《The immortal that ran away from home》Chapter 10 - Being an immortal cultivator is fantastic
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“Late blooming constitution? How good is it?” Jamie was not a fool so once he saw Tong Bo Yue excited face he knew that his constitution was not bad and he was eager to know more
“When pagu created the universe there was chaos and from chaos was born Yin, Yang and Qiankun (time-space); from Yin, Yang and Qiankun were born the 5 elements and from the 5 elements were born everything else” she laughed softly and continued “You´re body is the most common and lower chaos body but it is not to be looked down upon because if you are properly trained you´re potential is almost as good as a pure yin/yang/qiankun body”
Jaime didn´t understand much so he asked directly what he wanted to know the most “Will I be able to become an immortal?”
Tong Bo Yue´s face grew solemn and tried her best to explained “once you reach foundation establishment as I already told you; you will be able to fly into the sky and once you fly to a certain height the people from the 4 sacred islands will notice you. I was born in one of those islands and I know all of them will be happy to cultivate you to some degree but if you don´t work hard and catch the attention of one of the old monsters living there you won´t have a chance to immortality”
Jaime didn´t like Tong Bo Yue´s habit to explain things vaguely but he didn´t dare to complain and asked “didn´t you say you could help me?”
Tong Bo Yue narrow her eyes and slowly said “What do you think I´m doing? I´m not an immortal and my chances against the heavenly tribulation aren´t the best so I obviously can´t help you to become and immortal but my foundation is pretty solid and I don´t think there is anyone in the mortal world who can help you to breakthrough Qi gathering realm and become a foundation establishment cultivator in 5 years. Yes, you only have 5 years because I don´t think a senior would notice a 20+ years old Qi gathering cultivator even if had a heavenly constitution”
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Jamie had noticed in this 3 weeks that every time Tong Bo Yue talked about the heavenly her face would turn to one of sadness but he was sensible enough to restrain himself to ask about it so he said “And they are going to train just because of an old friend like you?” Jamie didn´t believe something so good happening a second time so he was curious
Tong Bo Yue laugh “I don´t know if your looks will bring you a good fortune or a disaster but they will keep changing during your cultivation and maybe by the time you go there nobody will associate you with my childhood friend.” She looked at Jamie who had already lost 10 kilograms and continue “Think that you will go there to look for a job. Your employer will be your master, he will teach you about the dao and will give you missions, status and treasures according to your performance”
“And if I don´t prove my worth I won´t even get a job” he nodded in understanding
“I will teach you Yin laws. Even if they are mostly for women your body, even if it´s a low quality one comes from the primordial chaos itself so you won´t have much problems
Tong Bo Yue spent all the day teaching the most basic Yin cultivation method to Jamie who at the beginning couldn´t believe that it was possible for him to freeze something with a wave of his hand and even though he couldn´t do it, he was able to gather Yin qi from heaven and earth and make the room cooler which proved to him that it was possible.
The next day Tong Bo Yue went back to school like normal but once she arrived at her seat she noticed that the atmosphere was pretty heavy so she immediately asked
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“What happened?”
Angela and Lena looked at Tong Bo Yue with weir expressions and Lena finally said “Haven´t you noticed anything different about Jamie? He looks full of confidence, his skin is now so white and soft and on the top of that… He just lost 10kg! something like that doesn´t happen without any reason”
“But that is not something to be alarm. He has lost 10kg but his muscles are more visible and he evidently looks healthier” Tong Bo Yue said expressing her disapproval to their behavior
“We know he is not doing something dangerous. His mother even called us last night to thank us for Jamie´s change but it doesn´t have anything to do with us” Angela said as if she couldn´t comprehend why Tong Bo Yue hadn´t understood
“So...” Tong Bo Yue was getting inpatient
“We have been trying to find out who is his new girlfriend with no success” Lena said and her voice suddenly grew higher
A Jamie with a better hearing was leisurely walking into the classroom while drinking a bottle of water when he suddenly heard Lena´s voice which caused him to spat the water directly into a muscular guy
“What the hell do you think you´re doing fucking idiot!?” The muscular guy´s voice could be heard through all the classroom and everyone could guess he was very angry
“I´m sorry it was an accident” said Jamie who was evidently scared
“You´re apologies are going to dry my t-shirt?” the muscular guy wasn´t going to let Jamie go so easily
“No but that´s the only thing I can do” Jamie answered looking pitiful
“You can take out your t-shirt and give it to me then we will be even” the guy said waving his right fist towards Jamie
That was Jamie´s favorite t-shirt so he obviously didn´t want the muscular guy to take it away and was about to have a panic attack when he remembered that he had been cultivating for 3 weeks so his odds against a mortal were pretty good and even if he lost his goodness-like master could take care of the bad guy.
Jamie´s face instantly changed into one of resolution full of fighting spirit which made the muscular guy even angrier so without any more words the muscular guy sent a punch towards Jaime´s face
When Jaime saw that the muscular guy´s punch was very slow he became excited and raised his right hand as fast as lighting to stop the punch then he sent a liver blow with his left fist which made the muscular guy spat out a mouthful of blood
Jaime raised his head proudly and screamed in his heart “Being an immortal cultivator is fantastic!”
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