《Dragon Ball, A True Coherent Fan-Fic》Chapter 6: Don’t Time Skip! Make An Arc! Then Time Skip! part 3
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I prayed for Ras soul in front of the grave I made for him. I marked it with a small tree I found while I looked for something to mark his grave. I didn’t know him much, but what he has given me changed my fate. He gave me four special techniques. Mind’s Eye School Flying Technique, Clone Technique, Materialization Technique and Nimbus Cloud Technique. He also added some ways to control my Ki and Mana, but nothing like the Kamehameha or Special Beam Cannon. A shame. But let’s not be put down because of the lack of something like that. Let me review what I know about this techniques.
Mind’s Eye School Flying Technique: Nothing serious about it in the beginning. Just utilizing Ki or Mana to fly. Preferably both. Using Ki to shield oneself and Mana to reduce air friction as much as possible. At the later stages, where one will be able to surpass the sound barrier and reach closer to light speed, one must begin to practice the world between or netherworld technique attached to the flying technique, because one might run the risk of destroying the planet. The netherworld or world between technique allows one to send the heat generated when flying close to light speed to the nether. It is recommended to use the Nimbus Cloud Technique to learn this because the Nimbus Cloud does it automatically. Interesting.
Next is Mind’s Eye School Clone Technique: Well, this one is something. By using up some of one’s lifespan, a clones with at least 75% to 95% of one’s power level. The amount of clones is up to the user. But one has to be careful, the more clones one makes, the more lifespan is used. One can recover the lifespan used one the clone dies, either for using up the lifespan or being killed. But if an enemy destroys the current of lifespan before it reaches the main body or destroys the clone completely if all and lifespan, then it’ll be lost. Moreover, in the early stages before mastering the technique, if the main body dies, the technique will be canceled. And even if the lifespan of the clone created comes back to the main body, it will not heal it and will remain dead. Only when the technique is mastered, can one remain alive when the main body is destroyed. Only at that time will the clone be considered as the main body and the power level can be set anywhere from the range of 0% to 100%. But one thing still stands, one will lose lifespan if the current is destroyed with any of the bodies. Finally, the technique allows the user to be aware of every clone as if it is oneself. This technique is mainly used for training, due to the dangers of losing lifespan. When training, the power level obtained from the clone is added to the main body when the technique is canceled or the clone dies. Example: if someone who mastered this technique creates two clones with 25% of power and both clones increase their power by 15 ti, once both clones merge with the main body, their power level will increase by 30 ti. Note: mastery can be tracked by how much power on can set to a clone. Beginners can only set from 75% to 95% of the user’s power. The more mastery obtained, the wider the range of power the user can set to a clone becomes.
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“HOLY MOTHER OF GOD!! WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!” I screamed at the top o my lungs while pulling my hair. I thought I might go crazy.
“OH, RAS SAMA! I AM YOUR BITCH! I AM YOUR FUCKING! FROM HERE TO THE ENDS OF TIME!” I said while crying and kowtowing to Ras grave, hitting my head with the ground.
I knew what this technique meant. If I was able to master it and use the Dragon Balls, wishing for eternal youth as King Piccolo did, I’ll be close to unkillable. I know what you’re thinking, ‘what about immortality?’ Short answer: I don’t believe in that. Even if I get it, someone might use the Dragon Balls to take that it off. Or there might be a way to kill me even with that. Heck. The immortality given might be a super regeneration for my body and a soul that won’t disperse once destroyed, for all I know. I still remember that Goku black fused with that supreme kai, which name I don’t remember, was still killed by Zeno. Well, erased, but that is the same. Maybe worst. Yeah, I’ll stick with eternal youth, thank you.
Ok, going back to the techniques.
Mind’s Eye School Materialization Technique: This one has possibilities. This Technique uses Mana and the principle, energy cannot be created or destroyed, only converted. Solid to liquid, liquid to gas and gas back to liquid. It is not destroyed but converted to another state of being. By using mana and converting it to another state of matter-wood, steel, iron, concrete, etc- one can materialize anything. Swords, houses, anything. But the more complex the object, the harder it is. Example: if one creates a spaceship, the only thing that will come out will be a spaceship, until one looks inside. Every component that makes up a spaceship will be missing; controls, engines and so on. One needs to know what goes where and what anything specific is made of. Meaning, if one knows what an engine is made up by heart, it’ll become easy to create. Or if one has the blueprints to anything in specific. Once the technique is mastered, one can materialize plants and bodies (every part of a body composition must be known to be able to make one. This is hard, due to every living thing having minor changes from each other). The bodies created by this technique need a soul. If one isn’t one isn’t added to the body, it’ll die and decay.
Yep, many possibilities indeed. I can think of a few things I can do when I master this technique. Being able to create a body would allow me to create a body for myself if I die. But I don’t know if that might work. It might be considered possession for all I know. Anyway, let to my next and last technique.
Mind’s Eye School Nimbus Cloud Technique: The things I can do with this! This technique creates and summons a Nimbus Cloud. This Cloud is completely under the user’s control. The Cloud comes with a variety of abilities. It is able to carry the user and anyone else the user wants to. It is possible to supply energy to the Cloud to make it go faster, bigger than it can by itself and making its lightning attacks stronger. The Nimbus Cloud has a passive ability which allows it to absorb the energies of the environment to maintain itself and charge its attacks. The Cloud becomes black when it is charging and lightning attacks, so it might be a big giveaway to opponents if no use accordingly. But it is possible for the user to pick what color the Cloud is when creating, making it pass as a normal cloud up in the sky or bypassing the drawback that its lightning attacks changing the color to black. Furthermore, the Cloud has the ability to create Cloud Soldiers at the user’s command. The appearance of this Cloud Soldiers is up to the user, can be humanoid or animal. The Cloud Soldiers are under the user’s control and can use lightning based attacks or explode into a powerful lightning attack if destroyed or if the user’s make them explode. The user can decide whether or not the soldiers exploded when destroyed. Finally, the Nimbus Cloud abilities depend on the user’s mastery over the technique; how cloud-like the Cloud Soldiers appear as and the amount of energy the user is able to transfer before it explodes due to over transfer. Only when the technique is mastered can the user transfer as much energy as they want without fear of the cloud exploding. It is advisable to use the Cloud Soldiers ability to transform the Nimbus Cloud into clothes, as it is easier to do than life-like beings. The Nimbus Cloud in clothes form retains all its abilities and can be a strong defense, either in this form or cloud form.
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Versatile. The no other word a can think of but that. It allows me a wide variety of things to do. It was never mentioned that I can only create one. Its full size is not mentioned either, nor the minimum. So I can think of many things that can be done.
These techniques are easy to learn. But it depends on the user when they are mastered. It would be easier and faster to master if I just focus on one of them. This is hard for me because I don’t believe in mastering, perfection or completing something. Everything can keep on improving. Things are only abandoned, not perfected or completed. For example, drawing something. Let’s say I draw my spaceship on a piece of paper, right in the middle. There is still more space around the page. I can decide whether I keep on drawing, improve it, or abandon it, letting it as it is.
Anyway, let me check my stats. I can feel I’ve become stronger and my Ki is much higher than before.
Name: Yamo
Bloodline: Saiyan (Suppressed)
Body State: Healthy
Mind State: Traumatized
Talent: Innate Magic
Power Level: 1/1 ti (Suppressed)
Ki/Mana: 1100/1100 (Suppressed)
Ki/Mana Control: Poor
“What is this? My Ki is higher than my power level. Why?” I thought about for a second, using what I knew about Dragon Ball and what I’ve seen so far. That’s when I realized it and something else by accident.
I was looking at the “Suppressed” word on my stats. I remembered the old man had the same the first time I saw him. But when I saw before dying, it wasn’t there.
“Of course! Why didn’t I noticed?” I yelled. I realized that the reason for the all man’s power to be suppressed was because that was a clone made using Clone Technique. But how the system knew how high his power level was? How did analyzed it? I theorized it was by analyzing his Ki quality. I remembered that in Dragon Ball, Goku/Kakarot transformed into Super Saiyan Blue. All the Gods of Destruction were alarmed. Why? His Ki quality was comparable to that of the Gods in that transformation. If my theory is, then the system calculated the old man's power level based on that criteria. But there’s more.
Ki isn’t everything when calculating one’s power level. I think that one’s body comes into play too. There were many fighters in the tournament of power that couldn’t or didn’t have Ki…
I just realized that if I’m right about how one's power level is calculated, then the six demonic beast...even if their bodies are weakened...will be able to kill me with no problem based on their Ki.
I better practice my Ki control. The higher it becomes, the better I’ll be able to compress it and make attacks or shields, like Android 17, way above my level of power.
So, inspired by the theory that signifies my doom by the hands of the six demonic beasts, I went to train the techniques given to me by the old man like a madman while making my way back to my ship. Additionally, I used the Mind’s Eye School Martial Arts and knowledge that the old man gave me to improve my own fighting style.
I prayed to any entity I could think of for spiritual strength and willpower.
I didn’t want to make the mistake of the life I decided to forget when I took the name Yamo as my own.
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