《The Upgrade System》Grand Elder
Advertisement
"Boom", I looked at the number jumping from 0 to 100-> 1000-> 10000-> 20000-> 30000-> 40000-> 50000-> 100000-> 110000-> 120000-> 130000-> 140000->450000-> 500000-> 1000000-> 2000000-> 3000000-> 5000000-> 10000000->100000000-> 1000000000.
The numbers finally stopped, Eric shocked himself to death, he never knew he was this strong but that happiness of feeling strong soon vanished as he heard the system.
*Ding*= The skill [I don't have a name for] has taken effect and has changed your result from 13757 to 1 billion
'what do you mean?'
*Ding*= when you activated the skill [I don't have a name for}] made the block to give a wrong measurement, and you were lucky enough the measurement was high and not low.
Eric turned around to look at the audience and the judge but to only witness everybody's mouths dropped down to the floor, as if they were giving birth from their mouth like a frog.
Eric asked the Judge "Have I passed".
The judge jumped out of his dais and came to Eric while saying "senior, you have passed the test with flying colours but you don't need to do the test as you can become a grand elder without even needing to do the test for the grand elder position.
"So, am I disciple or a grand elder"
The judge looked at him with respect in his eyes as he replied, "It would be a shame, to our sect if we let you become a disciple and not a grand elder".
Now that Eric's score was so high that he knew no one was going to beat the score and asked for the prize "can I have the prize than?".
"Senior, the test is meant to be for people under 25 and you are not 25 or below, that means that you are not allowed to participate in the competition if you are older than 25". He said to Eric with his respect, decreasing by a bit but not enough to be noticed by anyone except himself.
Advertisement
Eric was very interested about how this person was going to feel when he told him that he is below 25.
"I'm 19 and I qualify for the test"
Now the judge felt a bit irritated as this person was going this far to just get a pill that was meant for the younger generation of the Lang Sect. If he didn't know that this person was a sovereign, he probably take out his sword and cut Eric's head.
The judge knew that this person was not going to fall back so, he asked one of the member of the the sect bring him an age testing stone. He knew that when he shows this person's real age to the audience on the ground, he would be humiliating him in front of this many people. Even though Eric didn't know why he was doing this but the people on the ground thought this person was a very righteous person and was trying to look after the younger generation, but the people that thought that he was a good person was very wrong.
At the start the judge tried to act natural and invite this person to the sect but what he truly wanted to do was just disqualify this person by saying that he was to old, but if he did he would be punished by the sect for not inviting a power house to their sect.
He followed what every normal person from the sect would do and invited him to the sect and become the 10th grand elder which was meant to be his position, but thanks to this guy he lost the spot.
Luckily the person asked for the prize, so he used this excuse to ridicule Eric.
Now he was feeling very happy inside to see this person lose face in front of so many people.
Advertisement
The other member of the sect brought the age testing stone to the judge and gave it him, he took the stone and gave it to Eric and told him to pour his qi to see his age.
Eric followed as he was instructed and poured his qi in the stone, the stone slowly moved in numbers and stopped at 19.8, showing that he was 19 and 8 months old.
He looked at the judge to see he was petrified as if he just saw a ghost coming after his life.
Eric thought that he was probably petrified because of his age but, he was petrified the moment he saw Eric's qi.
The Judges P.O.V
This person that said that he was younger than 25 and was a sovereign, took the age measuring stone from my hand and started to put his qi in it. I was ready to ridicule him about telling a lie about being 19 but the moment I saw his qi I was frightened the living life out of me cause of the purity of his. Comparing his qi to mine would be comparing a fire flies light to a moons light coming down to earth.
I thought that his purity of qi was high but the next moment I saw his age, which nearly killed me for real.
Back to story
Eric looked at the judge and saw no light in his eyes, showing that he was mentally disturbed, Eric thought that he was the only one but the moment he looked to the audience he saw the same eyes.
It was as if something had turned off their brains and they were brain dead now, Eric stood there for a while waiting for the judge and the others to come back to life but I couldn't hold it in anymore as they were not moving an inch for quite a while.
Eric went closer to the judge and shook his body so he could come back to his body and start moving around and tell him if he could get the prize now.
After shaking him for a while, the lights in his eyes returned and started to move around.
After he came back in control of his mind asked him "Do I get the prize now?"
Advertisement
- In Serial38 Chapters
Evolution God
Lucifer Jackson was a 17-year-old high school student. Every day he would get bullied and oppressed by everyone in the school, even by teachers. One day, he gets run over by a truck, integrates with the System of the Evolution God and reincarnates into a world named Zylghen also known as The World Of Chaos. I used the artwork from a guy named fire_dragon13. He does amazing artwork, and if he doesn't approve of me using his artwork as a cover for my novel, I will immediately take it down. Cover: https://weheartit.com/entry/290512286 fire_dragon13: https://weheartit.com/fire_dragon13
8 83 - In Serial10 Chapters
The Friendly Neighborhood Nightmare Caller
The year is 21XX, humanity still seems to love killing each other over some pointless war or another. VR Dive technology is a thing and has more uses than just fun and games.For the past year, humanity has temporarily put aside its differences to fight a new threat, the Fiends, an enemy of unknown origins. The Fiends seem to have an unlimited reserve of forces, yet they seem to primarily attack small human settlements, with the occasional siege on a city with a vast horde.Humanity has resorted to creating Saviors, ex-humans who have extraordinary powers and who's forms generally resemble some form of human-monster hybrid. They range from ordinary superhumans and slime people to harpies and golems, as well as, from plant people and zombies to kitsunes and arachne.While they are called Saviors, their official title is the Defenders of Humanity and they serve the Human Collective Government Defense Force.Now, what happens when one of the biggest unknowns of the Fiends' forces, the Fiendish Maidens, joins the HCGDF?This story follows Savior Squad 108-F, a squad of misfits who joined the Defense Force for a variety of reasons, as they live their lives and go on missions for the "greater good" of humanity. During their adventures, they meet one of the most elusive Fiends in existence: the Nightmare Caller Eve, one of the Fiendish Maidens. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This story was created using the world of a pair of "Create Your Own Adventures", called Defenders of Humanity and Ravagers of Humanity. There are four of us working together to write this story, so you may notice differences in writing styles, though we will try to make it seem like one style. All credit for any pictures we use, go to their artists. We plan to update as we complete chapters, however fast that happens to be. Sorry for any inconsistencies.
8 247 - In Serial11 Chapters
The Bell of the Underworld
Zamioculcas wants to become immortal; a necessary condition to take over the world. But no one will let a necromancer work in peace. As if someone cared about the lives of a a few peasants! But this time, it's even worse: the adversary is also a colleague. A necromancer who pretends to work for good? Bah! What a hypocrite!There shall be a confrontation, and may the strongest necromancer win! Updates twice a day, final chapter will air on 25/04/2021!
8 118 - In Serial88 Chapters
Odyssey Of Zero: Journey Ablaze
Lass, a young, shut-in smith who recently suffered the loss of his father, woke up one day to be greeted by something most unexpected. The goddess that seemed to be a work of fiction and appear only in fairytales made for kids, was now indeed standing before him. Telling him that the world and fairytales he once heard were but mere lies, he realized that not all stories can have a happy ending... Now knowing how much is at stake, Lass agreed to accompany the goddess in her quest to save the world they call their home. But throughout it all...why did it feel like something was missing? Like a memory that's been erased and a part of him taken away? Despite him thinking it'd be a swift escort, he instead got dragged along into the thrill and the battles of an adventure with epic proportions, in a journey most bizarre. Now travelling throughout the entirety of the world he had once exclusively thought to be around his home and smithy, they would soon realize that there's many more faces to meet as well as much more to see, feel and experience, than what they could have ever imagined.
8 116 - In Serial31 Chapters
The Thalisean legacy
Many years ago, a small but noble race called the Thalise existed with the sole purpose of defeating the demons and their king with to the power given to them by their creator; the mark of the Herald, a symbol that manifested itself as the main source of a Thaliseans strength to defeat the demons. Many more years of strife passed but the Thalisean race mysteriously vanished. Humanity is pushed to the brink of ruin due to the demon's running rampant across the land. This is when the last of the Thalise is created and brought forth by their creator. Zachary Erinn, a young man raised as a normal child, embarks on his perilous journey to fulfill his purpose as it is revealed to him. Can he take over such a task that stakes the fate of humanity on his shoulders, or will he succumb at the hands of those that seek to deter him?
8 201 - In Serial6 Chapters
A royal family and a caring thief(Spikedash)COMPLETED
hey guys Spike_Dash here this is an mlp fanfic i made beacause im bored and this has slow updates hope you like it.they ae humans in he storyspike-15twilight-19rainbow-16pinkie-16sunset-17fluttershy-18applejack-17rarity-19scootaloo-11sweetie belle-11applebloom-11etc.sorry for the spelling and the grammarchaoi do not own mlp characters nor the songs
8 121

