《The Second Divine》3)Its a ROMCOM or not! (pt3)
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"this probably planet promotes slavery" ryuga
"thats horrible.. ryuga do something" yuki
"dont worry unlike humans slaves here are voluntary. they become slaves to feed themselves afford a place to live and provide for their young ones, just like jobs and professions work on earth"
"thank you mr. sandman" leona
"yeah thanks" ryuga
"thank you.." yuki
"by the way ryuga why is everyone speaking in english? shouldnt aliens have their own languages"
"everyone is speaking non-human languages its just i tampered with your brain to make you understand them.. i dont want to translate everything"
"YOU DID WHHAA? DONT MESS WITH MY HEAD WITHOUT ASKING FIRST"
"want me to change it back?"
"*sigh* no..."
"sorry to butt in, in your romantic moment but we have something to do" leona
"want me to teleport us there?"
"NO!! you will just make a bigger mess" -yuki and leona
*whispers to himself* "it only happened once"
while travelling a cowboy with an appearance similar to a buff human made out of pure rocks riding a rock bumps into yuki who gets knocked out cold
"APOLOGISE.. FLESH SCUM"
"apologise?" ryuga
"flesh scum?!!"
says leona right before transforming into a giant cat
"Wise fleshlings ehh? think your so tough just cause you can grow ehh? well here"
the rockman says as he dives into the earth. moments later he resurfaces with a giant piece of rock as big as a two story building which he picks up with one hand and slams into himself. a bright light shines as he grows into the same size as leona
"not so tough now are you fleshling. still think you can challenge a stoneoid?"
"slow down there stoneoid, we only want to pass"
"pass after bumping into me? ill turn you all into mince meat. we stoneoids are as sturdy as a planet and the only beings higher than us are metaloids, diamondlings, radioactives and elemental gods"
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"thats a big list you got there" leona while laughing
"laugh this off"
says the stoneoid as he jumps into space. a moment later a giant meteor appears to be falling towards leona
"this has gone too far"
ryuga says as he wakes up yuki with his divine thought and holds his hand out. just as he hilds his hand out a small completely black, blacker than a blackhole square object the size of a pebble appears in his hand which he hurls at the meteor. after hitting the meteor it turns into a giant circle destroying the meteor and sucking in the remains leaving only a few rocks which crash into the earth (yuki was watching this)
"did i end up in heaven?"
"havent made one yet."
"iam alive? ryuga explain whats going on"
"*stuff stuff stuff stuff*"
"ok. so wheres the jerk who bumped into me?"
leona returns to her normal size feeling that she could do anything even if she tried and repeats the question yuki posed. while they are talking a small remain of the meteor starts moving
"fleshlings. we will settle this later. it looks like one of the radioactives is here. that black strange phenomenon was clearly caused by a radioactive.i the rock king will deal with you later"
"rock king? great take us to your civilization" leona
"you dare order me around? i dont have time for this the radioactives will have my head if i dont leave the area"
"why?"
"you dont know? a lesser being cannot be in the same area as a higher being unless they wish to become a slave or underling and i am a king so i cannot become either of them"
"dont know about a radioactive but this guy here was the one who destroyed the meteor which iam guessing was you?"
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"a fleshling? impossible dont insult my intelligence."
"ryuga looks like this is the only sure way to get to the nearest civilization"
"or know where we are" leona added
"fine" said ryuga as he recreated the blackmaterial and threw it into space
"you really did destroy me fleshling. what is your name?"
"ryuga"
"hey ryuga hurry up i feel like iam being watched"
"probably on some anime"
"ani- what?" leona/yuki
"2D universe... multiple worlds... anime adaptations. this universe is a subordinate universe and probably depends our universe to exist complicated stuff lets skip it"
the stoneoid looked confused but thought of it as flesh gibberish
"ok.. wait what if i go to the toilet or take a bath?" leona
"probably wont be shown on tele. besides your 2D right now, does it matter?" ryuga
"mr. rock what is the name of this planet?"
"elementorian"
"elementorian?"
"its named after the elemental gods. quickly ryuga and his slaves we must go to my hometown"
"slaves?!!!" yuki/leona
"they are more like subordinates"
"subordinates!!!?"
"ok fine... friends + lecher"
"lecher?!!!" leona
"just joking"
a dimensional pocket opens up revealing a small cricket which starts making its sounds
"hey stoneoid. whats the cordinates?"
" 321 , 2938 "
"longitutes/latitute?"
"yes."
"hey human why dont we just teleport out now that we know where we are? the quicker i deliver your to Lord Arneus" leona
"so you are a human? i have heard of your petty race. but you donnot seem petty at all"
"iam special lets leave it at that" ryuga
"mr.rock you seem like you want us to help you with something" yuki
"yes i do. human?"
"yes iam a human too"
"and you tailed fleshling"
"a catlion"
"so the only one here who is stronger than me is ryuga."
looking pleased the stoneoid said
"hey stoneoid what it your name?"
"Arneus"
"Arneus? what a coincidence we are looking for a catlion named Arneus"
"what do you need help with rock?" leona
"i want to overthrow the elementals and their cruel reign"
"let me guess you want their power?" ryuga
"yes."
"i think you would get along nicely with the Arneus we are looking for" yuki
"i donnot know of the Arneus you speak of but my cause is just. the elemental gods rule over us all with tyranny and punish all those who defy the system"
"well we can talk about it when we get there. lets go"
and so they left for the city of rock on a rock with a rock to help a rock
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