《Divine Rebirth》Chapter 11 Installation
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Good the three options all seem to have something to work with and I would normally choose the Path option if I couldn't make a custom world System but because I can I will do it. Why would I normally choose the Path option? Well because this option specifically states that skills can be learned through everyday actions. While the Job/class option seems to place you on an unchangeable path that could only deviate a bit. Evolution would probably then be my second choice because this would add diversity into my races. I just hope that natural evolution could still occur.
"Hey Cely with this Evolution option, would that disable normal evolution. I mean selection and that."
"No, that could still happen it just isn't encouraged anymore."
[Custom]
"Oh, you chose that, well then say what you want, and I try to put that into a possible version when both of us agree we can send that to the System for implementation."
"Good so I would like a mix between the Path and Evolution System. So that you can obtain Skill from actions, paths, and evolutions. With that, I would also like to the possible path generation methods to be about race, skills and actions. This would then all feed into the evolution pool of the being and enable it to choose from a variety of possible evolutions that were impacted by this."
"Hmm this could work the downsides to this would just be that everything would be weaker in the beginning and that your world would have to have a high mana concentration but because you have that everything should work out. Here is the proposal."
Trois pouvoirs System
Skills are learned through actions, evolutions or paths.
Paths are generated based on actions, Skills or evolutions.
These paths are completed with points these are acquired for every level of a Skill
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Every single being undergoes an evolution after a set number of criteria are met.
These criteria are Skills, actions and prior evolutions
Every being has a rank. Higher rank-> more power and skills
Each evolution may create a new species. Variant species will have kids that are the normal species.
New species can create a new race.
Downside: High mana cost- > Needs at least high mana concentration
Balancing -> Everything starts weaker
Yes, all of that seems right there is only one thing that's strange for me.
"Is that French in the title?"
"Yes, why should that be a problem you have your theme and I have mine. So now the only thing would be this."
Do you want to upload the new world System to the Shop?
Yes/No
"What would this entail for me right now if uploaded this?"
"Well other people might buy your product from the shop and you'd 10% of their points spent on that product. And if you'd want to use this world System again then you would have 10% of the product. Also, because nobody has a world or world System right now there is a chance that yours will be taken into the starter kit. That would make it essentially free, but you'd still gain the points as if it were in the shop. You'll also get the copyright of the product but be advised you can only upload 2 things a day to the shop. You also won't be able to form a commerce guild in the System currently."
"Hmm there is nothing I wouldn't like but you said something about guilds just now. Are they like guilds in those MMO's where you have a hub and can meet your guildmates all at once.“?
"No, they aren't like that and that is everything I can currently say about them. Why does he have to so curios?"
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"Hmm have you said something at the end. Well, it doesn't matter anymore [Yes]."
And then the bombs hit, and I could only see blue my complete vision was full of notifications. Most of them were about people buying my System others. Some had something to do with me gaining something and the last one was about rising points. And just like that, I fell back in surprise and as I laid there on the ground, I asked Celeritas the only important thing right now.
"Could you offer a complaint to the System for me."
" Yeah, I can do that. What is it about?"
"People are buying my world System and I am being bombarded with notifications of it. Couldn't there be something like a notification log or something like the stuff with the skills? So that I can see that someone has bought it from the corner of my vision."
"Oh yeah that don't worry we are already working on implementing something like that and the titles that you asked about should also soon be implemented. Don't worry. But how many points have you gained just now to get such a reaction."
"Something around a Million just now. And some achievements."
"Hmm yes that sounds good for now and the number will probably rise later without your input. Now the only thing left would be to activate the System."
[Activate the Trois pouvoirs System] [Show System log]
Achievement acquired
Custom provider I: Provide the Shop with one unique product
Bonus: 1% permanent cost reduction
Trois pouvoirs System was added to the Shop
The price of this new product is going to cost 2000 points
Achievement acquired
Golden Goose I: Gather 1.000.000 points with a single product
Cost reduction: 1% permanent cost reduction
Hmm, there seem to Achievements for almost everything, but I don't seem to be the fastest anymore. Ah well, I already have some Bonuses that others won't be able to get. Still, I would have liked more of the ‘under 100 type Achievements’ but what can I do I think I should shift my focus away from doing everything as fast as possible and to building a solid base so that my world won't destroy itself. I could influence the world culturally and show them the right path. But right now, I don't think I want others to worship me. They should worship Cely and maybe some others. But no, I don't want to be known by them that could lead to problems because I know I can’t lead others.
But how could I do this? Well, I know that right now I want to have at least seven others that represent my will in the world below me. Each will get his mountain while I get this sweet house with my giant tree. This is going to be fun I know it. Even if I will be stuck but I think I will try to do somethings in the world below me.
Stats of our MC:
Spoiler: Spoiler
Status
Name: Motus
Species: Dwascll (Creation god variant)
Achievments: And there was light, Light borne, Progenitor, Precursor, Magical help, The time is right, My first world creation set, custom provider I, Golden goose I
Effects: None
Strenght:11 (8+3)
Dexterity:14 (11+3)
Wisdom:15 (12+3)
Intelligence:15 (12+3)
Endurance:10 (7+3)
Charisma:12 (9+3)
Perception:16 (13+3)
Stats of the world:
Spoiler: Spoiler
Stats
Name: Mutatis/ Domum
World size: 3
Mana concentration: Extreme
Main species: Dwascall
Technology: Stoneage
Gods: Motus, Cely
World System: Trois pouvoirs System
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