《Breakthrough》Chapter 1: Have nothing is not that bad
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I began to faint leaving the real world, then i felt something. I see some dim light but then the light swallowing me. I loggin into the game
“Welcome to The New Welt”
female voice come out of nowhere
“Please type your name”
A blue light keyboard appear and I try to thinking some good name, I know this is weird sounding name but I think this is not only a weird name since this is International Teir game, I will use name where I came from
S-E-L-A-M-E-T
“Selamet, this is your name?”
“yeah”
I want to use some cool name or something like that but having some weird name aint that bad, beside ‘Selamet’ in my language country means ‘Safety’ or ‘always blessed to be safe’
“this is your current physical body”
A window appear, there is a picture of me full body and … naked. I hope nobody see this. Well … I never realize that my body is really muscular, not bulky. In guide book, the latest model Device is able to scan the body user moreover able to tell the level of intelligence someone has, this 'scan' make it possible to giving them some boost stats, for an example a body builder play this game, he will receive more Strength stats than normal player.
Looking at my own body and also there is some number measurements at the bottom of the window, Height: 201cm, Weight 102kg. ‘hmmm … Holly shit! I’m a giant!’ I would like to shout like that because I have never taken any measurements and never had medical record since when I sick I only need is rest for a day and take some meds. My face still like the exact my real face, young without any facial hair, not too thick eyebrow and eyelash, Black hair a bit brown because of sun burn, black eyes and pretty much normal, or you might say pretty much a cool guy … hehe. Anyway, from my body, light brown and have a few tan at some place, muscular and a … my male part is big or medium? Oh well lets pass about it.
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When I examining about my own body a female voice began to speak again
“This is your Male physical body with Human race, would you like to change the gender and choose your race?”
“yes”
Another window appear with so many sample of races Male, Female and Neutral. In this game you may alter you physical body … everything is fair in war. Obviously Male and Female body has Humanoid and for Neutral they like monster alike, such a mud, treant, and another ugly creature. Since I already read enough information about advantage and drawback. Actually Neutral creature has more advantage and stats but they are not popular since ‘who would like become an ugly creature like that?’ I think most of people want to become more handsome or pretty.
I already made me decision, an Undead, a skeleton. I choose this because I think this is more human like and not too ugly, well skeleton doesn’t have a face, at least you might say a bit spooky. I read at forum but nobody ever choose this guy, so maybe this is a good sign being the first. Anyway straight away to choose it!.
“Neutral, an Undead Skeleton”
“you are choosing Neutral gender, Undead Alignment and skeletal race, this is your physical body, are you sure?”
A window with huge skeleton wearing adventurer set but tattered away, with a red eye glowing out of nowhere and dark smoke or maybe aura surrounding the whole body. Truly Undead, I hope that armor work despite being tattered.
“yes”
“as an Undead you only have one town to start the game, so further starting place game will be skipped”
“welcome and please enjoy the game at the fullest”
Within a flash I go back at the darkness, I open my eyes slowly, wait! I don’t have an eyes!, anyway I look at my surrounding. I was standing at the middle center town, the town itself is full of destroyed building, many dead weeds and dead trees, there is a couple ghost and similar to me but still had flesh at their body, oh yeah, despite the undead there is also other race of undead, not just skeleton but also zombie and other. I would like check my stats first
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"status open"
Status WindowName:SelametAlignment:UndeadLevel:1Class:NoneRace:SkeletalGender:NeutralTitlesNoneFame:0Infamy:0-Health:250 / 250Health Regen:1.5 / SecMana:150 / 150Mana Regen:0.8 / SecStamina:∞ / ∞Stamina Regen:∞-Strenght:30Agility:20Vitality:20Intelligence:15Wisdom:10Leadership:0Luck:12-Attack:5-15Defense:10
'woa, despite having some good boost stats I have infinite stamina'
Looking at my status window it's look like I have much more boost stats, but it seems despite having decent Strenght compared Vitality which is a bit low, unbalanced, I wonder why. This is more than enough for level one. Now how about look at some skills.
"Skill window"
Skill Name:Skill Rank:Skill Level:Skill Experience:Darkness ControlBeginner10%You are creature of undead, blessed with darkness you are able control the darkness itself.
You can control this skill with various way
Skill Name:Skill Rank:Skill Level:Skill Experience:Skeletal RaceMaster10100%You are race of the Skeleton.
Being skeleton you don't need breath,eat, drink, and sleep.
You have blessed with infinite stamina.
Skill Name:Skill Rank:Skill Level:Skill Experience:Joint BonesBeginner10%Your bone are likely much strong and sturdy.
When you are scattered away, you can make your bones came back and joint again
"Yeah!"
I shout that because it was really awesome to have some good skills. And the last, I would like to check my inventory
"inventory"
but then a message appear
"you don't have inventory"
"WHAT!?"
Seriously? I read the guide that in start game you will have adventurer set, a Bag 10x filled with 1 canteen, 5 loaf bread and 30 copper as starter. Right now I have nothing but tattered adventure set which is low def or half of normal adventurer set. This is not explained at guide. I let it out some breath- ... wait! i don't have a lung!. well ... better not to depressed about it, maybe this is one of the drawback. Better get started.
My eye- wait! I don-Argh! stop retorting! ... Lets pretend I have full organ instead of none okay!?. My eyes met each other, he's a undead zombie, sitting at the bench looking at me. I began to approach him, maybe I can ask him something or maybe this is the start.
"hi sir, would you mind if I ask a few questions?"
"eerrgghhh? yeees, hwat du yu wan to aazk?"
He barely speak, of course he's a zombie, just like a the characteristic, wait! why I can speak normally!? I don't have tongue ... aarrrrgghh stop it brain stop retort it, just DEAL WITH IT!
"yes, thank you, so would you like to give me some information about ... eeerrmm, being an undead adventurer maybe"
"orrgghh, yeees, thiz City formerly nammmed Clestrial but rightzz now people name it City of the Deaathssz, yu can goos to teh adventurrr guildz, ask there fo da quezt and sum mor info"
"Thank you for your time answering my question, I shall go there right now"
When I left, i realized i forgot to ask for directions, This place had so many desolated building that every building looked the same, so maybe I will ask him again about the direction. After I ask the direction at the ... eemmm, Undead Adventurer guild. I make my way.
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