《Female Immortal's Return to Earth》0006 - His Place
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As the party comes to an end people begin to leave the hotel. Because it had been decided that Yun Feng would live with him they leave the hotel together. Before they leave they say goodnight to CEO Long and then walks together to the hotel's underground parking lot.
As Yun Feng enters Long Jin's Lamborghini sports car she notices Lin Wanyun standing by the hotel parking lot entrance. She stands there biting a handkerchief, looking at Yun Feng and Long Jin, while mumbling curses under her breath.
Long Jing takes the driver's seat while Yun Feng ends up taking the passenger seat. Sitting in a car again after over a hundred years reminds Yun Feng that her current self doesn't yet have a driver's license. She should be able to remember how to drive if she trains a bit and then she could quickly get her license.
"Did you enjoy the party, Miss Yun? If I remember correctly we did invite someone called Yun Feng but because of an accident 10 days ago she died. So you could only have snuck in, unless that Yun Feng could survive and change her looks in a short span of 10 days."
Long Jin says looking at Yun Feng with his teasing smile.
"I had an important reason to sneak in."
Yun Feng doesn't take any note of him but still give him a light answer while looking out the car window.
"To get a sponsor?"
"Un"
She wasn't surprised that he guessed right, after all, she came with a fully detailed proposal. She even had a recipe ready. Obviously, she came well prepared.
Seeing as she also just came back from another country it would be unlikely that she had researched beforehand that he sought a business partner. So she could only have gone into such a party to find a sponsor.
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After about 15 minutes they arrived in a 10 stories tall apartment complex. Long Jin drives his car into the underground parking lot. He then indicates for her to stay seated while he walks around the car and opens the door for her. Long Jin also reaches out for her to take his hand. Yun Feng looks at him coldly.
"I'm neither your girlfriend, wife or mistress you know. No need to open the door for me or help me out of the car."
She then walks out the car, ignoring his outreached hand, and walks past him directly to the elevator to press on the button to send the elevator to the parking lot. Long Jin gives out a chuckle before joining her inside the elevator swiping a key card and pressing the button to the top floor.
"You live on the top floor?"
Yun Feng asks with her eyebrows furrowed.
"Yeah, even though I said that it was an apartment it is more of a penthouse. It's got a great view."
When the elevator doors open what one can see is a living room. The living room is pretty open, mostly black and white colors, with the occasional yellow, a sofa group, and a big TV. In one corner was a side table with a coffee boiler. If he had any guests they could boil their own coffee with it.
To the left are the kitchen and the dining room, with the same black white and yellow color theme. Both the dining room and the living room got large windows to the outside and a tall roof.
To the right of the elevator is a staircase up to the second floor where the bedrooms, bathrooms, and study is. The second floor was made so that one could look down on the living and dining rooms.
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The color theme on the second floor is mostly dark brown, except for the bedrooms and bathrooms which had their own color themes. There was the master bedroom with the same black white yellow color theme as downstairs. One bedroom with a girly color theme and the last one with a more neutral white color theme.
Of the two bathrooms, one was a simple black and white while the other, that was connected to the master bedroom, was black, white and yellow.
Yun Feng thought that the penthouse somewhat matched its owner, but she couldn't tell exactly how. Maybe white for a bright future, black for his cold personality and yellow for being a 2nd generation nouveau riche.
"So, Miss Yun are you satisfied with my abode?"
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