《Parrain de Asesino》Chapter 1 - An Accident?!
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Warning: Gore, violence, and sexual content
Take note: POV will change accordingly
Third Person POV
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In the vast land of the continent of Valhalla, It is said that elves does not care about the mortal’s affair and secluded in the depth of “The Great Forest of Belz”. The Great Primeval Guardian, Belz existed in overseeing the forest in his eternal slumber from way back to the creation of Valhalla.
The ancient civilization once documented:
“The Great Belz shall bring forth catastrophe upon the race, which disturbed his deep slumber.”
Thereafter, a non-existing peace treaty was set in place among living, intelligent creatures in order not to provoke the elves.
Near the southern border of the Great Forest of Belz, a small prosperous settlement with firm and solid wooden fences and in-apposite frail-looking gates surrounding the settlement to prevent wild beasts from intrusion, were seen doing their daily life.
A group of elite elves was coaching the new generation with the history of the continent when the gatekeeper noticed something amiss, hence, dashed in the direction of the elder’s dwelling.
The wild beasts seemed agitated, suggesting that a foreign ‘thing’ was disturbing their habitat.
Determined to find the source, the elder ordered the elite elves to form a search party. Armed with common leather armour, daggers and bows, they journeyed towards the source.
Unknown to the party of elves, various pairs of malicious eyes were observing them leaving their settlement.
“It’s time,” said the man.
Neither of the elves knew at the time that it was a grave mistake sending a search party, leaving the settlement unguarded.
As the elves approached the root of unsettling among wild beasts, they could sense the immense pressure emitted by the source. So great that some were already trembling involuntarily.
Mustered their courage, they slogged their way with cautious and vigilant eyes in the direction of the source.
Upon arrival, what they saw leaving the party dumbfounded. Carefully examined the strange creature from top to bottom, the lead elf took a step front to check if he was alive. From what he observed,
the strange creature lying at the root of a primal tree was unconscious. He has silver long hair, a little over his shoulder. His features were gentle, yet haughty. Slightly above his eyebrow, revealed two small horns. But what caught their attention were the two huge, magnificent bat wings with nasty sharp spikes at the tip of each wing spreading at least a meter. It was as if a devil has descended.
‘What is he?’ thought the elf.
As if answering his thought, the strange creature awoke from his slumber, cautiously scanning his surroundings. The lead elf then noticed, the creature fiery red wicked pair of eyes akin to an ancient dragon staring dagger at him as if this creature was about to devour him. The elf stood in placed, paralyzed and broke out in cold sweat.
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Zeig POV
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“Urgggggg my head hurts”
I opened my heavy eyelids hazily, gradually adjusting my eyes to the blazing sun.
‘It's morning ?!’
Looking left and right, I noticed I’m lying down against an uneven thick root of a tree with its huge root spread across the soil, deeply en-rooted its vein beneath the land.
“Where am I?”
Feeling exhausted from the previous mysterious ordeal, I closed my eyes once more, lifted my face and inhaled a great deal of its earthy scent, delighting in the sounds of crickets chirping.
Then it struck me, I felt presences, presence that surrounded me and was hostile to me. I jerked my body up and examined my surrounding, identified several beings staring curiously at me.
Staring at the leader of the group, he has long blonde hair, Pointy ears, wearing common leather armour, wielding bows and daggers strapped on their thigh.
“Elves!” I exclaimed out unwittingly.
Startled, the lead elf took a step back.
“Ya naa lle?!!”
The lead elf shouted, notched an arrow and pointed toward me.
“Wait … Wait, I mean no harm”
Raising my hands into the air, I retorted, hoping that they will understand.
As though misinterpreted as a sign of aggressiveness, a flurry of arrows broke loose streaking in my direction.
The instinct of “Strongest Player” (once) kicked in; I leaped out of the spot, pointed my finger toward them and chanted,
‘Blind’
Immediately, a few golden light appeared, firmly wrapped around the elves, crippled them from movement.
In a moment, I could hear, cries and scream. Searching for the source, I noticed there were smoke rising up a few miles away from me.
‘Settlement!’ I thought.
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-A few moments after the elves left the settlement-
The several vicious eyes that were observing the leaving party got up from their hideout amidst the trees.
“It’s time.”
“Let us go, my brothers!” Exclaimed the leader as he led the group.
“HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”
The men screamed as they charged towards the unguarded settlement.
“It’s the humans! Alert the elders!!”
cried the elf guarding the fragile gates before getting shot by an arrow in the throat.
Panic and terror swept through the settlement as the group of men charged toward the weak gates that protect from invasion. Equipped with common leather armour and weapons, the men swiftly knocked down the gates thus began the massacred.
“Kill them all! Leave the women alive! “The leader commanded.
As if knowing what their leaders’ desired, the men quickly captured a bewitching beauty and brought her to their leader. The leader, with a pair of lustful eyes, licked his lip and gazed lecherous toward the female elf as she struggled to break free from restraint.
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“What a beauty, HAHAHA!”
“No, PLEASE! HELP!”
“Hold her tight!”
The men bind the women by constraining her hands and pushing her against the dirt.
The leader ripping apart the piece of cloth hiding the women’s seductive alluring body. Scrutiny the women’s bare body, he perceived that this elf has ample mounds and were enticing him to violate her.
Feeling aroused, the leader inserted two fingers into the women’s private part. Unbearable discomfort surged through the woman’s before pungent scent could be smelled.
“You’re soaking wet already, HAHAHA!”
The women screamed at the top of her lungs, hoping that somebody will save her. The women’s cried were futile as the other group of men continued with their on-slaughtering of the settlement.
Male elves were killed without mercy, adults and children alike. Female elves were captured alive and used for the group of men’s sexual desire. They were continuously raped by several filthy men at once, ripping them apart.
Lifeless bodies were scattered around the settlement and tree houses were burnt down.
Men chopping off the heads of various bodies impaled them into sharp spears and planted the pole in the middle of settlement as though collecting heads for war trophy. This barbaric act instilled fear among the captured female elves.
Without delay, the leader pulled his trouser down, displaying his nether regions. Spreading the women’s legs apart, the men adjusted to a comfortable position and inserted his genitals into the women’s.
‘Oh, that is tight’ thought the leader, in the middle of enjoying the screams and moans of the women.
Blood flowed out of the women’s genital indicating her first time a foreign object invades her sexual organs.
Interconnecting with her, he moved his hips back and fore, gripping and squeezing the busty mounds she possess.
In the process of moving, the agony escalated on the women’s genital, tearing her apart.
Tears streamed down from the eyes of the women as if leaving her life to fate, the light of hope that burnt in the women’s eyes extinguished. She knew not a soul will save her from this abominable man.
Eventually, the soil reeked of a maiden’s blood. The leader moved faster and faster, causing the sensation to intensify at the root of his nether regions. Upon reaching his climax from intercourse, the man penetrated deep into the woman’s womb and discharged his seeds into the women’s genital.
When the leader took out his sexual organ, he felt chills down his spine. A surged of killing intent stretched across the entire now- shabby settlement. All men freeze in placed, unable to move.
The leader took the courage, turned his head towards the source, disbelieved in what he saw.
“A monster.” he uttered before every living existence in the settlement being immolated by the ‘monster’.
Zeig POV
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Abandoned the group of elves, I walked towards the direction of the rising smoke. Cutting trees, veins that intertwined and making a path for me to pass, I walked through an umber-brown forest.
Soon after, I arrived at a wide glade, where the trees parted away revealing the bespoke sky. What I saw next shocked me, the sight of bloodbath, burning of tree houses, violation and heads that were impaled.
A few distances away, a man leaves hanging his nether regions with a puddle of blood underneath him and a woman who was naked furthermore unconscious most likely the act of forced sexual assault.
Then I spotted a group of apprehended female elves staring in my direction. Their eyes met mine as if begging me to save them from the ordeal.
Anger built up within me as I saw the sight.
I could feel heat leaving my body and a few moments later, the masses stopped whatever they were doing and looked to my direction.
Feeling determined to rescue the elves; I pointed my fingers towards the detestable bandit and chanted,
‘Blaze’
The next moment, I was flabbergasted by the scene in front of me leaving my jaw wide opened. An enormous magic circle appeared below the ground covering the entire settlement. Instantly, stream of flame rise up burning every breathing creature alive, blasting a massive hole in the southern border of “The Great Forest of Belz”
“CRAP!” I cursed
“That is not what I expected ! What happened?!”
Reflecting on what I have done, I couldn’t come up with a conclusion.
“Well, No matter”
Leaving behind the scorching ground and hundreds of charred adults and children's corpses alike, I lazily strolled towards the east of the forest, hoping to find the next settlement.
Unknown to Zeig, the Primeval Guardian Belz awoke from his eternal slumber and was cautiously observing him.
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