《Maou Decides to Write a Shoujo》(A notice from the author - Vol1 Revision)
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Hi Everyone,
First of all, this won't be a chapter included at the story. I know it's been kind of late already but I'll have quick notice to my readers. I've read my very first volume and noticed it was a complete mess. I've been trying to improve my writing ever since I've started writing volume 2 but I failed to look back at the previous one.
After giving the very prologue a backread, I've made a decision to improve them. I really did not touch the story flow itself, but I've tried to fix every wrong grammatical error I've seen, the incorrect tenses (this is not my forte so if you noticed some things are still wrong you can leave a comment.) and those nonsense wallbreaks that I just added out for fun. I know some of the readers find it amusing to see those kinds of things but for the sake of the consistency of the story, I've tried to limit them.
I've been working on this past week to improve my volume one and I hope my work pays off.
I've listed a few of the important things I've done with the whole volume one this past week:
4/7/19 Author notes for Chapters (indicated 'r1 | '):
--Re: Opening Act--
--Prologue: Twilight Mytherion--
Ch1-1 He never really thought about it
Ch1-2 A unit full of happy people, and a former demon.
-fixed all of the tenses to match the tense I'm currently using at my updated chapters.
-revised few events from Re:Opening act and Pro:TW mytherion to match current pace of story
-matched character descriptions and ages to fir current timelines
4/8/19 Author notes for Chapters (indicated 'r1 | '):
Ch1-3 Maou Decides to write a shoujo
Ch1-4 Deadlock Realizaton 1
Ch1-4 Deadlock Realization 2
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-fixed all of the tenses to match the tense I'm currently using at my updated chapters.
-revised few paragraphs and fixed pov
4/9/2019 Notes:
-Revised chapter and fixed tenses
revision applied to chapters below
Ch2-1. Ch2-2, Ch2-3, Ch2-4
4/11/2019 Notes:
-Revised chapter and fixed tenses
-revision included chapters 3-1, 3-2, 3-3, 3-4.
-there was nothing much I could do to save this chapter since there had been lots of wallbreaks. I've fixed everything that doesn't make any sense when you read it as much as I could.
4/14/2019 Notes:
-Revised chapter and fixed tenses
-revision included chapters 4-1, 4-2(fuck this chapter), 4-3, 4-4, 4-5 and a few bit for Interlude 0 and re:prologue twilight earth
-Again, I've tried to remove those wallbreaking nonsense statements I could see and rewrite them to match with the current way of writing that I've been using at vol2 for consistency.
I guess that's about it for tonight. I really hoped I've improved most of the things at vol1 that needed improvements.
I'm hoping for your continued support and enjoy my upcoming releases.
Cheers!
Raden 
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