《Breakthrough》Chapter 9: Able to seperate your body is not bad
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When at the Supermarket my cellphone is ringing.
“heloo?”
“Hi Sulis!”
“oh, hi Josh, what’s the matter?”
“nothing urgent I just want to tell you that I just bought VR Device, so soon I will play that game too”
“Oh? Is that so? Congratulation then … did you already made your character?”
“no, not yet, the device will come in a week, that’s why call you first because maybe we could play together, so!? What’s your race? And your starting place?”
“I don’t think you would like it, I’m an undead and currently still at Clestrial Kingdom, I suggest you to choose another race, because of there is no other player but me”
“EH? Seriously? Aren’t you lonely?”
“a bit, but there is an AI around and they are like real people too …”
“really? Well … hmmmm”
after few humming …
“I guess I will choose an Elf then, I’m sorry Sulis, I actually really want to play together with you”
“no need to apologize, it’s okay, we can met or play together when the time comes, and also, if you want to meet me as soon as possible, choose your start place at South West continent”
“alright then, I will level up as soon as possible so I can leave the starting place”
“yea … contact me again when you already inside the game”
“ok, bye then”
“bye”
‘so, he already bought that device huh!? I guess he really save up his money for it’
afterward, I continue shopping stuff that I need.
…
I’m at home or my apartment now.
Before I login at game again, I want to check at forum … a new forum that people said the most trustworthy and safe place to share and sold information or equipment.
[Welcome to Royal Road]
‘so, this is how it’s like’
I see billion people online at this forum, I guess this forum really that trustworthy, from what I heard the founder and server place is anonymous but this forum said is associated with The New Welt corp.
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I browse at continent information … I thought there might be some useful information.
I choose south west continent and search information about Clestrial Kingdom.
None of detailed information about Clestrial Kingdom, just common information about Clestrial …
[Clestrial Kingdom is Undead strating point but up until now there is not even one person want to choose became an undead …]
‘feh, nothing useful’
I close my browser and decided to login game again.
…
‘Now it’s time to go to Mining place’
I activate my [Flight] skill and make my way to there.
…
I arrived at mining place just in 5 minute, the place itself is a bit far from the city.
This is a Mining Village but now just abandoned place, no one in here but monster crawling everywhere.
Their level is slight higher than forest surrounded the city
‘meh, I guess I will begin an extermination now’
Even though they won’t dealt high damage on me but that would be bothersome when I’m mining and then get disturbed by it, so the carnage is begun.
…
4 hours later I’m done cleaning monster on that village.
the most difficult one is undead bat, because of their skill [sonar attack] is really annoying, it’s hurt my eardrums … wait! I don’t have an ears … oh well, but that’s clearly hurt my ears
Those monster didn’t gave me much exp but they drop some material that can be used to alchemy, so I loot all of it.
Considered I don’t have alchemy skill, I could use all of this as an experiment and get alchemy skill.
Aaaaaand how silly I’m, how could I mining without mining tools like pickaxe.
I cast [Mana Flare] and look around some pickaxe that might be still can be used.
After few minute I found some pickaxe, I pick them all so there might be chance that these old pickaxe will broke at anymoment.
So I try to find some mining spot … I wish I had an ability that could detect minerals.
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At forum, they said you can learn this skill from mining expert, he will give you quest or sometime you just need to paid that mining expert to teach that skill.
‘I guess I have to mining it randomly’
I swing my pickaxe at wall then …
‘CREAK’
it broke, the wall still intact but my pickaxe already broke, so I try another pickaxe.
I used all pickaxe that I found but none of it survive and the wall still intact.
I pissed off because of it so I unconsciously punch the wall … but then I heard some collapsing sound deeper inside the mining place.
Since I won’t get back empty handed despite loot from those monster, I would like to check it.
I know from my previous accident that almost made me got killed because of my curiosity.
But then again my curiosity win it.
I activate [Perception][Magic Eyesight][Sense of the Dead] and [Sense of the Living], these all skill will allow me to detect living being and the undead creature, so I able to anticipate from surprise attack at least.
These all skill is came from my Witch body, the skill is still available even I change my body, also some low teir magic skill also still available.
I venture deeper inside mining cave … then, I sense living creature.
I stop and try to detect it … that living thing is not move, but I haven’t seen what kind creature it is.
I walk slowly reach that thing but then I reach the end of mining cave.
My sense detect it that living creature is still ahead but I already reaching dead end.
I look my surrounding, maybe there is some secret pass or something that would open my way deeper inside there.
After few minute I found nothing but small hole lead to somewhere … maybe.
‘shiet! The hole is too small’
So, I thought I will cast some magic skill like fireball and might be able to open my way.
But then the mining cave it’s about to collapse if there is any huge explosion.
‘So, the only way it seems to pass through this small hole, but my body is too damn big’
Thinking about it, the hole seems to be big enough just for my head … I know this is sound crazy but I separate my head and my right arm so I could enter inside the hole.
‘this is insane idea but it can’t be helped, thankfully I able to separate my body part but the body still too big for this hole’
I cast another [Mana Flare] and make my way inside the small hole just with my right hand, because if there is something need to lifted or something need to be picked, I won’t get troubled and I left my left hand with my body in case when monster trying to attack me I able to defend my body.
I almost reach at the end of the small hole, and I arrive at dome sized place surrounded with glowing crystals.
‘Woa! Such a beautiful place’
When I look around I see a huge crystal at the center, and when I try to sense that living creature again … the direction and place is exactly at the crystals.
So, I try to get closer and examine that crystal but … before I could examine it, I see something inside the crystal.

It’s a girl.
…
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