《Deep In The Heart 2019》IT'S HAPPENING
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I'm done with the first story arc in my re-written version. I just posted the first chapter, and starting tomorrow they all will be coming out on a staggered release, with 1-4 chapters coming out per day. Go find it on my profile.
The second story arc is shorter than the first, so it shouldn't take as long to finish, also I am making far fewer edits to the existing chapters. That said, my life is also going to get-crazy-go-nuts soon, so I'm not committing to a specific release date. I would love to have it done by the end of the year, though. Once I do that, I'll make one final update to this version to indicate that the current story ark with the second palace has finally been completed. In the meantime, feel free to go read my updated version of arc 1 if you want. It's mostly the same events, but some things are in a different order and I changed up a few scenes/conversations. And I will say that Chapter 21 has some new bits of lore/backstory that weren't anywhere in this posting, so that's worth checking out even if you just want to skip to the new stuff later.
YUGE thanks to my good friend Preceded for providing the editing on the new version! He was absolutely crucial in giving the story more polish!
Also, if you're wondering, I changed the cover of this back to the old one because I want to use the new one for the current version, and having two stories with the same cover on my dash will confuse me greatly.
Edit: Should've mentioned this, but forgot. The new material that will continue where this version left off will begin in the new version's Chapter 43. Keep an out for that number if you're waiting for that.
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The Triumphs and Tribulations of Kai Jameson
Kai Jameson is an average everyday young man. He still lives at home with his parents after having just graduated from college. He loves playing video games and his job at the local Buy More is tolerable. Of course that all changes the moment the system arrives and the Earth is connected to the Nexus. Turns out Kai was trapped in time for about eighteen months while the people already here got a headstart on him. He lucks into being rescued by some people from a town called Donnyton and learns that if he wants to survive in this New Earth he'll have to work harder than ever before. The rewards are worth it. This is Kai's story, the moments of his triumphs, and the moments when he feels that things couldn't possibly be worse. Thanks to puddles4263 and his story The Legend of Randidly Ghosthound for the inspiration on the world this is set in. If you have never read that I highly recommend it, and if you have read it and enjoyed that story then I hope you'll enjoy mine as well. This is the first story I'm ever putting out for public consumption so reader beware on that. Any constructive criticism is always appreciated, simply leaving a half star review tells me that you're a moron who doesn't know how to use words. I'm constantly trying to improve my writing and feedback and criticism on what works and what doesn't is the only way to do that at the point I feel I am at. Last, I just marked all the content warnings because you never know where a story will take you and I don't want to exclude anything (though there will never be a harem). I am going to release 1-2 chapters per week on Fridays. Thanks and enjoy.
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Two people live in two different worlds. One lives in a humble city that surrounds a tall artificial mountain. The other lives in a perfect city atop that mountain. From a young age, they have been taught that the other side was dangerous. For a young man, he was told they were synthetic monsters on top of the mountain. For a young woman, she was told dangerous beasts surrounded the mountain. When their paths cross, they will find that they both call themselves human, and they will learn to get along, even if their worlds reject them for it.
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In the year 2094, the DMMORPG Andorra online was released to the world and dominated the gaming scene for decades and showed just what could be achieved in VR. In Andorra, a person could be anything they wished, from a cyborg to a fucking bunny if they wanted you were allowed access to all races they could think of except for a select few. Now for all of what Andorra accomplished this story is not about Andorra, it's about a player that went by the monicker of daiko. Daiko was your average salaryman that didn't accomplish much in life so he sought an escape. Wich he found in games and Andorra allowed him to escape and more. Okay, I was lying slightly. Daiko was not your average salaryman he Hated humanity. Now, you're probably asking why he hates humanity well It's quite simple really. He was abused by his parents and all of his so-called friends just used him and the only ones that card were his pets so he loved them with his entire heart until his dad shot them anyway. So as far as the world was concerned everything that humans touched was destroyed and he wanted nothing to do with them. Andorra was another chance, another life that wasn't absolute shit. Well, as it turns out that heteromorphic characters aren't looked at positively and well he didn't want to play as a human so he persevered until he rose through the ranks and reached the upper echelons of the game. Now I know you're wondering what was his character well his character was a...well I guess to find out the rest you'll just have to read the story, won't you?
8 79Remembering Us
Cameron James had the perfect life. For the past eight years he's been happily married to the first and only woman he's ever loved. What happens when an accident takes away Amelia's memories of the past twelve years? What happens when she only remembers him as the proud best friend of her best friend's ex. Cameron's 'perfect life' is about to come to a screeching halt.#1 in Memories! (6/18/18)#1 in Amnesia! (8/4/18)Beautiful cover by the wonderful SusieReamsWrites!
8 209Asshole//jackgrazer//finnwolfhard//it cast
He's an asshole we hate each other
8 184MELODY
"All i need in this life of sin is..." Kiara Palet is a 22 year old photographer from Harlem New York, her life is a train wreck and so is her love life. khari Sage Francois is a 26 year old poetand business man, h e was the world in his hands, he has the money, the fame, the respect and all of the women he could possibly have.
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