《Beware of Zombies》I think I improved my writing style

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So lately, I been on the hunt to improve my writing style and character development. Which is currently what these plotless stories been about.. Sounding out character voice then moving on to side characters development and such..

I think i have improved.. Idk.. I'm sort of nervous.. however, I decided to rewrite zombie over in the way I original envision before I decided just to have fun with it while working on what I said upstairs.. My teacher said I have improved quite a lot.. but by how much.. haha.. long way to go..

So my dilenmi.. Post a new story with the new (what I believed is improved style) or just update this one with the new format... let me know which one you guys would prefer..

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