《Even in the afterlife, I still hate mondays ...》Announcement + Questions
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Hello everyone, author-kun desu !
This is a little announcement to apologize for the unexpected lack of chapter yesterday and, sadly, for the next few days …
A bunch of friend are in deep shit for a few of their exam and they wanted the distinguished oresama to help them out asap … Useless to say that if it came to that, they are in very deep shit …
For example, I want to remake the part introducing the little girl saved by major starfish, to make it a little more fleshed out. She is planned to become a very important character (Yes spoiler but, I mean, those we didn’t see that coming should read more stories ...) but I find the current version a bit too forced ...
I also wanted to ask what were the parts you guys licked most in the story so far. Did I manage to get a little tear, or a slight smile out of you ? If yes, when ? If no, how close did I come to break your steel reinforced hearth ?
Tell me, I’m eager to know and improve my writing skills ^^
Also on a side note, I wanted to ask if a certain part of the story has been clear enough.
When the two soldiers explored the bunker, did you guys understand that Marie, Frank and Alice gave their life to consume less oxygen and maximize the survival chances of George, Mark and Jenny ?
If yes then I’m not retouching that part, if it wasn’t that clear then editing will ensue.
There we go, that’s about everything ^^
Thanks in advance for your patience ! I shall be back as soon as possible ^^
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