《The Naruto system》I smell bad?
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The sun shined brightly on all of people on the streets. One laughed, one played and others just did some window shopping. One thing was certain, everybody was having a wonderful time.
Well… everyone except one person. Yeah, you guessed it (maybe?) Tristan. Wherever he went people blocked their noses and quickly scooted away.
“Do I really smell that bad?” Sniff* sniff*
“Fuck, I smell bad.”
Confident that the kind looking woman wouldn't reject him, he walked towards her with a big grin.
“Hey, ma'am could you….” Before he could finish the baby in the woman’s arm started crying.
“WAAAH! Monster! WAAAH!”
What would happen next? Of course he would be seen as a bad guy for no reason. The woman glared at him and walked away trying to calm the baby while controlling the urge to block her nose.
“Don't look at me like that! It's not my fault I've been trying to complete a mission alright?”
Trying to convince the people around him who stared daggers at him with their hands on their noses. He ran away without any reservations.
😭 “What is up with my sad life?”
While he was busy running away, he spotted the old man who had given him a lift here.
Screech!
“Old man!”
“Well, well look who's here? Passed the test eh?”
“Sure did…”
“Old man, how did you get here?”
“I was here long ago young man. Anyone can come here. This is the market place! Ancestral stone is the only clan on barren continent that has an open market!...”
Cough! Cough!
Quickly blocking his nose, the old man backed away from Tristan.
“Why do you smell so bad?”
“I don't know! Maybe it's because I had to climb a fucking wall! Maybe it's because I was too busy completing a mission, that I didn't bathe for three days!”
“Sigh~ that's enough young man. You don't have to cry.”
With great difficulty the old man removed his hand from his nose.
“Old man!”
Tristan jumped in for a hug but it didn't look like the old man wanted one.
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“Wait! Wait! Don't get so near!”
“Fuck you're the same!”
“Well what do you expect?!”
“.........”
“Look don't get so depressed. Just go to the Ancestral stone. They have dorms where a disciples stay at. Since you passed the test they'll give you one for free. Just go take a bath and you'll be fine!”
Tristan looked at the old man with tears in his eyes.
“That's it! That's the problem! I don't know where I have to go! Whenever I try to ask they run away!”
“Don't cry for everything! Just head north- east from here. You'll find the entrance there. You did receive the bronze plate right?”
“I did, you know a awful lot about the Ancestral stone don't you?”
“ Ahem! I am a old man y'know, besides I am a regular at this place. Anyway! I gotta run young man. Got some things I have to do.”
He waved at Tristan and walked to a nearby stall.
“Wait old man…”
Tristan was conflicted whether he needed to ask him about the chains at the Ancestral mirror but he had an eerie feeling something really bad would happen if he did.
“What is it?” Asked the old man.
“Nothing! Goodbye!”
Running with all the power he had in him. He had only two things on his mind.
‘Food, bath, food, bath, food, bath, food, bath, food, bath.”
Like the old man had directed he had run north westwards. The main entrance was about a mile away from the market area.
There were two guards standing guard. Both of them had full body armour on with a Lance in their hands.
A gigantic board loomed over the stone gates. The words Ancestral stone written on it instilled fear in someone when they look at it.
“Um, I'm a new guy here. Here’s the Bronze plate.”
Thankfully it seemed like the guards couldn't smell much cause they didn't act weirdly even when Tristan was near them.
They looked at the bronze plate for a while before handing it back to Tristan.
“Here, please keep it safe. It will be your identity card if you want to enter the clan.”
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Loud noises were created when the two guards opened the doors. Tristan entered while the two doors were closed from behind.
“That guy smelled bad.”
“Yeah we can't even block anything in these goddamn suits. By the way…. How many days since we met a woman?”
“It's been pretty long.”
Tristan curiously looked around. What would a fantasy world clan look like?
“OMFG.”
Greenery everywhere. Literally, there were plants all around the entrance. Disciples had a uniform which they wore while doing the chores.
There were mountains at far away distances and a few tall buildings here and there.
Everything was just great! His hard work paid off! At Least it was not a place where Light told him to come to troll him.
Soon a disciple walked up to him.
“Hey! I am new here! Can you tell me where i have to go?”
“Sure! It's there” he pointed towards a place but he covered his nose and ran away.
“The fuck, wasn't he fine just a second ago?”
Ding~ Congratulations for finally completing the mission!
Experience gained!
Exchange points gained!
Monthly mission reward received!
Status screen:
Name : Tristan Davis
Attack: 20
Defence: 25
Strength: 20
Dexterity: 63
Agility: 72
Stat upgrade points: 5
Exp to reach next level: 98%
Exchange points: 103,780
Tamed beasts: Vuur.
Elemental affinities: lightning.
Jutsus:
Basic ninja level jutsus.
Shadow bind technique.
One thousand years of death.
Ibuki.
Raikyu.
Mud wall.
“It has taken me a long time to do this but here goes nothing!”
“Open the damned mystery box.”
Ding~ mission box opened. As promised you receive an elemental affinity.
His eyes were closed while the random effect started in his brain.
Ding~ congratulations for obtaining the wind elemental affinity!
“Yes! Enter that damned store.”
Confirm purchase?
“Hell yeah!”
Ding~ congratulations for obtaining the Sharingan. The system will now integrate it within you please bear with it.
Disciples around him stared at him worriedly. Watching a person lying on the ground wriggling around like he was in pain but was actually enjoying it was definitely weird.
Integration done! Enjoy!
“Yes! Yes! Finally ! Finally! I have the Sharingan"
He leapt in the air madly and shouted at the top of his lungs.
What would a person do when he obtains the Sharingan? Use it of course!
“Sharingan!”
“Awesome! Although it's only one dan! It's just how the manga described!”
The disciples were spooked out due to his weird behaviour and some of them even went away to call their seniors.
“Senior a mad person just entered the clan!”
Another mad person just like him walked towards the entrance.
“What’s all this ruckus about?”
“S-s-senior it's a new- new face…”
“Shut it, Hmph! doesn't even know how to speak.”
He had sharp teeth like a shark. His red hair rolled in the wind, it was as if flames had given birth on his head. Overall he just looked like a really mean and strong person, your regular bully.
“Aye! Don't cause a fucking riot at the entra….”
Before the redhead could say something Tristan punched him in the face due to his excitement.
His face tilted to the side as he stood his ground with his feet.
“You, fucking, fucktard….”
Everyone around them shouted in chorus-
“uh- oh”
“Oh oops, sorry man! I was just trying to…”
This time before he could finish what he was saying the red head smashed his fist into Tristan's stomach.
Boom~
A shockwave spread out as Tristan was sent flying through the air like a rocket. He slammed into at least three trees before coming to a stop.
Blood littered the ground as Tristan struggled to stand up.
“Hmph! I don't know who you are new kid but don't get too cocky.”
Tristan stood up and spit the mouthful of blood he was holding. Instead of feeling pain, his whole body shook with excitement.
“Heh! I don't usually like starting things but you asked for it!
I needed to try out the Sharingan anyway! “
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