《Magic and Martial War God》Breathtaking Pain
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"Connecting Connection, the connection succeeds, Owner can receive first-level inheritance"
"Dragon God Blood Veins"
"Nine Divine Dragons Battle Technique- First Layer"
"Four Saint Beast Battle Art- First and Second Layer"
Suddenly, Johnny felt pain in his body. He felt his blood veins transforming into something powerful and extraordinary but it was very painful. He bites his finger to stay conscious this time. His mind was able to record all the information about the arts he gained but he was having a hard time.
"Ahh" All of the veins in his body start bursting because they couldn't support the transformation. Johnny gritted his teeth murmuring "No wonder, stone said I need a strong body. This is fucking suicide."
"If this goes on, I won't be able to hold on. I need something. This might be crazy but I can't think of anything else." Gritting his teeth, Johnny sat down in a lotus position while his body was covered in body fortunately he was still alive.
"A.I. transfers all the data about Real Thunder Body Tempering Art to my brain" Johnny shouted holding all of the pain in his body.
"Yes, Host" A.I. responds and sent a whole bunch of information to his brain. His brain was already overloaded now this made him even more uncomfortable. He suffered a lot of headaches but he held on and starts reading the content of Real Thunder Body Tempering Art in his brain.
This art was rather easy, all you need to do is use your thunder element, enlarge its effect by adding spiritual energy in it, and then all he needs to do is temper his body with that thunder. This tempering is step-by-step tempering unlike tempering the whole body at the same- time.
The first is to temper, blood, and blood veins, and this made him very lucky because blood veins are very important for him now. His blood veins are getting torn apart by the pressure of Dragon God Blood Vein if he can control the balance of his veins getting torn apart with healing. This body tempering art is very critical and painful because to temper the body part, you need to tear it apart then heal it.
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This method may sound cruel but it is very critical because if you can't heal at the speed you're tearing your body then you may slowly die. For now, he doesn't need to tear apart his blood veins instead heal his body with the speed his body is tearing. This is actually not the part of thunder because thunder is destructive but since it is mixed with spiritual energy, it gains a little effect of lightning.
This means his thunder will get promoted to lightning. Lightning can be called upgraded thunder because it possesses two attributes: Life Lightning and Destruction Lightning. Life lightning as the name suggests can be used to heal others and it can also increase the life force and potential of a person.
Destruction lightning as the name suggests can destroy anything. This is also called the true form of thunder. It is said; thunder emperor got the small vision of Lightning and created this art. It is a very powerful art containing the effect of Lightning but it could be only achieved if a person walks on Dual Path.
His blue thunder moves out of his Mana Space and got mixed with spiritual energy near his heart then it starts healing his body. If previous thunder was blue then current lightning is yellow. This yellow lightning was healing his body, and in the midst of all this, he was trying to adapt the Thunder-Flame Elephant Gene.
The reason was simply that it increases his physical strength though he wasn't entirely depending on this. He was also thinking of other ways to heal his body. Suddenly, he remembered the Gene Fluid his dad gave him. His body was completely covered in blood, he slowly moved his arm, and controlled his mind sense to take out a small size bottle.
This bottle was transparent and inside of it was green fluid. This green fluid was Gene Fluid. He looked at this bottle deeply and remembered his dad words "The reason I'm giving it in advance is simple when you looked at it remember one thing though it increases the speed for adapting the Gene, it also decreases the true potential of a human possesses after all nothing is perfect."
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"Dad, I know I am making a hasty decision but it is my only choice" Saying so, Johnny opened the lid and drank whole in one gulp. After green fluid entered his body, it starts releasing strange green energy that began to completely cover his body into a green aura.
His body began to heal in front of naked eyes, Thunder-Flame Elephant Gene starts acting up furiously, as if it was rejecting the aura of green fluid but this green fluid wasn't coward, it completely began to suppress the Gene might.
Then slowly, his gene began to merge with his body, and real thunder body tempering art was also working properly. Time passes as normal as is it.
...…
It's been a total of six days since Johnny entered the space inside Primal Chaos Celestial Dao Stone. Now, his body was clean and didn't have even a single bloodstain though his clothes were completely red. They were like clothes soaked in blood. At the same, around his body thunder was sparkling.
"Brizzzzzzzzzzz"
"It's been three days outside the space. It seems I should start practicing battle arts" Johnny sighed, and got up. Then, he disappeared from the space inside the Primal Chaos Celestial Dao Stone. Suddenly a voice startled him, "A.I. inspection on the Primal Chaos Celestial Dao Stone was interrupted. Now, A.I. can no longer bring out its data. A.I. can only continue if the Host increases his soul strength."
This tone was rather dispirited while shocked Johnny a little but he shakes his words saying "Don't mind, I already knew if I spend chaotic energy, then its power will increase by a certain point. For now, we are weak but that won't be for long." While saying this, a powerful determination flashed in his eyes.
"For now I stink" Johnny smelled his body and almost vomited on the ground. He takes off his clothes and enters the washroom to clean his body. After taking a bath, he wore his new clothes. He wore a red T-shirt and loose black trousers.
After coming out, he encountered his mom. His mom shouted about his blood-red clothes. Fortunately, she understood the method of Real Thunder Body Tempering Art so she didn't bicker too much. After that, he entered his room and then the Primal Chaos Celestial Dao Stone space.
The first thing he did after entering the space was to check his current stats.
Host- Johnny Fenton
Cultivation- Fifth Grade Junior Martial Magician
Cultivation Art- Dark Energy Absorption Art (Small Accomplishment)
Cultivation Art (Secondary)- Real Thunder Body Tempering Art (Entry)
Battle Art- Dark Arrow Art (Small Accomplishment), Shadow Steps (Small Accomplishment)
Innate Abilities- Conceal, Thunder Ball
Bloodline Ability- Warrior Arm
Innate Element- Thunder and Dark Element (Dual Element Awakening)
Bloodline- War God Bloodline
Gene- Thunder-Flame Elephant (15%)
Gene Art- Mountain Breaking Fist, Flame Palm
Treasure- Primal Chaos Celestial Dao Stone, Black Dragon Spear
Pure Attributes: Strength-21.25 (1- 100 pounds), Agility- 2 (1- 1meter/second), Constitution- 5, Intelligence- 1.8, Spirit- 1.5
"Sure enough, I was right. Dragon God Blood Veins doesn't provide any bloodline but it is extremely important to practice the Nine Divine Dragons Battle Technique. So, let's start with the first layer and see its effect. I hope it can truly bring some effect after all that breathtaking pain" Johnny started talking to himself, then he sat down on the lotus position. He starts reading the entire content of the First Layer of Nine Divine Dragons Battle Technique.
Just after reading the content, a huge surprise and shock appeared on his face. He was truly amazed by its effect, then he laughed "Haha, my efforts weren't in vain"
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