《The creator's diary》Chapter-12 aftermath
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'i-its finally over..... finally'.
both Eva and Alfie were thinking the same thing.
the pure origin energy was fading revealing a young boy and a girl.
time was bend, and within a short span of second they had witness too much.
from the depths of the sea to and most ancient ofearth to height of the sky.
from the darkness place of the abyss to the of brightess star of heaven.
from the tiny ant to the biggest beast, they saw it.
they witness the ancient heavenly king leviathan boiling the ocean and swallowing the legendary Kraken
the witness the mighty behemoth waking from its sleep, they watch as a numerous mountains crumbling as it walks the earth they fell down as though they were bowing to it.
then they saw the wide expanse of the sky, and within it flew another ancient being, with wing span upon hundreds of miles, the light reflecting its beautiful scales which seems to made of diamond.
these were the ruler of the sea , the earth and the sky, the heavenly kings.
each of them rivaled the heaven and the abyss, and lived without fearing anything.
but it did not end there.
everything went black, they were in total and utter darkness where light seems to vanish and can not exist.
the abyss.
but even then the light of the creator seems to shine through ever corner of the abyss.
they then saw the 72 demons gods.
the usual feeling the divines feels when seeing these demons were disgust, hatred, and pity.
but Eva did not feel these.
she felt loneliness, sadness and emptiness from them.
finally they saw the world in its entirety.
the inner workings of nature, ants working together to form a colony, pack of wolf hunting together, saber tooth tiger hunting in the forest, mammoth migrating together in the snow, smart goblins writing books, ogres and cyclops roasting a boar, fairies
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looking after the garden, from drawfs hitting iron and elves in the forest to beastman in their daily lives.
to fish swimming in the sea and birds flying in the sky,more and more things flash and vanishes each passing second, together they form the entire world, all in all everything was beautiful and perfect and balance.
white foam were forming on the girl's mouth.
she swore that she would never call the 'creator' coward again even when the things they witness 'he' remained unmoved and unaffected.
but little did she know, Alterio had already fainted halfway through,
if any force was applied to him at that time he would've fell hard.
'but i finally understand' she thought.
i've finally understand how wide the world is.
and how beautiful it is.
she felt rather shameful how imperfect she and the gods were.
she always thought that only the gods knew of his existence, she never would have thought that many others would know and in fact prayed to him.
from the heavenly kings to demons of abyss to gods .
the creator was not only the God of the gods but also the God whole world.
it felt awkward to all the time they prayed to the creator to destroy the vile demons of the abyss.
'we have come to think of him as our servant and keep asking things from him when he had already given us this beautiful world' she thought she finally found out why he showed him all this thing, she promise she would follow him forever.
she witness how power he was and was hopefully looking forward to the time when she will see the arrogant seraphim being whip in 'ass' by the creator
meanwhile Alfie's mind was blank, he was completely oblivious to the crazy things that was going on in Eva's head.
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he had never even once really want to be the god of these people.
nevermind the problems in heaven, the hypothetical war was already too much for him to handle
sure he like playing around with magic , boasting and overestimating himself.
but in the end , his physical was just average , he could easily die like any other being.
he was trying to show her how powerful the other beings were compare to him.
how come it have a completely different effect.
whip the seraphim in the butt?
if he heard what Eva was thinking he could've puke blood rightnow.
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