《The Immortalai》The Beginning Of A Legend
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It's been a few day since the Harraele brothers and their people landed on their new land and made their new city for their people. Reinlas is overlooking their city from a nearby hill talking to his brother.
"I'm glad we've managed to do this for them brother" Reinlas says
"Me too and I heard you saved someone from the mistake I made a few years back" Farenhale says jokingly
"Yes I did but I have a question for you brother have you sensed anything off since we got here?" Reinlas asks
"No, what do you mean?" Farenhale asked slightly worried
"I don't know it's just a feeling I guess but it still worries me enough to want to start training guards and get a mine up and running so we can get all the necessary tools, weapons and armour for the future" Reinlas says
"Even if you didn't have this feeling we'd need to do this eventually so sooner rather than later right?" Farenhale says
Both the brothers agree so they call together anyone who wants to help in mining, guarding and blacksmiths as well as the magic users they have.
"To keep us safe from whatever is out there we need guards and to have guards we need training and the proper armour and weapons and for that we need the metal and a good arm and mind to forge that metal into what's needed that why you have all been asked here to defend our home" Reinlas says
Linra is in this crowd
"Why are the magic users here then?" She asks
"The magic users are here because they already have a weapon and armour their own magic is that weapon and armour this is why you are here to defend our home while we train more people to be guards and until we can use our own forged weapons and armour from real metal." Reinlas responds
"If the miners will follow me as well as a few magic users we can start up a mine in the nearby mountains and I'm choosing there because me and my brother both sense a great deal of materials under the earth there" Farenhale says
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Farenhale and the magic users start transporting the miners to the locations by speeding them there with there magic.
"Blacksmiths I have people setting areas where your blacksmith shops could be but if you want them moved they will abide by it as I told them to only build it when you have confirmed that is where you want it to be they are just south of here" Reinlas says
The blacksmiths leave but now all that is left is some of the magic users and the people who want to be guards. Reinlas tell them to follow him to a nearby field but when they arrive he tell them they will be training on how to fight with weapons using magically made weapons they he and the magic user can made but only for a limited time. Reinlas creates a sword with his magic and hands a villager the blade and summons another to use himself. The Villagers voice concerns about attacking the man who is going to be their king but Reinlas tells them.
"It is perfectly fine it is so you can all practice and the blades wont even cut me it is simply for practice"
This quells the villagers fear of hurting him and Reinlas tell them to strike at him and the other magic users but with every clash of the blades the villagers fall from leaving their guard open or from being disarmed after a blade lock. Each time the villagers learn a little more and apply what they learned to the next strike but its not enough yet to beat them as the blades are about to clash again they disappear.
"That is all for today that used much power but you all did well today you kept up and never gave up even when your strike could've failed, you all followed through and sometimes it did fail yes but that is a kind off risk you need to take so I'd say you are all well on your way so far" Reinlas says to them cheerful and proud
He bids them farewell as they head back to the village and he heads to the mines he sees some of the miners cart the iron and other such metals to be used to the blacksmiths and offers to help them bring it back but they refuse citing that he's done much for them already and that makes him feel happy that they think that when he feels can still do a lot more. He arrives at the mine and sees guards on duty one of them being Linra he greets her.
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"Good to see you guarding the mine Linra" Reinlas says
"I didn't think you'd remember my name" Linra says back
"I try to remember everyone's names especially those who are really helping such as yourself" Reinlas says proud
"Why thank you but I'm not doing much I'm just helping wherever I can* Linra says
"And that's how you help so much" Reinlas says turning to leave
He goes to speak with his brother to check on how things are going here and sees the miners hard at work with the help of some of the magic users to be able to make things go faster including moving boulders out of the way. Farenhale see his brother and comes over to greet him.
"Brother! It's good to see you here but what are you doing here so soon?" Farenhale asked
"Well you know the weapons we can summon last for as long as our own pool of magic hold out so before complately losing it we ended the training and by ended I mean the sword disappeared mid-strike. So after that I came here to check on how things were here but clearly everything is fine" Reinlas says
"Yeah we were right about the materials underneath this place its perfect" Farenhale says
In Reinlas' mind his magic is telling him something it's that same off feeling he felt before and he tries to forget it until he can feel the Wooden beams in the mine thats keeping the mine from collapsing move and suddenly Reinlas is heading into the mine as it starts collapsing he used all that's left oif his magic to hold it up.
"ALL OF YOU GET OUT NOW!" Reinlas shouts to all of the miners
All the miners start running out of the mine as i slowly starts coming down more and more due to Reinlas not having enough magic.
"ALL.. OF THE MAGIC USERS.. OUT THERE. HOLD. IT. UP!" Reinlas shouts
The magic using guards use thre own magic to hold up the mine while the rest of the miners get out and finally Reinlas gets out. Farenhale runs over to Reinlas who narrowly escaped the collapse.
"Brother are you alright?!" Farenhale asked panicked
Reinlas coughs but sits up
"Argh those wooden beams weren't placed and secured correctly Is everyone safe and unharmed?" Reinlas asked in a pained voice
While Farenhale checks on everyone Reinlas sits there more concerned about everyone else than himself.
A few days later...
Reinlas is talking to the miners and guards who were at the mines about constructing the mines properly so that no other accident like this one happens he also then goes to his brother.
"That accident could have ended quite a few lives I'm just glad I sensed it" Reinlas says
"You can say that again I am such an idiot for not noticing it wasn't constructed properly if it wasn't for you checking on us they might very well be dead" Farenhale says in an angered voice
"It's not your fault even i hadn't known till I sensed it so so not blame yourself brother" Reinlas says
They both know this is something to learn from so they leave it there. Reinlas now sure they will take the reconstruction seriously goes to the blacksmiths to check on them and see about getting some armour made. He walks into blacksmith district and asks the best smith there a man named Cykart and asks him to make a suit of armour for him.
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