《Immortal》Chapter 3 - Meeting
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''- Incredible, but don't think I'm too far from achieving the God Realm too.'' [Phillipe]
I didn't want to say, but it would be impossible for him. I could see that his body couldn't handle more power.
We stayed silent for a few seconds until he broke the silence.
-'' We are all going to meet tomorrow.'' [Athalia]
We? Oh, I know...
-'' Why did no one told me this before?'' [Athalia]
He scratched his cheek.
-'' Well, let's just say you don't have a great relationship with any of the Immortals.'' [Athalia]
Hmph. He was right, specially that little b-.. Control. Breath in, Breath out.
-'' Ok, I will meet all tomorrow, at the same place as always right?'' [Athalia]
He nodded. I turned my back and I could see that he wanted to tell something but I just shrugged it. I found Henrietta and James ordering servants around.
They showed me my assigned room and I ate dinner there. I wasn't fan of crowds, or being around many people. After a servant came and left with the dirty dishes I picked a black robe and went to sleep.
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The wind was blowing and a storm was coming. All I could see was the ice beneath my freezing feet and the snow falling on my body. I hugged my body in search for warmth.
-'' Why don't you use it?'' [???]
-'' Are you seeing anyone or anything around here that I need so that I can use it?'' [Athalia]
-'' If you weren't a foolish girl nothing of this would happen, why don't you let me take over?'' [???]
-'' You wish, I know what would happen. And you must know what am I doing here. And he isn't going to fail. [Athalia]
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The voice didn't talk for some time. I finally reached a wooden house. The light coming from beneath the door gave a warm feeling.
I knocked on the door and it opened. An old man greeted me, my Master.
-'' Are you ready Athalia? You know the consequences don't you?'' [Master]
I nodded. This would cause me a lot of pain , it could not result and it could be only temporary.
-'' Then please, lay down on the bed.'' [Master]
I softly laid on the hard bed and closed my eyes waiting for my conscious to be mine. Only mine. I could feel master hovering his hands above my body and head. My body started to feel like it was on fire and I couldn't hold back the screams and tears.
I opened my eyes to look for some comfort and in my body were appearing many symbols, tattoos, runes, whatever you call it. They were shining in black and some in gold.
-'' You will regret, I will come back.'' [???]
The burning sensation stopped and I sighed in relief. I was safe, for now.
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I jolted out of the bed sweating and breathing heavily. I tried to calm down. This damn nightmares always haunting me.
I changed to new clothes, stored in my ring. A long red dress. I put some red lipstick and a bit of makeup.
I looked at the sun seeing it was almost at it's highest point. Almost midday I must get going to this stupid meeting.
I opened the window and flew out of there.
The wind was calm today so it didn't cause me problems for my eyes. One hour later I reached the Twil Forest, in the Loin Kingdom. In the middle of the forest stood a high elegant building.
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Not everyone could find it since it had a barrier protecting from evils outside like beasts, and people.
I safely landed in front of the building and looked at the big wooden doors. I pushed the gold handle and I looked around. It's still the same as I remember it was one hundred years ago. It was enormous, even if it didn't have much furniture it looked elegant.
There was big round table in the center surrounded by five beautiful chairs that looked like thrones. I sat on mine and closed my eyes waiting for someone to arrive.
Not many time after I heard two persons outside and waited for them to enter.
-'' Ricky, Margaret.'' [Athalia]
I said as I turned towards them.
-'' Athalia, it's good to see you. Congratulations.'' [Margaret]
-'' Congratulations'' [Ricky]
I nodded as a thank you, they were obviously congratulating me for reaching the god Realm.
Ricky was a gentle guy with a comforting aura, he had brown hair and warm brown eyes. His wife, Margaret, was a ginger haired beauty with bright blue eyes and freckles beneath her eyes.
I suddenly felt something, I widened my eyes in surprise, when did..?
-'' Since when did you guys had a baby?'' [Athalia]
They looked at me surprised by my sudden talk.
-'' H-how did you know?'' [Ricky]
I crossed my arms and leaned back on the chair.
-'' That doesn't matter. Do you know what you guys just did? Don't come crying if the kid don't turn an immortal like you guys and then dies.'' [Athalia]
They knew that there were strict rules when it comes to have children. Yet they give it a try. If they were born immortals it would be so easy.
They turned dead silent and we stayed there looking at the ceiling. Finally I felt the two other who were late. That two horrible beings that shouldn't exist.
The door opened once again and Phillipe appeared with a women clinging on his arms. Such a slut.
-'' Phillipe, Aya.'' [Athalia]
I glared at them and Phillipe turned his gaze to the others while Aya had the guts to look me in the eye, that bitch is going to die by my hands, I swear.
Everyone sat in their respective seats and we all looked at each other waiting for someone to start talk.
Ricky stood up.
-'' I will be straight forward. I discovered a new Immortal.''
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Give me some ideas on how should be this new Immortal. Good, bad? Man, Women?
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