《Livestream Hero》• Chapter #41.1: [An Author & Co – Author’s Note: End of Arc 1]
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• Chapter #41.1: [An Author & Co – Author’s Note: End of Arc 1]
Welp, that ends our ‘Arc 1: Hori & Hiro’. Next up – ‘Arc 2: Eyes of Corruption’.
Purple Grimm: Well folks, that marks the End of Arc 1. Shido and Tatsumi tracks down ‘LightSeeker’(Kaide) for their own goals. Hiro and his group travels to Korea in hopes of finding more information about ‘OldFriendDarkness’. Also, the fate of Zen and our beloved side character. Will they possibly meet? Union and other evil organizations are still wary and on guard. Second Arc will mostly focus on Hori’s adventures in CulturedOjii-san’s world. However, we’ll still see the happenings back on Earth from time to time. Everything goes forward.
BaNaeNae: I’m not here to rant too much, but to address issues regarding this story. But seriously… Isn’t a few yanderes enough, Purple Grimm? You’re adding even more. Do you have some kind of fetish involving being dominated by women…? *Sigh* Whatever, anyways. Here are the issues that I had noticed and addressed, as well some other reminders.
[ ] – These will mean significant magical items, magic spells, as well as other abilities.
Plotter & Schemer is one. You may notice that the term’s been used interchangeably, which I don’t know since me and Purple Grimm had agreed to use the name Schemer and not Plotter all throughout the story. But what’s done is done, so the names Plotter & Schemer will now both be used, but still refer to one Ancient God.
Differences: Hori Kaide – Kazuto Hiro. I’ve noticed some people confuse the two.
Rankings once more: Lower ranks are all unranked. Middle Ranks – Novice, Warrior, General, Lord. Top Ranks – Predator, Emperor, Conqueror, and Dominator. Highest Ranks – Supreme, Enlightened, Ascended. Divine Ranks – Spirits, Demi Gods, Deities, Ancient Gods. Primal Rank – Primordial.
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‘Word’ – Sentences or words marked by these are either locations or aliases, as well as thinking.
{ } – Indicates mental conversation.
Hmm… I think that’s all I have seen. If you have seen other issues I have missed, feel free to comment. I’ll answer them on a co-author’s note in Chapter 42, if there’s any.
PurpleGrimm: Yes indeed, but I don't have fetish on women dominating me, yet. Anyways, the second arc may have a less big action scene and more plot points, {don't worry because I prepare something to fill that.} As you notice I left few foreshadows on the flow of the plot and underlying clues, as the meme said 'its all coming together. ', the reason this had some itchy bitsy yandere vibes in the story was because admittedly I like yandere(in 2d not on 3d), I know what it feels to had this feelings, and lastly, it also relate to the story, and I want to make a decent interaction of girls and their behavior, the practice of making a generic harem in most anime is kinda general....as you can see in Hiro's group as an example, yanderes had more psychological side than tsunderes right?
Purple: Why it is related to the story?
Grimmy: Cough...Cough...shut up, don't try to discern it.
Purple: {reviews the mind} I see...
Grimmy:....Bastard...
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