《Demonic Descent》Chapter: 3 Adone
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Outer Space
An asteroid was passing by Earth, but it suddenly changed its trajectory and headed towards Earth. The size of the asteroid was about the size of a small coffee table, small enough that it was not noticed by the scientists on Earth.
The stones and ice that made up almost all of the asteroids were burned up in the atmosphere due to friction only to reveal a black crystal ball the size of a basketball. Generally, even the strongest asteroid of such a small size would burn up completely in the atmosphere but this black crystal ball didn't even turn red from the high temperature due to friction.
Passing through the upper part of the atmosphere, it suddenly accelerated. It was headed towards the Andes Mountain range on the continent of South America.
{NOTE- I previously typed North instead of South America} ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Kael's rage only grew greater and greater as he watched the proceedings of the wedding of his girlfriend Sophia and Louise. Unable to do anything to stop the proceedings, he just stayed there as he sobbed silently while praying for Louise to drop dead.
Just as the TV the scene showed Louise, as he was waiting for his bride at the altar while the guests had already taken their seats, an asteroid came crashing down on Kael, demolishing the roof of the building he was imprisoned in.
Before guards could react to the asteroid impact, tremors caused by the crash of the asteroid caused an avalanche that resulted in the whole building being covered up in the snow, sealing Kael and guards in an icy coffin.
Kael woke up from an intolerable pain in his chest, only to find himself in an empty throne room. When he looked down, he saw his chest which had a black crystal ball lodged in, then he slowly remembered about the asteroid that came crashing down.
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'At last, I can rest in peace now but Sophia would have to suffer because I was not strong enough to protect her, nor was I rich enough to be with her with the blessing of her parents. I wasn't even able to take care of my family…..'
While he was dwelling on the regrets of his life, he saw a human-like figure appear out of thin air and stand in front of him, he couldn't really distinguish the silhouette's face, it seemed blurry, but maybe it was him being dizzy at his death bed and he just couldn't see right, after all, there was a motherfucking crystal ball lodged in his chest, and he could barely stay conscious.
"Welcome to my Kingdom, as per your prayer we{1} brought you here, to enable you to take revenge and do much more and trust me when we say much more, it truly means much more" said the man, as he sat on the throne.
Kael Strider thought that he was hallucinating, after all, how could this be possible? But this man kept talking to him emotionlessly.
"You are not hallucinating, all of this is real" the man replied in his same emotionless voice, implying that he could read his thoughts.
"Are you a God?" Kael asked as he looked at the man.
"No, I am still far from becoming a God but I am still capable of helping you that is if you are willing to pay the price" he replied.
Due to immense pain in his chest, Kael was unable to reply but he still looked straight at the man, signifying his attention towards this man's words.
The man continued, "The price is your humanity and your future. We will grant you unimaginable strength but you have to fulfill our desire…"
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"I… I wi… will do anything …. as long as you give strength to kill that bastard and destroy everything he loved" Kael growled slowly while bearing the pain.
The man smiled as he approached him and extended his hand, suddenly, a blob of crimson red substance with purple lines in it appeared in his hand, he then said
"With our blood essence we will to give you a new life as a Chaos Demon, ruling over all as one of our descendent" and touched his chest where the black crystal ball was lodged with his palm, and just like that, Kael's chest returned to normal.
He didn't know how to describe it, but the crystal ball melted and merged with his chest along with the crimson red blob.
He felt no pain whatsoever throughout the entire process. Only a faint tattoo of the black sun with a face in it could be seen where the black crystal ball was lodged before.
"We guess you can call it some form of rebirth and, being the generous person that we are, we'll let you keep your bloodline memory of the Chaos Ancestors.
However, nothing is free in this life, as a chaos demon, you must bear some responsibilities as well"
Kael stood there dazed for a second before looking at the man in front of him in disbelief. "What are you? And what did you do to me?" Kael asked after some time.
"Hahaha… you finally notice ehh? Good, good I am Adone, the Imperial Chaos Demon" said the man.
"No need to get anxious, I just said it, I'm Adone the Imperial Chaos Demon, I'm a Chaos Demon from the royal family of Chaos Empire, it's complicated to explain and as we don't have all the time in the world so we will let you see for yourself"
Before Kael could try to comprehend the whole demon thing Adone snapped his fingers and the entirety of the throne was replaced by a similar throne room but this throne room looked clean and majestic while the previous one was dilapidated.
A man with shoulder-length black hair with red hue on the ends and purple eyes with looks that were better than even the best lady killer, he sat on the throne giving majestic feeling as if he was the ruler of all that land eyes could see, but there was a problem with his looks and the problem was that there were two dark red horns on his head.
"He is my son," Adone said as he looked at the man on the throne solemnly as he stood beside Kael.
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