《Raven's Tale》Chapter 2 - Small Village
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There was young boy with pale white skin and illustrious black hair with beautiful black eyes swing a short sword with all his strength in practice. Before a young beauty with beautiful glossy brown hair and eyes as blue as the great sea interrupts him by calling out.
"Raven It's Lunch time".
15 had years passed.In this past 15 years,with Stan and Maria taking care of raven, he had grown steadily and could now understand the reality of the place he had been reincarnated in. The people here in the village he lived was very small but peaceful, even knowing that that he still trained, he already had experience in swordsmanship from his past life experiences, with that he only needed to train his body to get stronger.
This village was called Morde was part of the kingdom of Kadrum. Kadrum is located in the continent of Dhados and The kingdom of the kandrum is the most influential one in the continent. Its capital Kao is the centre of continent and where most of the important people, warriors and merchants meet.
Raven was eating his lunch with Yaira sat next to him,they had grown very fond of each other they slept in the same room,they had a very good relationship, they understood each other very well. his lunch was a sandwich with lettuce and cooked chicken fillet.
"How is lunch?"
"I made it today how is it!?"Yaira said with an expectant look on her face.
"Good like always" Raven replied.
"Thank you" Yaira replied shyly while twirling around with her fingers.
Finishing his lunch Raven stood up.
"Well now lets run for a bit Yaira" raven said as he offered her a hand.
"You never stop do you" she answers as she takes my hand and smiles.
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while taking a short run through the outskirts of the village there is small lake that people sometimes come fishing.The lake at sunset the clear water reflects a beautiful sight to behold and radiates a feeling that soothes you. Raven and Yaira watch that scenery during their daily exercise run.
Raven stops to admire the scene
"Beautiful isn’t it Yaira?"
"Yes it is Raven."
With that they both run home.
before going to sleep Raven ponders I will have to leave this place otherwise i won't be able to see this world I been reborn into.
Yaira noticing his worried face asks
"What are thinking of?"
"Nothing let’s just sleep."
"If you say so" Yaira replies with subtle hint of doubt
Another peaceful day passes by.
Raven would wake up just before dawn to train,he felt he needed more strength than ever before to survive in this world, he didn't want to die like he did on his past life keeping that in mind he strived to become the strongest he could become. The results of the training were still to be tested.
with the scorching sun high up on the sky raven was finishing his training before lunch.
Yaira trained with Raven until just before lunch she would go home and fix a meal for them,
"Lunch is here Raven". Yaira shouted to raven while holding up two sandwiches
"Yay i am finished for today" Raven said while taking his sandwich
They sat down on the shade of an big old tree with the warm breeze blowing,it was the perfect place for eating lunch with the peaceful mood, Raven and Yaira took a second to admire the old tree before starting to eat.
Yaira and Raven were eating wholeheartedly the sandwiches that where there disappeared in a flash.
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"Are we going home already?" Yaira says while still chewing
"No I am going somewhere else first you can go home" Raven says in a serious tone
"W-where..?"
"I am going deep in the forest to test my strength."
"Isn’t that place dangerous, mother said we should stay always from there."
"That why i am going there."
"w-what if we get hurt?" she mumbled.
"Well then you can stay" Raven replied as he walked away.
"I WILL GO DON'T LEAVE ME BEHIND!" she yelled and ran to catch up to him.
Entering the forest it was a dense forest almost no light went through and reached to the floor.
The atmosphere in the forest gave a eery feeling aside from the leaves rustling there was no sound.
Raven knew this place was dangerous so he was at full alert.
"Yaira stay close to me!"
"O-okay" she uttered
that when it they saw it was a huge black bear with it razor sharp claws and red eyes glaring at them.
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