《Pokemon Black & white: The Complete Story》AUTHOR'S NOTE: IMPORTANT POLL (Needs your vote)
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I've noticed that my chapters have fluctuated. When I first uploaded this story, the words would not go to the high 1000s but would be high 100s or low 1000s, and I don't know if that's a problem. I have edited these chapters and they are all around the 1000 words or more length and I don't know if this is a problem. The newest chapter (Chapter 21) has 2000 words and I was wondering if having chapters being this long would bore people. So would you prefer for me to break them up, keep them how they are or add more? Because usually only one thing happens in each chapter, but if you want more I could combine chapters (i.e. in Chapter 17 Kuro meets burgh, and in chapter 18 they fight. If you want me to add more I could have Chapter 17 and 18 combined into one chapter.) Or do you just not care and im just making a big deal out of nothing? Let me know what you guys think.
Also, thank you so much for reading and supporting this story
I appreciate it.
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A healthy mind in a healthy body
288 A.D, he was born. 297 A.D, he realised he had evil impulses. 298 A.D he heard of Anthony of Egypt, and sought to follow his example to learn how to suppress his impulses. 303 A.D, he saw his people be persecuted. 306 A.D, his world changed thrice, the persecutions ended forever, this fact and his hermit lifestyle brought him peace which came with strange abilities, and through them he joined the Hidden Side of the World, back then not yet hidden. 307 A.D, he sought for a way to cure myself, yet he stumbled across something more. A reckless ritual connected him to a well of knowledge, driving him insane and immortal, causing him to be treated as a commodity in the supernatural community, an Oracle. 2019 A.D, its been 1712 years, and the lusitanian has ended up in the other side of the world in less than wholesome hands, a place which may have answers about the mysteries of his abilities, when an unexpected event cuts the connection and his sanity and mortality return. Gaius Atiius Quadratus will not forget this kindness. The MC is based on the monk class of many rpgs, but the story isn't Litrpg. Also he will gain non monk abilities after a while. Fair warning I don't understand the rating system but I'll say M-rated just in case. This is my first story, I accept criticism but I would like the critic to explain the reasoning behind it. Also I'm still figuring how this site works and I have no schedule so updates may be sporadic, at least once a week. Not a native speaker but in the practices, too lazy to actually get the diploma, I got an average of 9.7 out of 10 at the Cambridge C1 level, the CAE, second highest european level for foreign languages, so it should be no problem. Foto taken from Wikipedia. Cover made by me, excuse my utter lack of artistic talent.
8 237Wishing You A Lousy B-Day
Being abandoned at birth and suffered a life of hardship, the MC has long since developed a twisted and ruthless personality. Upon meeting his birth father by accident, MC decides to take revenge by seducing his father’s partner, a mysterious and affluent young man. Turns out, things are not what they seemed, and bleeding hearts all shattered. A fun exercise in dog blood and heart poison.It hurt so bad, but it feels so good!Let's all suffer together lalala~
8 63Tyrion's Revenge - The Untold Beginning
Edited By: Paradox Edited By: Paradox """What's a childhood friend? A person you grow up with? Someone one you trust?The one person you believe will always have your back?If those word's are true, then why did mine decide to betray me in the worse way possible?And to make matters worse, she was supposed to be my fiance!?That should be the end right?.... right? Then where the hell am I?Wait...... There's someone else here..... can't see his face too dark...Hey man where are we?""""........""""""HEY! I'M TALKING TO YOU!"""""".........""""""WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?! DID YOU BRING ME HERE OR NOT? IF YOU DID, SEND ME BACK!"""Untold Beginning are detailed chapters describing Sebastian life leading up to Tyrion;s revenge.All chapters have been updated closing out any pointed out plot holes.My blog Link chapters will always be released here first: https://tyrionsrevenge.wordpress.com/
8 204Remember the Rules
Uriel doesn't know where she is. Or who she is.All she remembers is her name and two yellow eyes with a deep voice. All she has is a dagger and a small brown notebook with rules about weird things. Things called "Dreamshade" and places called "Neverland." All she knows is that she should follow the rules, or she will get hurt.Rule #1: Try to avoid people, especially people named Peter Pan.Disclaimer: I do NOT own Once Upon a Time or any characters IN Once Upon a Time. All rights go to their rightful owners. ALSO: I will not be sticking closely, if at all, to the plotline of the show, just because.... I can't. I just can't. It's too amazing to change. This work is completely MINE.~Emma
8 64Marvel Women One Shots
Me respectfully being obsessed with marvel and it's actresses*There will be smut**I take requests but I do not know if I can or will write all of them*
8 201Elizabeth Liones x Male Reader - Return of the Eighth
Meliodas and his friends arrive at a place called "Lyboruo Village". Completely unaware of who their about to meet and what will transpire during their stay there....Seven Deadly Sins by Nakaba Suzuki
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