《Soul Blood (*On Hold*)》Twenty-Four: The Four Laws of Life
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"There are Four Sacred Festivals in the East, each representing one of the Four Laws of Life. First, the Law of Equals which is celebrated in Spring with the Festival of Birth. It symbolises that all are born equal, and that new life is something to be celebrated as an indication of a flourishing people. On the day of the Festival, everyone is required to wear white to symbolise a blank slate. Something untainted and uninfluenced and ready to take its first steps into the world.
"The Second Law is the Law of Survival, which is celebrated in the Summer with the Great Hunting Festival. The Festival is a week-long, and is often acknowledged as a coming-of-age rite. Those young men and women between the ages of 12 and 15 are sent into the wilderness with but the clothes on their back for one week. This trial is their chance to connect with the Great Mother all on their own, and to acknowledge her teachings as they were meant to be taught. That all things have their own methods of survival".
"Surely this would endanger the children," Isiah frowned.
"Of course it does," Eloise replied, "That is the point. Every being born has a purpose, and if that purpose is not to survive the Festival, then they will not. Death is just another part of Life. It is tragic when someone you love does not pass the trials, but it was their path, and they will begin their journey anew soon enough".
Many in Peter's party looked horrified. Sure, they worshiped the God of War, but one would never encourage a child to take part in such a barbaric custom. Still, Eloise was not finished with her explanation, and she continued.
"The Third Law is the Law of Change, this is what we are Celebrating now in the Festival of Dancing Leaves," Eloise continued, "It teaches us that our paths are never a straight line. That Life is ever-changing and that we must adapt in order to survive".
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Peter turned to Eloise, "So you believe that the Caramorts have not failed?"
Eloise smiled, acknowledging Peter's ability to observe this, "Saorise was the one who led us into negotiations. Who acknowledged the change and adapted to it the fastest. We may be reluctant after the many thousands of years we have been on our own, but if this is what the Great Mother has in store for us, then we will see where it leads us".
Peter turned back to where Saorise and her brother were finishing their dance, hugging each other and celebrating with those around them joyously.
"That does not explain the lack of black," Lucas reminded them.
"The Fourth Law is the Law of Death," Eloise continued, "All things must die just as all things live. Some for longer than others, but it is their fate. Even for Gods".
The Wendolan party flinched back at such sacrilegious words.
"And Black is what you wear when somebody dies?" asked Peter in the silence.
"If we have a funeral, yes, we do where black, but only for one day and night," Eloise spoke, "It is not until the Festival of Past Lives that we truly mourn. For the three months between the Festival of Past Lives and the Festival of Birth, three colours are worn in order. For the first month, black to symbolise mourning for the lost and acknowledgement of the Fourth Law. For the Second, we wear a dark grey to symbolise that the souls of those lost may be judged and weighed and tested in order to move on. The third month it is a much lighter grey, and this colour symbolises a soul's right to experience the world anew in whatever form that is decided upon".
"That is why you wear white for the Festival of Birth," Peter ascertained.
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"Yes," Eloise nodded, "So I hope now you see why showing up in mourning clothes for a Festival where we are celebrating change is such a disrespectful thing. Not only was it disrespectful, you could have tainted the hope my people have for you as our future. To bring death when we are trying so hard to accept our new way of life...I truly do hope you will be able to redeem yourself from this".
"It does seem necessary," Peter agreed, "I apologise for my arrogance and ignorance".
Eloise nodded in acknowledgement, "I should hope so, because you should be more than aware that if you marry Easterners, the children from those unions would be expected by their mothers and Eastern Families to participate in those same festivals I have spoken of".
Peter's gaze snapped to Eloise seriously, "You would put your own children through such..."
Eloise turned to look back at him with a sharp question, "Barbaric customs? That is what you were going to say, wasn't it?" When Peter closed his mouth and gave no reply, Eloise simply smiled, "We may send them in without anything but the clothes on their back, Peter, but we do not send them in unprepared. Any parent that sends a child into the Great Hunt that doesn't know how to make their own bow and light their own fire and hunt their own food has failed as a parent and their souls will be weighed heavily in death. You may still see it as barbaric even knowing that, but I think it is barbaric to ask a child to become an adult when they know little to nothing of the cruelties and challenges life can bestow. Those you marry from the East will all feel the same. In Wendolan, we may not have the authority to force a Prince or Princess to take on the East's trials, but that does not mean we will not feel obligated to prepare them for it. And when that child becomes of age and has not gone through the trials...well, it will be worth mourning indeed to see that piece of life so carefully nurtured be snuffed out so brutally".
Eloise turned to Peter and nodded, "Now that you're informed, I think I'll return to the Festival now. It's looking like it will be my last so I should enjoy it".
Peter frowned, "You are going to accept?"
Eloise raised an eyebrow, "The fact that you look so surprised means you have acknowledged your wrongdoing. Besides, I fear that if I don't the East will be in quite the bad situation. After all, none of the other women who originally volunteered look to be interested in the offer anymore".
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2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. 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