《Error 69》𝐂𝐇𝐀𝐏𝐓𝐄𝐑 𝟏𝟐
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My head followed his movements as I was perplexed by what just happened.
I shook my head and turned to my computer again. The screen was still green and numbers were moving rapidly across it. I waited some time and a code was put on the screen.
43110 0M3474
Easy.
My fingers drifted through the keyboard rapidly as I typed the code. I made sure this time, my traces were untraceable and I put in 2 security walls. I was suddenly back on the home page but documents that I didn't have before appeared. I looked through all the documents.
I came across a document that was named 'invitations'. Bingo.
I opened the folder and it showed hundreds of people's names and it showed every single detail about them, even very very personal info. "I did it!" I yelled standing up. I ran my hands over my hair, taming it. All of the guys came running over to me and checked it out.
"We just need to put some info and we're done. We also have to go buy some elegant attire." I said. I sat down in my chair and started putting in information.
Leo Esperanza:
-18
-blue eyes
-brown wavy hair with a hint of blonde
-Italian
-acts like a child
"Hey! Why you put the last one?" Leo complained as I typed. "Because you act like one" Valentino responded for me.
Kai Potrero:
-20
-brown eyes
-dark brown curly hair
-black/Italian
Kai agreed to what I put for his info.
Valentino Romero:
-22
-grey eyes
-blackish wavy messy hair
-Italian
-is fucking mean
"Wait! Delete the last one!" Valentine tried grabbing the mouse away from me. I quickly moved away from him.
"NO!" he yelled. He grabbed the end of the mouse while I grabbed the other end. I pulled the mouse towards me but Valentino started pulling with more force towards him. This went on for a minute.
I suddenly heard shattering and I looked towards the mouse. The plastic on his end was completely shattered and I could see the electric wires. My mouth hung open.
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"Valentino! You broke the fucking mouse!" I screamed trying to pry the mouse out of his hands but he still didn't budge.
"Let it go you bitch! It's broken!" I continued yelling as we pulled back and forth.
"No! You let go!" he responded, his voice came out raspy and loud.
"Oh my God! You two are so chaotic together!" Leo yelled trying to pry us apart
We both let go of the mouse at the same time and we pointed fingers at each other.
"She started."
"He started."
We said at the same time. "How about you stop being an immature bitch and stop pointing fingers at me, Valentino!" I yelled walking up to him and sizing him up.
"What the fuck are you talking about!? You pointed fingers first" Valentino retorted back. He walked forwards sizing me up too and in no time we were bumping chests.
"Guys stop this bullshit! Y'all are acting immature!" Leo screamed getting in between us. We both glared daggers into Leo's soul as he realized he made a mistake. Leo went running out of the room and Kai was nowhere to be seen.
It was just me and Valentino. "Delete. It." He spoke calmly. Way too calm for my taste.
"No! It said put information about us, so I wasn't going to lie!". My eyebrows were furrowed, I lifted my arm to punch Valentino but before it could make contact with his face. He caught it with his hands, he grabbed it tightly making me groan in pain.
"You'll regret saying that gattina." He started walking towards me making me back up. He threw a punch which I quickly duck, I ran towards the bed and hopped on it but before I could cross the other side.
He grabbed my ankle and pulled me back. I gripped the sheets, Valentino pulled harder on my ankle and if I didn't let go, he would pop my ankle. I let go of the sheets and he somehow sat on top of my legs so I couldn't move them.
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I couldn't see him since I was laying on my front and I couldn't turn around. "Let me go, you Italian bitch!" I screamed to the top of my lungs. Before I could process what was happening I had a cloth in my mouth keeping me from talking. Everything I said was muffled and Valentino grabbed my hands and put them behind my back. I kept stirring and turn. I started breathing heavily by moving around and by the weight Valentino was putting on me.
"Mhnbnchcjm" I tried to talk but everything came out weird. "Hmm what was that? I can't hear you princess." Valentino mocked.
Kai walked into the room with Leo behind him and he saw the sight before him. He blinked and stared then blinked again. "Uh this is some kinky shit" he expressed walking in the room with a mouse in his hands. My eyes widened. "...anyways I found a new mouse" he continued raising the mouse in the air.
Kai was standing beside the door, Valentino quickly got off me and ran towards Kai. I quickly composed myself and ignored the cloth in my mouth and jumped off the bed and towards Valentino's back. I pushed both of us towards the floor.
He grunted as he fell on the floor with me on top of him. I straddled his waist too distracted to care about the position we were in. I pinned his hands on top of his head and took out the cloth.
"Move and with one click everything is sent." I threatened him. I stared at him panting out of breath.
He smirked, "You haven't put your info." He retorted with a smirk. I wanted to wipe that smirk off his face.
He suddenly bucked his hips, making me go forward. I released his hands and put them in front of me so my face wouldn't crash against the floor. My breast was eye level with his eyes as he widened them and I was still straddling him. I quickly got off him and cursed myself out.
Valentino slowly stood up stiff as a board. We both avoided eye contact and stared at the ground. Well, this is awkward. Kai cleared his throat and said with a commanding voice leaving no choice for options, "The two of you apologize now."
None of us made a move to admit guilt. I slowly lifted my head and looked at Valentino. He was staring at me, "sorry" I admitted. Even though my ego might get ruined I still apologized. Valentino didn't say sorry back, his ego is way too huge for that.
"Say it back you gattina" I mocked him trying to urge him on. He made a sound on the back of his throat that sounded like a growl.
"Sorry bitch." He growled out. That wasn't the apology I expected but I'll take it. Kai walked out of the room leaving Leo, Valentino, and me in the room. The tension was so suffocating and it felt like I could cut the air.
"You two fight like two cute little puppies." Leo slipped out but he quickly slapped his mouth with his hand like if he didn't mean to say that. I narrowed my eyes as well Valentino and stared at Leo, he quickly scrambled out the room yelling for Kai.
I walked to the door and just as I was about to leave his room. He grabbed my arm and whispered in my ear.
"I didn't mean my sorry by the way." he was halfway out but I screamed.
"And you think I did!?" I laughed out loud at his cockiness
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