《Reborn as a GOD [Re-written]》Chapter 25: The Wish
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POV: Ysion
"Now then tell me what Is it that you wish for?
Demon King and Queen you may step forward and state your wish."
" Yes my God I shall speak for us both our wish is to become Gods...." said the Demon Lord, well I wasn't really surprised about it I kind of expected it.
"That shall not be a Problem though you will only be ascended as Minor Gods, if you so wish to become a Main God you need to prove yourself worthy for such a thing to happen do you understand?"
As stated my response I could hear the people situated next to the gate exclaiming, I'm sure a lot of them didn't except me to accept even if It's only Minor Gods, but it doesn't really matter We already lost a lot of our Minor Gods in the war so if anything it's helpful.
"YES! YES! Yes My God of course I understand I I mean We accept" said the Demon Lord while his wife next to him was full of smiles, I can tell they were a bit nervous that I would Refuse but now they were very relived.
"Ok then." I then waved my hand and made them both float closer to me, at such a close distance they could see me quite clearly I could feel the Demon kings Stares which contained mad respect and loyalty while the Demon Queen was the same there was something else in her gaze....
I quickly started to gather mana and directed it to the Demon King first, I started by changing his internal structure and upgrading his body's potential to that of a Minor God, After I was done with him a more younger version of the Demon King appeared while an Aura of Gods also Appeared around him, His eyes were filled with joy as he started to check his new body, I then moved towards the Demon Queen and did the same thing, after a while a younger and even more charming version of the Demon Queen appeared, her eyes were wide when she noticed the changes both her and her husband went through but she was more composed then him so she quickly regained her poster and nudged her husband and bowed politely the Demon King quickly regained his senses and bowed as well, I let out a slight chuckle and opened a portal above the Gate to "Heaven Domain" the Sky above us suddenly turned Golden once more while the clouds parted to make way for a golden passage to appear.
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"Now Go! I now Announce as new Minor GODS Henceforth you shall be known as The Demon Gods" they politely bowed once again before flying towards the passage, I could feel the envious eyes of the people down bellow following them while a lot of them cast me looks full of reverence...
"Now then, Guild Master Rose."
"Yes My God" bowed a middle aged woman although she was a bit older it only served to give her the mature beauty charm.
I waved my hand towards her and made her float closer to me. "Well then what Is your wish?"
She appeared to hesitate for a bit not knowing if you should talk or not, I moved closer to her and put a hand on her shoulders she seemed startled while looking at my eyes before quickly looking away her face all shades of red....
"It's fine you can speak what ever it is you wish for as long as I can make it true I shall you do deserve it all of you..."
This only seemed to serve as making her face even more red...
"T-that's not my fair my God!" She stuttered a bit.
"Oh? Why So?"
"A-ah My wish was to get more excitement, but then you came....and I don't think I ever felt this much excitement before....."
I was startled looks like I underestimated my charms...I only wanted to tease her a little....
" *cough* Well then What is it that you wish for?"
" I want to become your angel my God!" I suddenly have a very bad feeling about this...
POV: Ovva:
"Why do I feel so angry all of the sudden? Could Xulene be making a move on Master again? No no this feeling isn't Xulene no then who?!"
POV: Xulene:
"I suddenly don't feel so good...Is Father okay? I ran away after that k-kiss b-but now I suddenly regret it...can it be Ovva is making a move on Father again?? No it can't be it doesn't feel like it I think Father already descended to the Mortal world...Then who??!
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POV: Ysion:
"So your wish is to become an Angel?"
"My God forgive my rudeness but I want to be your personal Angel!"
"I'm afraid I already have a personal Angel and you should all already be aware of it."
"Yes my God i'm aware..."
"So if you want to become an Angel you will be under Ovva, do you still want that?" As I said that I can see her Eyes filled with resolution.
"Yes! Please make me an Angel my God!"
I slightly nodded and started the same process that I did with the Demon King and Queen the only difference is After upgrading her Body and strengthening it I decided to not make her look too young but instead let her keep the older mature charms while I also gifted her a pair of White Angel wings.
"She slowly opened her eyes and bowed towards me." I nodded and gestured for her to follow where the Demon King and his wife went, Ok now that we got that out of the way who is left?
"Pope Tamiel Sunarrow."
"Yes My God!" Replied an energetic old man
"I'm very pleased with your devotion and I have yo say you have been a big help in keeping a low lvl of casualties in this war, now then what is your wish?"
"My God this humble servant of yours only has the wish to continue on serving you eternally!"
"I understand, I then grant you Tamiel Sunarrow Immortality and access to all the realms, your purpose shall be to spread my teachings through the Mortal Realm until I deem it enough and call you back to my side do you understand?"
"Yes my God it's my honor!"
"Good, I then proceeded in changing his body structure making him stronger and more compatible with mana while granting him Immortality and giving him the appearance of a young handsome man with a pleasant face to look at, after that I teleported him to another spot in the Mortal Plane."
"Now then, Lenna Gilrel."
"Y-yes My God!" A young Elf responded
"It's your turn what Is your wish child?"
"My G-god my wish is to travel the world and the realms your Holiness created!"
"Hmmm, well that shouldn't be to hard Okay then, I Ysion Grant you Lenna Gilrel the power to travel access all my realms, but do Keep in mind i'm not granting you Immortality do you agree?" She hesitated for a second but then firmly nodded her head.
"Yes my God I want to experience all there is to experience while tempering myself in the process!"
"Good." I liked her resolution so I decided to help her out a little bit so she won't die immaturely, so While I did grant her the power to travel between the realm I also enhanced her own physical ability which she was lacking as a mage and I also increased her already ridiculous mana capacity, I think it's only a matter of time before she become's an Immortal by herself I look forward to it.
Now then the next one should be a bit interesting as well...
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