《Stonenanny》Not a chaper, but a map.
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Congratulation, you just read the first part of the novel. But if you haven’t and you just here because you were curious or just miss clicked, then I say, fate just offered you a ride and if you have time to spare you could as well gave it a chance. And I’m not saying this because I wrote it… But because it’s… good… enough…
Yeah… This is how we reach the next part.
Quality and quantity.
I’ve reread my creation and there is a noticeable drop in style and frequency in released chapters. Some point I even ‘felt’ the significant difference. This is the first time I am writing, but roller-coasting in style is not a good sign.
Before I’ve started (and recently) I asked around other authors, and according to them, it will improve in time if I put the right effort in it. *Obliviously* While others swore on a good story and the passion to tell it. So, they were telling the same. All I need is time.
Time.
When I started it, the plan was to write my story in less than a thousand pages. With this speed and due to other factors, it will not be possible, and I will not rush it to make it so.
On the other hand, I will also speed thing up a little, minor jump here and there to shorten the travels and with more retrospect from the characters view about recent events. And, less time ‘consuming’ Isabel. *Should have given her another curse…*
But the gained time might be ending up as descriptions in scenes. But it is a win-win right?
Characters.
Seeing my note about the future. I might have overdone it on characters. I have only introduced four so far and there is around seven to go and they are just the main characters that this story is about. I am not saying I will leave them out, but they will need more than a thousand pages… It sounds a lot…
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Summary: I am not sorry for myself and it’s not the point of this. It was just a lengthy apology about the novel’s recent quality and topic. *Staring at Isabel*… I thought I was aware what I’ve stared. It will take longer than I anticipated, but at the end, the credits will roll, and the actors will bow, but until then the show go on.
Oh, before I forgot here is an early version of the map.
Spoiler: Map
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The Dungeon Hive
One thing I noticed about most dungeon stories is that most races mistakenly believe that dungeons have a hive-mind and I go, “That make sense.” Considering the various powers and how big dungeons can get, wouldn’t it make more sense for them to have a hive-mind? So this is it; my take of the world’s first dungeon and the hive that controls it. Watch as it stumbles, fall, survive, strive and…procreate? Watch as it changed the world of Ioplon…for better and for worse. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- For edited version of the story, the full trilogy (Book_1: Fantasy Begins, Book_2: Dungeon Flames, Book_3: Spread of the Dungeons) are now available on Amazon. Please take a look, and leave a rating. Thanks
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8 198The First King of Beasts
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