《Rebirth and Second Chance [Dropped]》Announcement
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I think I'm going to start a new story. It will take place in modern time and have no magic so where should it be? I want you all to comment a location some where in the world, but it has to be a city. I think the main guy is going to be 17 and in high school. I decided to come out with more Rebirth and Second Chance, but it won't be everyday since I'll focus more on the new story. I'll post a link when I release the first chapter.
I got a comment saying the way Rebirth and Second Chance ended felt to abrupt, but honestly I was just tired of the story. In my head the fight with Jack was planned out a little better, but I didn't feel like putting more effort into it. I spend like an hour writing each day without even thinking so I don't even know what exactly is going to happen each chapter myself. I don't even read over it before posting.
That was my first time trying to write a story so I'm sorry if it sucked. I would like to know if my characters felt too fake and what would help them feel more likable.
I gave a little info on my new story, but I would still like people to give input. I personally like harem, but I feel like most people don't want it. The new story will have action so please list more tags you'd like and I'll see if it can fit in unless it's already part of it.
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