okay, i have been seeing some really honest reviews, and i agree to some of them. so i've thinking..... do you guys want a new story? to end this story here, at chapter 24. and i would make a new one, that would actually have charater development. at night, during my break for study, i would think of all the flaws in my story. so, if you guys want a new story, or to continue this story, just vote in the poll. i'm really getting discouraged about this story. i told my very judgey friend and, without even reading it, he just completely hated the concept. so...... if you want another, that's completely fine, don't worry. but if you guys want to continue, that's also fine. so.... your choice.