《Not A Fairy Tale》Arc 6 - Chapter 5
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POV: Altair Oberin Lyrius
"[World of Thorns]" I yelled as I watched the beast approach.
It was a large lion with leathery, almost bat-like wings, a fiery red mane, fur the colour of sand and the tail of a scorpion with a stinger longer than I was tall. Its teeth were even longer than that and its eyes sparkled as if someone tried to start a fire inside over and over and over without any success. The manticore glared at me, baring its teeth at me with murderous intent.
But before it could charge at me the ground burst open and countless, far too many to count them in a reasonable amount of time, thorn tendrils appeared, rushing towards the ceiling, piercing through the body of the manticore many, many times, blood dripping from them. Before me a thick forest of thorn tendrils was formed, each thorn bigger than my hand, each tendril thicker than my muscular legs.
I smiled as I watched the light disappear from the manticore's eyes.
"Now that one, that one I like," I said as I let the thorn tendrils disappear.
The manticore corpse fell down to the ground with a loud thud. A puddle of blood formed beneath it, sticking to its fur.
'Nice, now we went through the entire manticore family... what's next, a dragon?' Ira joked.
"Don't jinx it," I said as I walked past the corpse in front of me and walked down the staircase which coiled around the stone platform I was on.
After following it for a while it led into yet another tunnel with the same engraved walls like every other tunnel in this damned dungeon. After walking for what felt like an eternity and a half I finally reached the end of the tunnel, finding myself in yet another chamber, although this one was different, it was much hotter and at the bottom of it I could see a massive pool of bubbling lava, it was much larger than any of the others and instead of another kind of manticore, there was a massive black pyramid with a blueish light glowing in the gaps between the different parts it was made from as well as from the strange engraved squares in some of the different parts. It hung right in the middle of the room, connected to the walls, ceiling and to the ground beneath the pool of lava by massive shiny black chains that looked thicker than some houses I had seen. A hanging bridge made from what looked like charred wood led from the end of the stairway I was now on top of the pyramid where I saw an opening.
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"Looks like that's where we're going... how fun," I said as I approached the hanging bridge.
'Be careful, I can sense something down there,' Ira warned.
"Oh, another weakling? How great..." I said as I walked across the bridge, not giving a shit whether or not another disappointment would jump out from the pool of lava below.
'I don't think it's a weakling... that mana signature is familiar...' Ira said.
'It's a dragonoid,' Arva stated. 'And by the mana signature it's giving off it's not something we should be writing off as another weakling!'
"Then what is it?" I asked.
The beast answered the question before either Ira or Arva could. It was a massive snake-like beast with a horned head, a long snout, glowing orange eyes, dark red scales and black spikes covering most of its back going all the way to the tip of its tail.
'Oh, so it's a wyrm... and a dark red one at that...' Ira stated.
"Dark red? Something special about it?" I asked as I got ready for another fight.
'Dark red, conceptual colour of liquid flame, also known as lava. That thing is a coloured beast...' Ira said.
"So like Grudon..." I said to myself as I began smiling.
'You mean that bear you killed before I began living in your head? That thing was both poisoned and young, even if its conceptual colour was higher than this wyrm's... this thing is far more dangerous than you little white teddybear,' Ira warned.
"Good to know," I said with a smile on my face.
The dark red wyrm had jumped out from the lava pool, arching over the bridge and diving into the lava pool on the other side. Mid jump it spotted me, one of its glowing orange eyes fixated itself on me before it dove back in. Some of the lava splashed almost onto the bridge itself.
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"What are my chances of killing that thing?" I asked.
'Barely existent...' Ira said.
"Good... good, then let's just run into the pyramid if things go wrong," I said as I activated my wood elven magic mark on my entire body except for my face.
At the same moment, I used everything I could. [Predator's Strength], [Predator's Agility], [Predator's Instinct] and I took one of the small vials of blood that Vera had prepared for me and drank all the red blood inside. I felt [Blood High] activate. Then I went deep inside and removed all of the mental seal I had put onto the Power of Wrath, releasing all of my stacked up anger that I accumulated over the past few years that I didn't have to use when slaughtering those pathetic soldiers.
Black and white mana burst forth from my entire boy, in a nearly flame-like shape it whirled around me, black with some white spots and lines in it, it looked wild. I then burst forth, catching the wyrm as it jumped out of the pool of lava again with my fist. It hit the wall seconds later with a loud crash sound and I landed on a small overhang as I watched the wyrm sink into the lava.
"One," I said out loud as my smile widened.
POV: Rudolpho Alami
The earth shook and I had to hold onto something as to not fall off the edge of the mountain pass.
What the...
When I regained my balance and the shaking stopped I shook my head and continued onwards until I reached a split in the mountain pass. One path lead deeper into the mountains while the other led further along the side of them, towards a ravine through which the other side of the mountain range could be reached. I felt like someone was watching me.
"Who's there?!" I asked loudly.
No answer.
"Who's there?!" I asked even louder and angrier.
No answer.
I immediately released all my mana pressure, crushing some stones around me and cracking the ground I stood upon. The earth shook with each step I took as I walked.
"Who is there?!" I asked louder than before, more commanding and with far more anger in my voice.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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