《Child of Terra》Final Thoughts
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So, we've come to the end of the fluff filled adventures of Nox and his friends. Well, sort of.
If you've joined in without reading my other stories, it'll just be the antics of children being children, and not much else. However, this story was actually two things. The first was to introduce the four to the main story I have planned for them, whilst the second was a promise I made to a friend on the site. One that wanted it to be just about various children that happened in the first book of Origin Point, but then evolved into this one.
There was also a poll after the second book of Origin Point, one that I just now closed. It was about which arc I would be writing next, and it will be the Family arc. Where it'll be of two parts, 'Of Life and Light', and 'Of Death and Darkness'. Both of these will have three voices, or tellings of the tales therein. They are the Ageless, Brutus, and Sarah.
The Ageless's tone is more of an old English speech, but with a modern twist to it. If it stayed old, then people would be reading Shakespearean text, hence the modern spin to it. He's also of a darker mind than the other three, and has no qualms with exposing people, children or otherwise, to such darkness.
Brutus, on the other hand, will have a more fanatical tone to his speech. This is due to him being in love with the God King, and desiring to do almost anything for him. However, he's calmed down in the later years, but still loves him fiercely.
Sarah, though, is more motherly and reserved. She'll gloss over anything too dark, more so when it's about her husband doing anything of the sort. Instead, she'll simply stick to a formula of light and fluffy.
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Now, these three will be telling stories to Nox and his friends about the Ageless's first and mortal family during the first part, Of Life and Light. Which will mean that there will be some info dumps, or some things glossed over due to them already knowing what it is. The second one, Of Death and Darkness, will be his rise to godhood once again. However, this one will show more of the political system within the Azzarathean Pantheon, whilst he and his are helping the Ferryman, Charon, in the river Styx. It's due to a requirement in becoming a God within the Pantheon. In that you need a sponsor to elevate you.
So, that is what is going to happen, and afterwards comes the 'Sins of The Abyss', as well as the 'Apprentice Chronicles'.
Any questions, comments, or concerns? Please leave them down below, and please drop a review. Would love to hear what you though of 'Child of Terra'.
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