《Major Naird's Fantasy》A Poll and Some Thoughts
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Heya, fuss here.
I'll be honest with y'all, this story is currently a steaming pile of unplanned, rough-around-every-edge shit. I am not at all happy with the way this story has turned out, and I'm finding it harder and harder to continue on with this book's writing.
Although I am still able to continue writing this at a rate of one chapter per day, I do not feel as though this is something I want to continue. As such, I'd like to ask for your opinion on the matter.
I'm currently planning on rewriting this story and fleshing it out with a well-built world and a planned narrative, and hopefully some better characters. Please give me any and all thoughts or feedback you can provide in the comments.
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The Fallen
Wishing to back out of her suicide attempt only after she hit the ground, the fallen human finds that she is unable to move. When a voice offers to save her for a price, she is too terrified of the darkness to do anything but accept. At first the voice seems helpful, promising to guide her out of the Underground so that she can see the sun again. But as time goes on and her control over her own body begins to slip away, she is forced to face the horrible truth of what she has allowed herself to become. Now she seeks the answer to but one question: can a soulless person save the timeline from shattering?
8 90DK (Dropped)
The story of someone named DK. PS: Feel free to inform me of any mistakes, english is not my mother tongue.
8 76Totentanz
The story of an arrogant teacher, an unwanted pupil, a lie, a betrayal, a time-loop, and an impending alien invasion.
8 136Shadow the cat
Shadow is very cool. HE IS THE BEST CAT EVER IN THE HISTORY OF CATS. Fortunately he is getting lots of attention and pets from his humans. Unfortunately he got dropped into a different world fortunately he got dropped-claws first-into weakened end boss on one hp and got to level 999 and became the end boss himself. He doesn’t know what that means. P.s: This is my first time on royal road P.s.s: I am writing this for enjoyment don’t expect too much chapters at a time P.s.s.s: anything said about dogs is not true I love them
8 175We All Are Same
This is not a Story would love to clarify .It's a collection of the poems written by me.I will make sure you will live through each emotion,each phase we all face in our life while reading them.Give this a chance it will mean a lot!!
8 123Valent
Welcome to the world. No dystopian future here. It's not VR. It's not a game. No becoming a dungeon. No being reborn as a monster. No being reincarnated in general. NoTables or Graphs...Probably. No Cultivating montage. No power up montages. No Soul levels. No Respawns. No summoned heroes from another world. Well some of them are from another world. The World carried on. We figured out some of the secrets of the universe: other dimensions, Aether, things we thought of as magic. The Last war was supposedly fought. Our world is entangled with another via a dimensional bonding, but life goes on. We even barely lost a couple of cities. All said and done. Things are going mostly okay. We have the special ecenomic zones, You can fight monsters for resources. There are genetic celebrities on another world. A thriving economy based on ExoRig exploration and "mining" Another world that is dimensionally entangled. Okay things are complicated. This is one man's journey to figure some of this out.
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