《Shadow- the solo sword master》same for the general forum the reply to the review
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seeing how i cant click on you this is my reply to his so called review
Everyone is entitled to their own opinion yes, so i wont bash you for the rating you gave my story but let me clear some issues that i find highly offensive.
IN NO WAY WOULD I EVER RATE MY OWN FICTION AND SHAME ON YOU FOR SUGGESTING THAT, PEOPLE HAVE THEIR PRINCIPLES AND I HAVE MINE. i would report you for that statement alone of a false accusation just because you don't like my story that's fine however you have no right to accuse someone with no evidence.
second thing i have always put in my descriptions about my writing of HOW ITS FIRST's drafts only and THAT IT MAY BE BAD WRITING AS ITS WRITE AS I GO. YOU CHOSE TO CLICK ON IT NOT ME SO YOU CAN ONLY BLAME YOURSELF FOR THAT.
I am allowed to upload what i want to upload this is my STORY NOT YOURS, beside at least i don't split it into part 1, etc.
although you say i have horrible spelling all my words seem to make sense? hmm who has the horrible spelling? SPELLING ISN'T GRAMMAR ITS THE WORDS
To begin with your review isn't even a proper review you just state stuff without evidence to back things up.
Yes i have always stated my writing is bad HOWEVER you have the nerve to say i rigged the rating i will take this as malicious intent and will report you
I JUST NOTICED THAT YOU CANT RATE YOUR OWN FICTION AT ALL SO GO LEARN HOW THE SYSTEM WORKS FIRST BEFORE ACCUSATIONS.
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