《Madam Mafia》Disclaimer.
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Before you start reading, please understand that this story is a and hasn't really been edited or revised or anything.
I would be lying if I didn't say that the beginning 15 chapters or so are a cringe fest that is hard to get through. :) But towards the middle-end of this story I definitely feel I did a lil better developing the scenes.
Like I said its going to be hard to read.
Like in the description, y'all are not going to like this ( unless you do.)
I've held off on making this disclaimer because I felt like it was giving in to all the hate and heart stabbing comments on this novel (plenty of good ones too but you know the bad ones stick more)
I started this story pretty young and it is a story if you can ignore the parts I know I'm going to edit, you might, might just like it.
I know I'm a better writer than what the beginning of this story shows you readers and all I'm asking is that if you leave criticism, plz make it constructive.
I have fragile feelings and a fragile ego but tear me up with constructive criticism and I promise I'll bounce back better. Wiser.
Thank you for taking the time out to read this and I will be revising it in the future, not changing any major story points just helping with pacing and rewriting a lot of sections. Same gist, different words.
So don't worry if you've already read the book and you liked it how it is.
When you grow up ur writing evolves with you and you just have to accept that, your older works were a reflection of your ability then and now you can see how much you've grown.
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The story gets very triggery around the chapter WTF and Touch so watch for those.
And I think I've said all that needs to be said.
I'm reading comments and I know where my mind and those readers meet.
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Also Check out my other books PSYCHO LOVE and The Alpha's Heart, here on Wattpad.
Thank you for choosing to read Madam Mafia and enjoy.
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