《Divine Rebirth》Chapter 8 Fixation
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Achievements always provide a positive bonus. No Achievement is ever going to take something away. Most ordinary Achievements provide a point bonus, these bonuses will at the beginning be bigger than the part you get from the market with your products. This is to encourage experimentation. Other Achievements provide growth towards Attributes or intangible bonuses. Certain Achievements have Tiers the bonus form these Achievements can grow together with the tier.
A little before:
Achievement acquired
My first World creation set: Be under first 100 to create a universe based on a world.
Bonus: 2000 points
Damn this is supposed to pull me in, not that I would even have a choice but still, I wouldn't be surprised if the higher tiered rewards weren't accompanied by flashy colours and sound effects oh that should also become a complaint but I think I shouldn't annoy the System from all that I have seen it seems that it has massive power over me and probably over all of the other former humans.
Well, let's what I can I currently do oh a manual. Probably just an extended tutorial and as I already have completed it I wouldn't need I it but foresight is better than hindsight and there could be some extra things that I don't know about. So let's summon that bad boy.
[Summon manual]
And directly in front of me appeared a thick book with nothing else that was knowable. But then I could feel something leave and shortly thereafter it came back with a connection. Then something strange happened but considering my current position this description wouldn't work but I don't know how else to summarise it, the plain book in front of me changed colours, form and composition. At some point I could see a literal rainbow on this book then even more strangely it shrunk and grew in thickness and scales appeared all over it. After all of this was over I could feel the power of the book it felt strangely familiar as if seeing myself in the mirror after a long time. But how could that be the only answer I could come up with would be magic but how exactly? That has to be something that I have to think about later.
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[Examine Manual]
Manual soulbound to Motus (Artifact)
This is a book of pure mana soulbound and only useable by Motus. It details everything he knows* and acts as a Manual for himself. All known things are categorized and change depending on new information. Older versions are also able to be seen by Motus. It can become sentient if interacted with long enough.
*Everything that is known from music to Myth and Legend to scientific discoveries, everything
That's a bit ominous but I think that it will work as a log for everything that I do but maybe with magic, it could become something different. I just better look inside if there is anything that wasn't covered in the description. But now let's summon the System companion to see how he reacts to my work. That's probably also going to be interesting.
[Summon System helper]
And there is it again this brightness in which a new form comes forth and this darkness that surrounds me. All of the surrounding light streams towards the swirling mass of light in which small form is born. It seems to resemble slightly if only my silhouette. The light is getting faster and faster lightning begins to shoot forth and even they get succeed into the storm again.
After the storm has calmed down a new being stepped out it looked almost identical to me but only with some minor differences. It was a bit unnerving but I was also strangely proud of it as if I showed somebody how to do something and he would succeed after the first try or as if I wrote a program that worked. Strange I didn't feel this way before. Ah, that just means that I would have to research a bit.
Ah, I get off-topic the other one is beginning to talk.
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"And you look like this because?" was the first question helper asked. To be fair he would probably expect a Human or someone like that but still who does he think he is the System only gave me the option of a helper after I changed my base form.
"Nobody was there to teach me what to do and anyway I didn't want to be Human anymore. This Dwascall form seems to be superior to me. What do you think is it any good?"M
After this thought that this race could work and that my form was appropriate but asked why this should be superior to Humans. It seemed as though he thought that humans were the perfect race. Ah, what blissful ignorance. He forgot our bad "planning" or handling of mana which resulted in us losing mana. After this, he began to talk more about management and if I already had done something like that. But I knew that this would become a problem for future-Motus not for present-Motus. But still, how could any of these questions help me and my world.
"So, what's your name?"M
"Celeritas? Yes, Celeritas. Or Cely if you want to have the short form. It's going to be a pleasure working with you. And before you ask yes this is a strange name, yes I am male and no this form is no clone of you. I have been created from the male template for the Dwascall."C
"Wait template? Shouldn't you have you know Genes and things like that."M
"Oh yes I have genes but the System needed something for the planet to work towards and a way to create deities. So templates were created first for the humans than all of the other new races created by you gods. Then just a bit variation with a certain margin of error and you have yourself a useable race template."C
"Then do animal and plants also have templates or are they just there for sentient races."M
"Oh, you need to buy the templates for everything else. They are just included if you want to create a species of something. Oh, and I would recommend you to change your realm because I think you don't want to live forever in this void."C
"Good idea! [Change the current divine realm]"M
"Now you should begin with imagining how this should all look but please no pressure you won't be stuck with this option like you are with your base form"
Stats of our MC:
Spoiler: Spoiler
Status
Name: Motus
Species: Dwascll (Creation god variant)
Achievments: And there was light, Light borne, Progenitor, Precursor, Magical help, The time is right, My first world creation set
Effects: None
Strenght:11 (8+3)
Dexterity:14 (11+3)
Wisdom:15 (12+3)
Intelligence:15 (12+3)
Endurance:10 (7+3)
Charisma:12 (9+3)
Perception:16 (13+3)
Stats of the world:
Spoiler: Spoiler
Stats
Name: Mutatis/ Domum
World size: 3
Mana concentration: Extreme
Main species: Dwascall
Technology: Stoneage
Gods: Motus, Cely
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