《The Incomparable》Chapter 16 Teaser
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Chapter 16
“YOU ARE THE REASON WE ARE DEAD!!!!” my mother yelled.
I looked up and saw the hateful look on their faces that screamed out “DISAPPOINTMENT”, then looked at my sister's faces that were filled with tears.
Slowly they disappeared into the darkness, I reached out running after my father to see if I could explain myself, but he left.
I sat there for what felt like an eternity, thinking about what had just happened, thinking about how much my family hates me. Thinking about the guys who killed my parents but are still alive out there, and it hurt.
“Is this what you want?”
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School battle-field:
“Is he hiding?”
“He is scared isn't he, GET OUT HERE LOSER,” people yelled as attacks get thrown at the black ball in the sky.
“STOP IT ALL OF YOU, THIS IS A BATTLE BETWEEN JOHN AND I THERE IS NO NEED TO INTERFERE,” Yulia yelled out.
“Princess, we are just trying to help,” someone from the crowd called out.
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Yulia’s thoughts:
(* Help… Help?. Again and again and again everyone thinks I need help, but I don’t. I can do things by myself. I AM NOT A CHILD ANYMORE!!!)
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The black ball slowly opened, and we saw a figure in the background.
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