《Madam Mafia》Disclaimer.
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Before you start reading, please understand that this story is a and hasn't really been edited or revised or anything.
I would be lying if I didn't say that the beginning 15 chapters or so are a cringe fest that is hard to get through. :) But towards the middle-end of this story I definitely feel I did a lil better developing the scenes.
Like I said its going to be hard to read.
Like in the description, y'all are not going to like this ( unless you do.)
I've held off on making this disclaimer because I felt like it was giving in to all the hate and heart stabbing comments on this novel (plenty of good ones too but you know the bad ones stick more)
I started this story pretty young and it is a story if you can ignore the parts I know I'm going to edit, you might, might just like it.
I know I'm a better writer than what the beginning of this story shows you readers and all I'm asking is that if you leave criticism, plz make it constructive.
I have fragile feelings and a fragile ego but tear me up with constructive criticism and I promise I'll bounce back better. Wiser.
Thank you for taking the time out to read this and I will be revising it in the future, not changing any major story points just helping with pacing and rewriting a lot of sections. Same gist, different words.
So don't worry if you've already read the book and you liked it how it is.
When you grow up ur writing evolves with you and you just have to accept that, your older works were a reflection of your ability then and now you can see how much you've grown.
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The story gets very triggery around the chapter WTF and Touch so watch for those.
And I think I've said all that needs to be said.
I'm reading comments and I know where my mind and those readers meet.
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Also Check out my other books PSYCHO LOVE and The Alpha's Heart, here on Wattpad.
Thank you for choosing to read Madam Mafia and enjoy.
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8 456Spiteful Healer
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8 1084Auntie toasts the VRMMORPG
~~ On Hiatus ~~ After Flora Fluss burns down the kitchen, her son insists she is too old to live alone. She's got two choices. Either move into a retirement home or spend the rest of her life within a virtual reality game governed by society's most advanced artificial intelligence. When you've worked a lifetime as an engineer for home appliances, naturally, you go with the option that has more toasters. Soon, Flora finds out that the virtual world is more familiar than she thought. Though, it takes her a while to get used to the idea that tanks don't hold water or oil but the aggro of mobs. Auntie toasts the VRMMORPG contains cute crafting, complicated game-mechanics plus how to exploit them, unconventional training methods, and a lot of toasters. New chapters: Mondays and Thursdays. For additional information, companion vids and pictures, please check out my Patreon posts with the tag #attv. Companion videos on YouTube are in the playlist Auntie toasts the VRMMORPG You want to get notified on Twitter or Facebook when I upload a new chapter? No problemo! Discord: https://discord.gg/hX8gWPE
8 130Reawakening of the Ancients [Hiatus]
The Gods have stirred after centuries of inaction. In the Floating Kingdom there are two who will change the fate of the world. A celestial chessboard of heroes, villains, and demons in which not even the Gods know the victor. Lily and Philip are pulled into this game due to a series of events and misadventures in which they draw attention of powerful people, and they must fight to control their own destinies and not become pawns of the game. [Updating Tuesdays and Fridays]
8 127Reincarnation Royale
Actual Synopsis: Mike died. Mike met God. Mike was made to play a game. Mike wants harem. Mike goes on quest to get harem while playing god's game. XD Currently rewriting first arc (RW for rewritten chapter) Have you ever wondered what it'd be like to reincarnate as the main character? Have you ever wondered what it'd be like to have to go through something like Terror Infinity? Have you ever wondered what it'd be like to go through both at the same time? And the most important question, does it count as NTR if you actually are the main character? Follow Mike on his adventures and maybe one day we'll get to answer that century old question... From the mind of one man and his split personality who were inspired by fellow seniors here on Royal Road to bring out their ideas for the world to see, we bring to you Reincarnation Royale! Inspired by: Terror Infinity, D.Grayman, Bleach, and Terror Infinity Side-B (More works will be added as the story continues) Thi's is my first time writing on RR...
8 89night and day//taekook
gece ve gündüz hep aklımdaydın..:')
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