《Star Wars : Rise of the New Order》The Rest
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We where standing there and my dad calmed me down. Then after a few minutes a little voice called ou
"E-e-e-excuse me?"
M dad and me looked up to see a 6 year looking girl with tears in her eyes looking at us.
"What is it little girl?" asked my fatgher grumpy. We hadn't so much father-son moments, and he wasn't pleased that such a moment was now interruped.
"I-I-I am sorry but my mom is big hurt and I hope you help" she talked with us broken. I concluded that she couldn't talk really good, but then, we were at the ass of the universe. My dad got a softer look and than looked at me "Are you good son?" "Yes , I got it."
He hugged me one last toime and then went with the little girl to see after the women we safed. As dad got away, echidna came and cuddled with me *Is Jar ok? Why has Jar water in his eyes?* she asked with girly voice. MAn how do you explain an animal which was killing for fun the remorse you feel when you kill one of your own race
*You see echi, it isn't for all the races to kill each other. Exspecialy when it was unnecessary. We could have solve this peacefull, but they were to greedy.*
Echidna looked at me with a funny look on her face.*I don't understand that Jar.* With a sight I shot her asmile.*It is ok echidna, you will understand when you get older.* by me I tought *I hope so at least.* with that echidna was satified and leaned against me with a purr, and I was remainded just how young echidna was still in her thinking. I looked at my notifications I got from the fight. I had discovered there was an option button, and there I could change some things, like how much damage one got or how much I got, because I also discovered that the hp are not like in the game that is was like in real life, so no fighting till 0 Health.
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Killing a Thug level 5 (+ 200 XP)
Killing a Thug Boss 9 (+650 XP)
LEVEL UP!!!
Nice! Finaly I got my level up again! But then I remembered how I got this level and I got somber again.
Name : Jar-Darus
Level 11
150/2000 Xp
Race : Human
Health 100
Stamina 90
Force 2534/2534
Strength: 14
Stamina: 13
Constitution: 14
Dexterity :13
Intelligence: 17
Wisdome: 13
Charisma: 12
Attribute Points: 20
Perks: 2
PerkPoints(PP): 0
Skills:
Language: Basic Level : Max
Blaster Mastery ( Level 15)
Stealth (Level 15)
Tracking ( Level 15)
Observe (Level 15)
Trap-Making ( Level 15)
Skinning (Level 15)
Dagger Mastery (Level 15)
Brawling (Level 15)
Force: Telekinese (Level 15)
Force Danger Sense (Level 15)
Detection (Level 15)
Healing (Level 15)
Pyromancing (Level 15)
Cryomancing (Level 15)
Enhancing (Level 15)
Sword-Styles : Form I: Shii-Cho (Level 4)
I was nearly tempted to use my attribute points, but no. I could still juice some attribute points out of my training. But I could finaly raise my Skill levels, even when it was just one level. I just close dmy Status as my dad came around a corner with the daughter and her now healed mom behind him. The little girl was hidden behind her mom, even when i didn't understand why she was a fraid of us, I mean we just safed her and her mother.
My dad started talking. "" Son, it looked we just safed exactly the ones we where searching for. May I introduce : Mai Schanso and her little girl Mary. Me,your mom and Mai are old friends!"
I studied the women that went behind my dad. She was quite a beauty when I can say that. She looked like she was in her late twentys. Long , black hair was flowing down her head, and two clear blue eyes watched me and studied me also.
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"He has the looks of Sasa." She smiled at me, that was like, and it felt like the first time I was against Echidnas mother. I gulped audible and shoked the hand she had offered me.
"It's nice meeting you Mrs. Schanso."
She smiled again, but this time it ws a war, welcoming one "It's also a pleasure for me! C'mon mary, say hello to thois nice boy." Mary looked from behind her mother and came slowly forward and took my hand "It is good meeting you."
Before I could reply soemthing, she already was behind her mother again. I looked at Mai, and she hot me an apologic look. "I am sorry Jar, she is not used to strangers outside the shop. "
"Hrp" my dad cought. "Thats all good and so on, but we still have something to do." I looked at my dad confused and he explained "That were the low scum. Mai here told me that the bandits have a hideout close to the village. We need to clear them out, and that will be a good training for echidna and you when it comes to infiltration.
"Ok dad" I said with firm voice. I cried and mourned, but they are not woth be mourned for. With steel and resolve in my heart echidna, me and dad went into the forest.
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