《The Third Prototype》Paul POV
Advertisement
My name is Paul, and I'm the guild master of Lhant village adventurer guild branch.
A couple weeks ago while I was fishing, I found a young man laid helpless beside the river. He looks like shit to be honest. All beat up, his clothes are ripped apart. A victim of robbery perhaps? I approach him to check if he's still breathing. Thank Lady Gaia he is. I pick him up and carry him into my house.
"Honey, I'm home" like usual, I greeted my wife as I enter my house. It is a tradition that I practice my whole life. Not saying it feels awkward to me
"Welcome home dea.... Who's that?" my wife stare at the boy in my shoulders
"I found him near the river, barely alive like this"
My wife sigh "Poor boy, put him in the spare bedroom while I prepare an ointment and a wet towel" she said with pity
I put the boy in the spare bedroom. My wife entered with an ointment and wet towel in hand. She cleaned the boy wounds and body effortlessly and she put the ointment where the wounds looks worse. As she clean the boy face, she gasped
"Hey Paul, don't you think...."
"Yeah, he looks like Edward"
"Could it be that he decided to return here?"
"Honey, you of all people knows that he is dead"
"But... We never did find his body and maybe... maybe...."
"Honey please" I said as I embrace her
She started crying "But honey, he looks just like Edward. What if he is Edward and trying to return here? What if...."
"ANNA, OUR SON IS DEAD" I shouted at Anna, reminding her that our son is dead
"WHAT IF HE'S NOT? LOOK, MAYBE THIS IS OUR SON. DON'T YOU SEE THE RESEMBLANCE. BESIDE, WHO'S FAULT IT IS THAT LED OUR SON TO DEATH?" she shouted at me back
"Anna please...."
"I'm sorry Paul, it just so hard....." Anna started crying again
Advertisement
"I know... Let's just ask him when he wakes up"
"Yeah let's do that"
A few weeks later, the boy finally woken up. He offer some gratitude and ask where is he. I answer and I also introduce myself and my wife. Just as I was about to ask for his name, his head ache and need more rest. My wife let him rest and drag me outside.
"What did you do that?" I asked
"Do what?"
"Letting him rest without asking his name"
"Let the boy rest Paul, he's been through a lot" she said back to me
"How do you know?"
"I mean he is our son right?" Anna face brightens up
"Anna..."
Helpless, all I can do is to wait for the boy to wake up and make him explain his situation to Anna
The next day, I find him admiring the view from our house. Our house is located near the edge of the village as such we have a great view. I got to admit, he really resembles my son. The way he like to admire the view from here. The way he smile, he looks just like him albeit an older version.
After Anna woke up, we ask the boy of his name and origin. He claims he forgot his name and origin. I didn't seemed like the boy lie either. Amnesia maybe?
As I contemplate his situation, Anna suddenly talk
"How about Ed, short for Eddy?"
Gawked, gobsmacked, confused and bewildered I look at Anna. This is not our son, I'm sure of it. So why does she do that?
"Ed for Eddy huh... I like it" the boy said merrily but I think the boy didn't hear Anna said another word, but I do
"And Eddy for Edward"
Oh Anna, when do you plan on letting our son go?
After that, I gave the boy, Eddy a tour of the village. The villager give me a weird look, seeing the boy as they thought our son Eddy comes back to life. The boy didn't seem to notice though as he's so engrossed in the scenery.
Advertisement
A scream from a woman interrupted us and I chase after the scream. As the guild master, I'm task to defend the town from evil (A/N: Yeah, maybe not). I reached the adventurer guild and see to my back that the boy followed me effortlessly. People don't follow me running at full speed effortlessly. I'm an Upper Grade 8 master after all. No ordinary person can unless they're at the same level as me.
I proceed to take care of the incident. After that, I look at the boy and found nothing on his face. People usually becomes afraid at me after watching me fight. A side effect from how powerful I am but not the boy. I looked at his eye and I'm perplexed. Those are the kind of eyes that have seen much. Is it possible that a boy his age see much of this life already?
I digress, I send the boy home as I clean up the mess in the adventurer guild. Before I know it, the sky's gone dark and I ask permission to go home. Yeah, even guild master need permission to go home when there's shit like this happening.
I went home and found the boy and Anna still talking. I look at Anna and I see her smile so vibrantly. I haven't see Anna smile like this in a long while
Later that night, I asked Anna about this afternoon and guess what she said?
She said "I know maybe he isn't our son, there's plenty of discrepancy between him and our boy. I checked earlier if he had affinity for mana and he checked out. I realize that he may not be our son. But, can I think of him as such? I mean...."
I hug her. I hug her so tight so she can never let go. I want her to share her pain and sadness with me. And just like that, we fell asleep.
The next morning the boy asked me if he can join the adventurer guild as an adventurer. I said sure but the minimal requirements is that you have to be at least Grade 1 mage or aura practitioner. Anna then do something unthinkable again. She told me to teach the boy. Anna really? I know you want to think of him as Eddy but.... She glared at me and I could do nothing about it. My master told me to not teach it to other people but it is my master daughter's that told me to teach the art to the boy. Well, you can't refuse Anna.
We went to the training ground and entered one of the room. I guide the boy on how to form your circle based on my own cultivation technique. As he was struggling to form his circle, I told him to force it if you can't.
Suddenly tendrils shoot out from the boy's body. The tendrils then shoots towards me, it stopped just before it reach me. It radiated pressure beyond anything I've seen, even my master never radiated this much pressure. The tendrils just move around me, and it observed me, like it have its own intelligence.
As it deems I am of no threat to the boy, it withdraws back to the boy like it protected him from harm. Just as I felt the boy is done creating his first circle, the tendrils went back inside the boy. Fucking scary.
He then asked me if he does okay. I paused for a second and told him that he did alright and bail on him after telling him to go home to Anna. After that, I ran through Lhant Forrest and straight to Lhant Mountain Range. I've got to tell master and hope that teaching the boy how to create his circle is not a mistake.
Advertisement
Doomed Dungeon
Bastill is kidnapped and sacrificed. Turned into a dungeon by his captor, furthermore they plan to return in five years to collect the matured dungeon core. While his stats are reverted back to the first level, will he be able to overcome his enemy? With experiences from his human life, watch as Bastille builds his dungeon into a fortress, amass an army, and level up. Will he protect his core when the time comes? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please send me art! I will use it and treasure it! ART... I really would like your art... PLease? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________ Started on {5/15/2018} Feel free to crtitique the writing. Its in a rough Draft right now. If I get decent enough feedback I may continue on writing it.
8 191Struggle
Mae, a slightly below average high school senior, is thrust into the world of fantasy. Levels, skills, and otherworldly beings now bombard her daily life. Will her mental chains ever be broken? Will she sacrifice her humanity to gain unfathomable power? [I am a new author. Please give me honest and brutal criticism. It's the only way I can improve and give you a better story. Updates will vary for now.]
8 95The Name Archives
Daemon was living a normal life, a life like any other. But while he, like everyone else in 2020, was adjusting plans or making new ones to deal with the pandemic, an even greater tragedy struck. Now the only one in this new world still knowing his own name, he is determined to find his family and complete his Magnus Opus, The Name Archives. If he can survive that is..... This is my first time writing a story, any critique, tips, and reviews are more than welcome, please keep it civil. English is not my first language, but any remarks about grammar, wording, etc. will be addressed. The cover art is not mine, if it's yours and you want me to take it down, let me know and I will do so immediately.
8 193The Calling of a Trainer
Daniel always wanted to be a trainer and explore the world. But in a world where religion and myths are reality, he will have to dig deep to achieve his dream as legends pulled from their slumber in the wake of his journey.
8 172Cupid's Match : CUPID'S MATCH BOOK 1
[IN BOOKSTORES NOW!] What if you were matched with the original love god?---When Lila goes to the Cupids Matchmaking Service it is to tell them to stop spamming her. Instead she finds out that cupids are real, she has been matched with a dangerous love god, and that he is coming to find her. Soon arrows fly, myths are awoken, and Lila finds herself part of a deadly supernatural war that could cost her her life, and her heart. Perfect for fans of Percy Jackson and the Vampire Diaries.---THE PUBLISHED VERSION OF CUPID'S MATCH IS OUT NOW!Get your copy of Cupid's Match at bit.ly/CupidsMatch or follow the link in my profile!
8 151Semper Fi Paradise
With every paradise comes a little bit of hell.༄༄༄Lelani Kehale has spent her whole existence surrounded by shorelines and palm trees, on the beautiful island of O'ahu. Even within the bounds of this tropical oasis, she has managed to find herself trapped in the scandals of her past, forcing her to swear off any and all Marines who happen to stroll into her life. Devoting herself to the art of surfing, she finally feels like she's able to rebuild the girl she was before her trust was stolen. Unfortunately, for her, those new walls might just come crumbling down when combat boots and camo start charming their way into her heart.Brodie Dawson has always been on the chase for new adventures. On his 19th birthday, he makes the life-altering decision to become a United States Marine- trading his spontaneous and carefree life for a structured one. But Brodie manages to find his free-reigned spirit reignited when he runs into a girl who's as fiery as her passion for surfing. Will love be enough to keep their relationship afloat, or will new and old secrets cause it to sink? ⚠️-Strong Language🔥-Mature Sexual Content🚩-Triggering Subjects/ Physical violenceCopyright 2020 © - All Rights ReservedCompleted on May 18th, 2022
8 197