《Etryria [discontinued]》Prologue: A not so ordinary day.
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For every one billion year a “God” will choose one of his own creations to become another God of another universe. This is called the Creation Cycle. “Let’s find out who will be the winner.”
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A normal day was finished again, after I’ve gone to school I got home and straight to my room. And Because I was the only child it was a bit lonely, my mother was a doctor she had saved a lot of lives and has her own business, when my dad left us when I was 6, Mom just moved on and focused her attention at me and her work. I still remembered that day when someone called me; I was 11 at that time, I rushed to the Hospital from my school. It was so sudden I was crying while running to the emergency room. My mother just collapsed while working and she was diagnosed with an incurable illness, and the disease attacked her immune system. She was hospitalized, in the 4th day of her in the hospital, she called me, I held her hands and I felt it was weakening. She told me
“Son, I loved you so much you are the one that given me hope please take care of yourself and please forgive your Father for what he did. We love you son”
8 years have passed and I still cry when I remember that. A lot of things had happen I was now in college and thanks to my mother I can live with ease, she saved a lot of money and her best friend help me to manage our business, she was like a second mom to me.
I checked my social media accounts *hmmm* “Nothing much to be excited”. After that I played some mobile games and Pc games. I love playing rpg games and mmo’s but I just got bored easily. I also read manga, novels and watch anime. Sorry for the late introduction I’m Laurence an 18 year old college student, black hair and eyes around 1.7 meter tall not that masculine but I do lift. (just so you know)
After I was done with my homework I lay down and start to browse the net.
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“Ahhhh, so so so tired and bored”
“Maybe I should watch something before I go to sleep”
I go to this site and select a video and clicked it. 1 min. later *waiting* 5 min. *getting angry* 10 min.
“Is there a problem with my internet again?”
Then something just popped up,
“ oh God is this some kind of advertising again”
*sad* “I just want to watch this video”
The message was..
CONGRATULATIONS YOU HAVE BEEN PICKED!!!
WOULD YOU LIKE TO CLAIM YOUR REWARD??
“No sorry, I just want to watch my video.”
I then click the No button.
SORRY I JUST DON’T TAKE NO FOR AN ANSWER.
My cellphone screen was emitting a blinding light, I closed my eyes because it hurts, and the effect was like being thrown by a flash bang like those first person shooter games. Recovering my vision I realize that I was not in my room anymore. I start to wipe my eyes because it still hurts from the flash.
“uhhh, where am I ?”
I look at the surroundings at one thing came to my mind, Heaven, it was jaw dropping. No not that heaven with a golden door and full of white clouds with singing angels. It was like a room huge flat screen tv with different kinds of console, shelves and shelves of what I can see are mangas, collectable action figure and even a life size MBF-02+EW454F Strike Rouge Ootori (Gundam model) I was drooling. It was a heaven for otakus, well I’m not that kind of otaku that knows every anime, manga and Gundam models but still it’s so cool you can actually see my eyes sparkle.
While I was still drooling someone grab me by the shoulder from my back, I startled and jump away while posing a karate pose. What I saw was a man probably in his around 25, the same height as me, his wearing a stylish hoody and jeans. He has a fiery colored haired a cool looking glasses and has an average body. And this dude is laughing, he was laughing so hard tears flow from his eyes.
*a bit mad* “Excuse me but can you please stop laughing?”
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“It’s not funny you can get me a heart attack you know.”
“And what is this place, where on earth am I, who are you?”
“And why do you have that Strike Rouge Ootori?” *a bit jealous*
He was still laughing a bit, while I still wait for an answer.
*giggles* “uhum uhum, haha it never gets old”
“Young one, so many questions”
“First this place is my home and your thinking right this is “Heaven”, Second you’re not on earth, you are now in my dimension, my realm”
“Third well you see, you guys call me a lot of names but I’m just your creator”
“Father? Is that really you? I didn’t know you where this young, I was 6 years old when you left me and mo**”
My sentence was cut off by a hit in the head
“Baka!!, not that creator. What I mean is I’m God the creator of the planets and other life on earth, you can call me Mr. Creator”
“ohhh!! That’s why you’re so young Nn*nod* Nn*nod*”
“Anyway the fourth was I have that model because I make that, and because I am God I can do anything, But enough about that. You are here because you were the lucky one to be picked in the Creation Cycle”
“What’s that?? Am I going to be recycled or something or be sent to another world to save that world? Is that it?”
“Child, the Creation Cycle is like a lottery game all of the life that I create has their own ticket but the lucky draw was every 1 billion years. And guess what?”
“hmmmm…*smiles* that means I won? Right right? Wooohooo..
Wait, so what’s the reward?”
“The reward is…….drum roll please *drrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiim* YOU WILL HAVE GODLY POWERS!!! Just like mine”
I was so shocked and so happy, I was petrified so a many.
“Hello are you still there?”
Then I was back to reality, I was so happy I don’t know what to do. I remembered my mom, i ask a favor to Mr. Creator if I can say Hi to my mom, and he gladly let me talk to her but he only give me 15 minutes to talk to her because of reasons.
Mr. Creator snaps his finger and a white light with humanoid figure appeared in front of me. When the light faded away
*tears starts to flow from my eyes* “mom, I missed you, I love you so much”
“I missed you too my son. I’m thankful that you are doing great”
“Mom I have so many things to tell you…” my mom just hug me so tight air escaped from my mouth then I hugged her back.
“It’s ok you don’t have to, I always watch you from here”
“Thanks mom”
“hahaha you grow up so fast, well you still have something to do. Congratulations and good luck my son, I love you and good bye”
“Nn…*nod* I love you too mom Good bye”
“Well! Well! Well! That was so heartwarming, but let’s skips to the best part.”
He held his hands and a dark sphere came out of nowhere. When I look closely the black sphere is like a universe it was beautiful and amazing it has those galaxies, stars and everything that can be seen in space.
“This is “everything” I duplicated my powers and put it inside this sphere you just need to consume this and whala!! instant God”
He handed it over to me, when it came to my hand it was soft but I can feel something that I can’t describe. I tried poking it, it was like a jelly wiggling around.
“Here goes nothing”*gulp*
As soon as it goes into my mouth it slipped straight pass my throat and inside my stomach.
“hmmmm is that it?” I asked Mr. Creator, he then replied.
“Wait till it kicked in”
Soon after he said that I felt my whole body throbbing, it doesn’t hurt but the feeling is strange I can feel something flowing through every part of my body, I felt stronger, and smarter it’s like I know everything, after that small bubbles of light burst out of my body. It was a refreshing feeling, I feel lighter, I can also see Mr. Creator smiling at me.
“Happy Birthday New God”
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Thank you for reading this story, I hope you liked it..
I'm going to do some rereading and edit some mistakes of spelling and grammar.
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