《Darkness Of Hell》War Of Eternity
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God created a soul, an immortal being without any shape and size; this being is free from every kind of desire. Pure like a newborn. Everywhere used to be heaven. But without purpose and meaning, this soul started to feel lost. A great depression begins.
Soon the heavenly voices started to fall silent. No one finds any reason to do anything, to wake up from their places, to move. They have no hunger, no desire and not any kind of need. What will they live for then?
Time passed, and God started feeling worried about his creations. They started to fall into deep sleep without any need to wake up, millions of years passed like that. Into sleep.
Finally, God came up with an idea. The idea of creating mortal beings. So he created mortal beings from five elements, earth, water, fire, air and space.
This time he gives the shape and size to this mortal being. He created hundreds, then thousands, then millions, types of being. He was so lost in his creation that he almost forgot everything and kept on creating more and more beings. He finally ends up creating millions of species.
Now he integrated this immortal being into this mortal form. And as they integrate into each other, they develop desires and needs. Which started to give them purpose and meaning.
God wanted every soul to explore his all mortal creation. One by one. So to ensure that he created death, a force of nature that will eventually decompose every mortal being. And free soul to walk towards the next creation.
But souls started to develop an illusion between them and their mortal forms. They started getting attached to it, they started recognising themselves as a mortal being.
And this illusion turns into emotions that are started to hold them back to their mortal self. Fear of death, anger and greed. They started to live into this emotional high, in pursuit of pleasure.
With this fear, anger and greed this soul started to corrupt which makes death powerful.
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The more souls corrupt with these emotions the more control death has over them, which makes death powerful. So death starts intentionally corrupting more and more souls so it can control them.
God was worried that death might end up taking all of his creation from him. So God sent his beloved angel Lucifer to fight with death. Lucifer travels across heaven into the mortal world. Where death has created his territory into a mortal being.
He saw that it lives in their fears and anger. And it has become a part of themselves so much that they have no existence without it. Killing death means killing mortal beings, and without death, there will be no balance.
A long war began between death and Lucifer. Which they fought for years. But nothing came out of it. Lucifer soon realised that God didn't send him to kill death but keep fighting this war for eternity.
Lucifer used all of his power and trapped death at the end of the universe and created hell out of it. But to keep death that way he must be there to control it. So Lucifer got trapped inside hell for eternity to keep balance in the universe.
And hell becomes a place for an immortal being who is trapped inside the mortal illusion of death. They are meant to suffer until they are free from this illusion and return to heaven as pure beings.
Anyone who dies with anger, greed, lust, jealousy or any kind of negative emotions in them gets born into hell. And they get punished according to their attachment with their mortal self until they decide to release themselves.
John was a good man and had a compassionate heart. He was empathetic towards others' pain. And because of that he usually gets into unnecessary trouble.
He graduated from the top college in the country and got placed into a very good company with a great package. Everything was good, but one day when he was returning from his work at midnight.
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The road was mostly empty with only a few night rovers that could be seen on the street. John was driving his car, listening to the music on his music system, it was his daily ritual while returning from the office.
Suddenly he saw three men dragging a girl into the bushes. The girl was shouting for help but there was no one to help except John. He stops his car, men have already dragged her into the bushes beside the road. He ran behind them and shouted to stop them. As they saw John they got alerted, and one of them comes forward and said,
"Hey, mind your business and get the fuck out of here". The man looks like a goon, they all have that look on their faces the kind of look criminals have.
"Listen, guys, let the girl go, here! take my wallet, I have enough money in it", John said while removing his wallet from his pocket and showing them the money inside it.
They kept looking at him for a while, John could see the greed in their eyes. They communicate with each other through their eyes. And to encourage them, John throw his wallet towards them, and said,
" Take it guys, it's a lot. You can have it all. Just let the girl go, and we will be on our way".
The man steps his foot forward and picks up the wallet. The girl was on her knees and one of them was holding her hair, the other one was standing beside her.
The man checked cash in the wallet and his eyes glittered with the fantasies that he was going to buy with all that money. He showed it to the people behind him. They again communicate with their eyes.
And suddenly the man who was holding the wallet kept it in his pocket and take out a knife, and showing it to John he said,
"With all that money we promise you that, we will be gentle with her".
John got very angry, and he stepped forward. But the man waved a knife to keep John away. And the man who was holding a girl with her hair pulled her up and started tearing her clothes.
John couldn't resist and walked forward and punched down the man who was holding the knife. He fell to the ground and the knife fell off his hand. John ran towards the knife and picked it up, and showed it to the man who had almost torn down the girl's top. She was resisting and slapping the man with her hand.
Man lost her grip on the girl and the girl started running towards John, she was trying to cover her upper body with her torn clothes. John took out his jacket and gave it to the girl, and the girl wore his jacket with shivering hands.
John was shaking with anger, he wanted to punish these people for what they did to this poor girl. He moves ahead and slaps the man who tore her clothes. The man starts staring at John with angry eyes,
"What are you staring at, you piece of shit?"John shouted looking at the man.
The first man was on the ground, his nose was bleeding with the punch. He checked his blood with his hand, he felt very angry looking at himself bleeding. He kept lying on the ground pretending to be unconscious.
John took a look at him and thought that he might be unconscious. The girl was shivering, John spits his anger looking at the girl's condition and starts walking along with her while keeps showing the knife to them. He started walking towards the car, and he was about to cross the first man who was unconscious on the ground.
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