《Drunk Dungeon》Update
Advertisement
Okay, so first I want to get some things off my chest.
I used to read a bunch of different stories over my life, plenty of fantasy novels, some sci-fi, maybe a few historical fiction and history books. The point is I loved to read a lot.
And as I grew older I started to write stories of my own. My first several were either fanfics taking blatant shitty turns or were books that should be burned and forgotten about. Yeah, my writing wasn't great. But as the years went on I started to get better, I outlined plots in my mind. Got better at organizing story elements, and got a clearer and clearer idea of what I wanted to write.
So I made one story and bonked that one hard. The story was fine, but I mixed up elements from one genre to another and didn't specify how they were related. I also lore dumped way too much on my readers every chapter, trying to squeeze very small details into the story when less large or intricate things could've done it just fine.
The point is, that my early writing attempts were sorta flawed in one way or another.
But then I made a story I liked and I felt other people liked it as well. I sorta got the hang of a story that second posted time. And I then started getting a bit burned out, so I wrote this one to help me recharge from that fiction.
But this didn't recharge me. First I made chapters way too long, around four thousand words to be exact. And that was seriously bothersome to write about and had the potential to be unhealthy for me. It was only last chap did I really see how tiring it was.
Then there's the fact that this story isn't going where I want it. I wanted it to be military dungeon core. But the story didn't achieve really anything on both those fronts. The descriptions of fights were too quick, the details of somethings not pandering out how I imagined, it was really just a mess.
Advertisement
So here's my plan moving forward, I want to continue this fic in one form or another and I need your help to decide on how to do that.
I could A( Continue writing this fic like how I've been doing previously (this one is super unhealthy so I will probably skip it and choose the second-highest option) B( Rewrite this story and post the story separately in a different fic C( Delete all the chapters on the current story and replace it with the one's I either feel are good enough to stay in and don't mess with the new plot or finally D( Put this story on hold for now and focus on my other one till I finish it.
I really want your opinion on these options and which one you'd like me to pick. Hopefully, you have a nice day. Till next time, chow.
Advertisement
- In Serial8 Chapters
The Girl That Could | ✔|
After the death of Jessie's father, Makayla watches the slow disappearance of her friend. However, when a small note slips out of Jessie's locker promising the impossible, maybe there is hope for Makayla's closest and dearest after all.***Occasional strong languageFirst draft***🥈Lit Awards🥉Moonlight Awards🏅Punk Rock Awards🥉Ruby Awards🥉Mysterious Awards🥉The Aurora Awards: Frost Edition🥇The Butterfly Awards🥉Cosmic Awards🏅ACE Awards🥈Writer's Glory Awards🥇 LY Awards🥈Sunflower Awards🥇Adore You Awards🥇Pretty in Punk Awards🥉 Deli Awards
8 155 - In Serial29 Chapters
Falling For Him. kth ✔
He took off my glassses and gasped.Taehyung: "You know if I had a heart, I would've definitely fallen head over heels for your eyes."I tried my best to control the smirk that was creeping at the end of my lips. "Stop slouching and enjoy yourself. You don't get to live twice, Okay? " he said giving me his signature box smile. ************************************"I can't accept the fact that you love him. If I can't have you, Miss Y/n, neither will that good for nothing freak. And believe me on that, b'coz I always get what I want" he said in a deep voice and a psychotic smirking glare"Mr.Jo- I mean Jungkook, stop joking. You are really scaring me"************************************"I love you-" he said, barely a whisper as he passed out. And I froze as the world around me stoped.************************************Guys this is gonna be my first book so plz do notify me on any mistakes
8 236 - In Serial71 Chapters
Imagines | TVD
These imagines are Character X Reader. This includes any character from The Vampire Diaries. Thank you and I hope you enjoy this book.
8 138 - In Serial19 Chapters
Rescuing Andy
This book sees the police force of Toronto losing Jerry trying to save Andy when she is shot twice in the stomache. Will the force and more importantly her boyfriend Sam Swarek be able to save her in time?
8 219 - In Serial20 Chapters
Everything I didn't say. (Richie Tozier x Reader)
This is for those Richie Fangirls. This is mostly for girls but whateverYou will have to useY/N (Your Name)E/C (Eye Color)And F/N Friends NameENJOY
8 198 - In Serial34 Chapters
Guns and Giggles
Completed!Highest ranking: #15 in HumorAriana Iglesias tends to go to extremes when she's BORED. Being a genius doesn't help either. Her sharp mind mixed with crazy theories she can't wait to try, lands her in a pit full of major events she never thought would be so... EXCITING! Even though there are guns involved which she likes to describe as 'physics in a metal case', she is determined to enjoy her life to the fullest, however long it may be.•°•°•°•°•°•°•Alexander Dimitriou, the epitome of ALPHA male, the Greek Gangleader of land as far as you can see, or atleast that's what the Legendary stories of The Dimitriou family said. Alex would go to any lengths for his family name and his...hair? Oh yes, as weird it may seem the Gangleader had a mind of his own, unlike his ancestors, who knew only about kills and guns.Alex was as SMART as a trained killer can get.•°•°•°•°•°•°•But would he be able to understand Ariana, even when her eyes tell a different story than her mouth? Would he be able to handle the storm and thunder brought in his life by this ADORABLE peice of shit?Find it out for yourself! In this Steamy Romantic Comedy Mafia Book available at your nearest screens!!!(Okay I may have been exaggerating a tiny bit, but please just give it a try, and constructive feedback is always appreciated;)High Rankings constant:#1 on YoungAdultReads#1 on #Romcom #6 on #Steamy THANKYOU FOR VOTING !!!!!!!!!!
8 258

