well I'll be on my way.” As the daughter of the city lord walk pass she hear every student shouting.
“Goddess xaio lan!”
“Goddess xaio lan we love you!”
Loud scream echoed throughout the grand hall. Every student was in disarray but was immediately stop by city lord.
“You lot do not deserve my daughter!” gaving death glare at each and every student.
Finally after incense time have pass everyone has settled down and now it's sheng jian turn
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