《STAR WARS THE FORCE AWAKENS (Rewrite Fanfiction)》Chapter 15 (End): The Jedi
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The Falcon entered the Dantooine skies. Like Takodana it was lush and green though not nearly as wet with its bodies of water far lesser in number.
"Behold the Jedi temple of Dantooine," said Ben to Rey as Chewie guided their ship towards their destination.
A large seemingly derelict stone structure loomed in the distance overlooking a vast courtyard overgrown with vegetation.
Rey could hardly contain herself as the Falcon landed near the temple.
As Rey, Ben, and Chewie all exited the Falcon they were greeted by approaching people in robes.
"Welcome back Ben Solo," said the young female Twi'lek at the lead. "And welcome to you Rey, I am Mara Leneer, Jedi knight."
Rey bowed uncertainly.
"It was by the will of the Force that you came to us," said Mara. "Now come, Master Skywalker will be finishing his meditation session soon."
As the group of whom Rey assumed were all Jedi turned towards the temple, she suddenly became aware of how nervous she was.
"Do not be afraid Rey," said a charming voice that echoed in her mind. "Like my son the Force is strong with you. It always will be."
Rey smiled to herself and whispered. "Thank you."
Taking a deep breath she began walking forward, following the Jedi with her friends Ben and Chewie close behind.
Re-write for the next installment in the trilogy coming soon!
P.S. Wont' be called "The Last Jedi"
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