《VIVAH- A JOURNEY FROM COLLEGE TO MARRIAGE (✓)》[COMMONER MALHOTRA]
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Manik was thinking about nandini whole day and smiling like a fool. Lastly he went to his mansion thinking about her and found fab3 there with so many questions in their eyes.
"So manik where were you?" Mukti started with her question bank. Abhimanyu came from behind and wrap his arms around mukti's stomach and look at manik with same look. Manik give him a pleading look, requesting through his eyes to save him and to light up the mood.
"Mukti let's go for a date tonight." Abhimanyu said and divert the topic and kissed her cheek in last.
"We are not kids abhimanyu and don't try to save manik. I want to know so many things yaar." Mukti grumbled nudging abhimanyu.
"Yes manik care to explain......." Kabir asked. Manik signalled them that he will tell them after mukti leave......."
"Actually you are right baby we are not kids but i think its time to think about our kids and for that" abhimanyu picked her up and went upstairs where manik,kabir and dhruv were hooting.
"Buddy mukti has left now tell us what's going on." Asked dhruv.
"Nothing is going on buddy actually i was getting bored so i was thinking to watch a movie so i went theatre and had so much fun there." Manik told looking here and there meanwhile kabir and dhruv look at him with quizzing stare. They came to know just by looking his gesture that he is lieing.
"You know what manik no need to utter lie. Let's do one thing we are giving you time when you feel like sharing just remember us." Kabir says giving manik a smile.Dhruv nodded and this made manik face brighten and he smile widely.
"I love you too." Manik happily flew a kiss in air and happily hugged them. He left to his room and dhruv and kabir was looking at each other because they also have something to tell to manik but manik happy mood didn't permit them to tell.
"we will try to explain him calmly she is very good." Dhruv uttered and kabir nod in affirmation.
"If he come to know that we already know that a student who is bringing by nyonika aunty is in college,he will kill us." Kabir added.
"And he will kill her too." Dhruv completed looking at kabir with worry.
"But i don't understand one thing?" Kabir whispered meekly looking ground.
"There is nothing new in that nevertheless ask." Dhruv rolled his eyes
"Don't know why i feel very connected towards nandini maybe that's why we are trying to hide her from manik." Said kabir with amused expressions.
"Don't know why but me too." Dhruv joined him with same amused smile.
"We need to be very careful around manik. Let's do one think let's just forget the topic of nandini because manik don't know about her and we won't let him know that's how we could save nandini and also could make manik happy like he is." Kabir said.
"But didn't you realize he was smiling so innocently and differently today..."
Dhruv says.
"Yes but i know he won't tell us that easily." They both look upwards towards his room.
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Manik was watching her picture in his mobile with sheepish grin on his handsome face, he was laying on his bed with one hand behind his head, displaying his bicep.
"why are you so tough love. I manik malhotra never imagined that i will have to do so many things to impress a girl but for you i am ready to do anything and i know how to impress you and for that i will have to wait till tomorrow. Oh god how will i spend this night." Manik talk to himself and then kiss her picture.
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He called harshad.
"Harshad harshad harshad......." Manik called out happily.
"Bada khush lagra hai manik..." Harshad also smiled on the other side.
"Tere bhai ko pyaar ho gya hai harshad...." Manik revealed happily and why not harshad is his best friend. Harshad become so happy.
"Are you serious manik? Wow it's amazing." Harshad spell out happily.
"Yes you know harshad she is so innocent and beautiful. I just want to tell the world that she is mine." Manik shouted out loudly.
"Hold on manik. First tell me did you tell her?" Harshad asked.
"nah today i saw her." Manik said while smiling lightly and blushing a little while scratching the back of his neck.
"means love at first sight but none of them tell me about this." Harshad smiled ever so happily.
"actually i didn't tell them about it that's why."
"why and please i want to see her please send me the picture of her please." Harshad plea like a stubborn kid.
"Not so soon yar i want you to meet her face to face and one more thing promise me that you won't tell anything to fab3." Manik said.
"they are family yaar how can you hide this thing from them."
"kameene hai sale actually that girl whom i loved is bringing by nyonika so they didn't tell me about her yet." Manik said with smirk.
"seriously manik they are trying to save her from you. That means they also on her side."
"love you harshad you don't know after talking to you how lite i am feeling." Manik blew a flying kiss.
Harshad smile,"manik just remember one thing just win her by your efforts and try to be gentle manik."
"Yes harshad now you tell me when you're going to come overhere." Manik asked desperately.
"Actually abhi to i don't know because competition is still going on even workshop has been extended for some more days but i have a surprise for you." Harshad says.
"I will wait for you harshad." Manik said.
"Me too now good night." They both hung the call up.
Muskan and navya were praying to god whereas nandini was preparing for her test. On her first day she become favorite student of teachers. being a intelligent and bright student she attended all the class and answered all the questions asked by professors.
Muskan and navya were sitting infront of a big photo of matarani, joining their hands.
"Bholi hain!" Navya said looking at god.
"Masoom bhi hain!!" Muskan said in the same way as navya.
"Maaf karna." Said navya again.
"Chhod dena." Muskan completed.
Nandini was listening to them silently and finally being impatient she finally asked,"what the hell you both are saying?"
"We are praying for you so that you can get save from fab5." Muskan said
"Don't need to worry muski and navya. I am absolutely fine. Thanks for thinking for me, you both are thinking about me from a long time so i have ended up this matter by thinking a solid solution for this problem, that is i won't get involve in any trouble or fights." Nandini said happily and both navya and muskan breath in relief.
"Thank god, you have finally got yourself some brains."
"you know i am elder sister so i always used to give suggestions and you both are here on her place for me. So thank you so much for treating me like a family." Nandini got all emotional and muskan and navya wipe her tears.
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"Let's talk to alia." Nandini started.
"Is she your sister?" Navya confirmed and nandini give her a yes.
"Right now we need to sleep as per hostel rules but don't worry we will call her tomorrow." Muskan said while pushing them towards their own beds. They wished each other and slipped into a deep slumber.
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Alia was continuously checking the account of fab5 and found their new song. she was amazed to see then performing without harshad. She got a little sad and decide to ask her bhai that what is happening in his life.
Alia- hello bhai
Bhai- hello
Alia- where are you?
Bhai- actually i am in delhi.
Alia- so why can't you come and meet me.
Bhai- i really can't alia
Alia yelled almost- but harshad bhai it's high time we have met!
Harshad pleading voice- beta try to understand. I am in the competition where i need to represent my college.
Alia- ok i understand
Harshad- how's nandini
Alia- she is ok. You know what after going mumbai she forget me.
Harshad laughed- aise ho hi nhi sakta. She loves you alot meri chhoti hai vo.
Alia- ye achcha hai aap bhi usse zyada pyaar karte ho.
Harshad- aise nhi hai alu i love you.
Vaise ek baat bata achanak tune kyu poocha ki main kha hu.
Alia- because i checked fab5 last post and in that only manik malhotra,dhruv and kabir were present.
Harshad- mamaji aur mamiji kaise hai.
Alia- sab bahaut achche hai bhai.
Harshad- actually when i will go back to my college then i will make nandini meet to my friends.
Alia- you know bhai i just love your band fab5 and Specially manik malhotra.
Harshad- uske peeche to duniya pagal hai but you know alia today he fall in love with a girl.
Alia- no bhai this can't be happened.
Harshad- but it's true he just told me about it today.
Alia cried fake- no
She shout and harshad laugh.
Harshad- vaise i have heard mamaji went mumbai recently.
Alia- yes and they tell me they met manik,mukti,kabir and dhruv and their dad.
Harshad- kaash i would be there i will also meet him.
Alia- don't worry just come here and meet everyone.
Harshad- ok alu someone is calling me so i have to go bye.
Alia- bye.
Manik was having his breakfast silently and he was smiling like a fool and from last 20 miniutes viraj,abhimanyu and mukti was staring him but he was busy in his smiling.
"kya hua hai." Viraj kept his hand on manik's shoulder and ask keenly.
"pyaaar......" Manik said still lost in his reverie making all of them shocked.
"So how's she?" Abhimanyu asked having a mischievous gleam in his eyes.
"So beautiful........" Manik smile grew more wide as he answered.
"Where she lives......." Mukti asked.
"I don't know now." Manik answered and a pout appeared on his lips and suddenly come out of his dream world and look at all of them.
"So finally my baby manik fallen in love." Viraj said pulling his cheeks.
"Dad please." manik whined and look here and there to divert the topic.
"Don't worry manik if you don't want to discuss it now then no one will ask you anything but we will be waiting for you to introduce your choice to us." Abhimanyu said and Manik smiles.
"No abhi i need to know. Tell me na manik where she lives........" Mukti whined like a naughty kid.
Manik smile and acts as he is going to tell and said,"mere sapno main" Saying this he leave the table next second.
Viraj who was watching mukti's sad face got a smile and pull a empty chair beside himself.
"Mukti beta come and sit with me." Mukti heard and obliged next second.
"you know na mukti i have never consider you as my daughter-in-law. You are my daughter mukti my third baby who is cute and innocent." Viraj asked and mukti nodded in yes.
Viraj said,"mukti beta manik fall in love this thing we all know because manik told us but think does he really wanted to tell us." Mukti nodded in no.
"He told us when he was in trance and he needs time. Give him time to know her and when he become sure about her he will tell all of us by himself." Viraj explained and mukti nodded in yes smilingly.
Abhimanyu- samjhi budhdhu
"Yes you're right. I was being way too desperate. I can't force him to spell out everything so soon. Actually i have been with him from childhood that's why couldn't control my curiousity moreover he is the manik malhotra the youth sensation that's why i got more excited to meet the girl who finally make him go haywire." Mukti said with a sparkling smile.
"Don't worry he can't hide anything from us he will surely tell us." Abhimanyu assured.
Manik was walking towards his car while cursing himself.
Manik- are you out of your mind manik? Uske sapno main itna kya kho gya. abhi mukti apna kbc kholkr baith jati. Kya kar rhi ho tum mujhe nandini.
And went inside his car and drive to college and he was thinking that mukti will tell fab3 about his love but for a change mukti didn't tell anyone about anything and manik take a breath in relief. They spend first two periods in canteen talking and pulling each other legs. When third period starts manik starts to go because he knows that nandini is free as her third period is free due to absence of professor.
"where are you going manik?" Asked kabir when he found out that manik was trying to go somewhere secratively.
"actually i am i.........." Manik stuttered badly.
"yes tell na buddy......." Dhruv joined the conversation.
"Actually he was going to collect my dress from designer. Haina manik" mukti said with mischievous eyes.
"ha ha aise hi hai." Manik give her thanks a lot look where mukti wink on him and he smilingly went away.
Manik walked around and thinks where he can found nandini and remember his previous day when she was talking to herself.
" nandini its free hour for you. Now what will you do? i love reading books so library is the best option."
"she must be in library." Manik whispered and He move towards library and found her with muskan and navya.
"why can't they just leave her alone." Manik pulled his hair is frustration but smirk next second when he remember who he is. He is the manik malhotra toh phir dar kis baat ki. He signalled a boy to come with Stern looks and boys starts to shiver and came to him.
"what is your name?" Manik asked with no hint of warmness in his tone.
"rajeev......" A scared boy mumbled in low tone.
"Ok...."
"I haven't done anything. Please leave me sir." Manik look at the boy keenly who was ready to peed in his pants anytime.
"I call you because i need your help." Manik said not meeting his gaze with rajeev as he doesn't have the habit to ask for help.
" what help........." Ask rajeev looking at him dumbly.
"they both ( point towards muskan and navya ) just send them away for minimum 1 hour." Manik announced as it is not a task and just a cup of tea.
Whole college know that nandini was scholarship student and manik's new target.
"Actually sir she is my classmate and she is my friend also please leave her." Rajeev pleaded after gulping down the saliva because somewhere he come to know that manik is gonna torture nandini.
Manik pull his Coller and said in his dangerous tone,"I don't care and yes stay away from her and do as i say."
Rajeev shivered and went inside the library and without wasting a second he approached their desk where navya, muskan and nandini were sitting.
"Muskan navya aaahhhh......" Rajeev shouted as he was having a heart attack.
Muskan got up immediately found him very serious,"what happened rajeev?"
"Actually i think i need to go to hospital." Rajeev said in painful tone keeping his hand on his neck.
"per subha to tum theek the na." Navya asked touching his hand.
"per main phir college aaya phir canteen gya phir library aaya aur achanak mujhe.........." remember what manik did and gulped his saliva he couldn't make anything more.
Nandini- achanak aapko kya
"ek khatarnak mosquito ne kaata. Please navya muskan take me hospital i really need to go there." Rajeev pleaded in most softest tone possible.
"let me come too." Nandini said getting up along with muskan and navya.
Rajiv shouted on top of his lungs,"No no tum nhi they two will take me there because agar tum vaha aaogi then maybe that mosquito will byte you too. No you can't come you just enjoy your reading."
Nandini look so confused and muskan and navya take him to hospital. Manik was laughing hearing rajiv. Then he saw a boy who was just going to enter inside the library, manik stop him.
Boy-: sir i am a commoner just leave me.
Manik- main commoner nhi lagta kya.
Boy- no sir you look so rich.........
Manik said something which shocked him.
Manik- i wanted to be look like a commoner. So tell me which things are making me rich.
Boy- your this gucci goggles, this branded jacket, this rolex watch, this shoes you know sir commoner can't even afford that shoes.
Manik- ok thanks and give him a genuine smile.
Boy got shocked because for the first time he was watching manik like this saying thanks that to a commoner.
Manik- so lets do one think.
He remove his goggles and give him that then remove his jacket gave him that then his branded shoes then his expensive watch.
Manik- now make me a commoner.
Boy remove his watch and make him wear that then he make him wear a hat then a simple glasses and then his shoes.
Boy- sir now you are looking like a commoner.
Manik- pakka na per mai smart to lagra hu na.
Boy- sir vo to aapko kisi ladki se poochna hoga kyuki i can only make you look commoner but your face can't be changed na.
Manik- so thanks for all your things and please you can keep all these ( showing his things which he was holding) thanks alot you don't know what you have done for me.
Boy- my pleasure sir.
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