《Immortal》Chapter 1 - Athalia Vélios
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Etheria, Near Siene Kingdom
At the highest mountain a curvaceous and beautiful woman with straight black hair and elven ears stood. She appeared twenty years old and so beautiful that countries waged war for her affection.
Powerful and wise she had it all, except what she wanted most, the love of family and friends.
The women took a deep breath and sighed in content. She finally reached the God Realm, and received the reward of more power from the being she spoke with.
Her raven black hair whipped in the wind and against her porcelain skin as she opened her pale blue eyes.
Her name, Athalia Vélios. Immortal, once an elf now a goddess. ''The Ice Goddess.''
This title was achieved by hard work and mostly because she completely mastered her main element, water. Once someone mastered a certain element they would receive a special bonus. She just so happened to received the Ice Element.
There were seven main elements - { Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, Lightning, Light, Darkness}
In this world to achieve power it was necessary to cultivate. There were twelve stages of cultivation and seven realms.
Apprentice Realm, Intermediate Realm, Master Realm, Heaven's realm, Immortal Realm and finally God Realm, the one who had no stages.
Athalia was a simple commoner. Her parents were hardworking people always trying to get the best for her. Along the years she started to understand, she matured. She looked at her parents faces and saw no similarities even if they all shared the same elven ears. That time she understood she was adopted.
She never really touched the subject but became hurt that they didn't talk with her about that matter. She received a sudden motivation to start working even harder and so she achieved power. She got into the Royal Academy and she was a happy girl. She had friends and was born talented, a genius of the best.
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She got a extraordinary master and learned everything she could from him.
Every little drop of love she had in her heart disappeared that day. One single second to end the perfect atmosphere. She remembered like it was yesterday.
*Flashback*
I was walking back home with my two best friends, Thomas and Beatrice. They were funny and outgoing. Never caused many problems and I liked them because of that.
I was not fan of arrogant people.
It was a calm afternoon the soon was beautiful and the birds were chirping. We were returning home for the summer.
We were still 1st years, we had no power. That afternoon our steps were stopped by shouts, a man was trying to ran away with a bag full of coins under his arm. The guards were chasing him and we just so happen to be in his ways.
We didn't saw the black energy forming on his hand and shot towards us. I wasn't paying any attention and I felt a sudden pain and someone pulling my arm.
I fell with a loud tud almost hitting my head. I opened my eyes to see the man already on the ground, but it was not just him, Thomas and Beatrice were too.
I could understand they protected me from the attack, but why? I reached them and kneeled in front of them to inspect injuries.
Their skin was starting to turn black and blood was coming out of their mouths. That moment I realized there was nothing I could do for them. I could only cry and scream for the death of my dear friends.
*Flashback End*
That moment her heart closed like a shell and it never opened anymore. She didn't turn arrogant, but people thought of her like that kind of person.
Shrugging those thoughts out of her mind she jumped out of the mountain and her feet gracefully touched the ground making a small ball of dust appear. Touching her [Storage Ring] she picked a beautiful long black dress. It opened on the sides of her legs and was tight showing her curves. The dress didn't have any kind of cleavage.
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Her high heels sinking into the moist earth caused by the rain a few hours ago. Her thoughts twirled inside her mind and she made a decision.
She would finally enjoy the life as much as she wanted. And she would start by visiting and see everything she wanted. It had been many years since she saw other people. She didn't know if the races had evolved, if the slavery stopped... So many things she thought she knew were now a mystery she wanted to learn.
Knowledge.
Focusing her mana around her body she jumped a little and started to hover in the air. She could now control her body like she was a bird, flying through the skies. Flying was a power achieved by those at the peak of Heaven's Realm.
Achieving the Immortal Realm was a difficult and sometimes people stayed stuck on the Heaven's Realm.
She decided her route, the nearest Kingdom Siene. She could sense that there were many powerful beasts around but she didn't really wanted to fight now.
And so she flew towards the Siene Kingdom.
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