《The Tales of Hammerfall》Chapter 2 -- Darkness
Advertisement
Darkness. That's all he could see, if in fact he was actually ‘seeing’ it. It took a while for Raph to calm down, and for the realization that he wasn’t quite dead to set in.
‘So I clearly died.’ Raph exclaimed to himself ‘But I’m not dead, soooo is this like heaven? Or Hell maybe?’
He was unsure of how long he had been in this state, to him it felt like it could have been weeks already, maybe even longer. ‘If this is the afterlife I'm in for a boring eternity of darkness.’ The thought of spending the rest of his “days” in perpetual darkness was anything but reassuring.
‘If only they had an internet connection here. That would make it much better.’ Raph was rapidly running out of patience, left with his own thoughts staring out into the darkness.
Sometime later Raph had this strange sensation that he had not felt in the weeks previously, he felt heavy. Like back when was alive, he felt real, corporeal. And then finally someone said: “let there be light” and he opened his eyes.
As you might understand this came as quite a shock to Raph, considering he died and all. But there he was, eyes wide open, looking up at a poorly made ceiling made of rough sawn wooden planks that had seen better days.
“What the fuck is happening.” confusion and fear laced Raph’s words as the reality set in, he was somehow not dead. Although by how he was currently feeling, he wasn't far from it.
Straining to sit up, Raph took a good look at his surroundings, he was in a small room around 10m2 if he had to take a guess. The walls and floor were made of the same poorly constructed wood as the roof, although the wall looked to be in a bit better condition than the roof was. The rooms furnishings were sparse: a single bed in which Raph was currently sat, a small table and chair with what looked to be a wax candle on it, a tiny dresser which looked to be falling apart, and counter on the other side of the room with half a loaf of bread on it. Even though the room was bereft of things it did seem to be well looked after, it was clean and tidy; there was even a small mirror on the wall with the counter on it.
Raph proceeded to get up, much to his body's protest and walk over to the counter with the mirror on it. What he was met with when he stared into said mirror gave him a shock to say the least.
“Fuck me.” Raph exclaimed at the sight he was met with. He saw a frail looking body, maybe a smidge under 6ft (~180cm) in height and a face that was very similar to his and yet not his. It was a bizarre experience seeing himself, but with a different body and face than he was used to.
For a few minutes Raph was staring at ‘himself’ in the mirror, his trance however was interrupted by…
DING
“SHIT” Raph almost jumped out of skin as the rather loud notification noise sounded in his head.
“What was that!” he said and spun around, looking for the source of the sound he scoured the room to no avail. His search was interrupted by another noise.
DING
This time Raph realized the sound wasn't really coming from anywhere and he could hear it inside his head.
“What the fuck going on?” Raph said to no one in particular as once more he heard the noise.
Advertisement
DING
System initiated, please stand by.
“Well this is finally it Raph, you’ve gone insane.” Raph didn’t know what was happening at this point: he had died, finally woken up in gods know where, in a body or face he didn’t recognize, and now to top it all off he was hearing strange disembodied voices in his head saying shit that doesn’t make any sense.
DING
System activated.
The disembodied voice spoke again, then Raph blacked out and fell back on to the floor.
[]--- ---[]
An unknown amount of time later, Raph awoke with the most painful migraine he had ever experienced. Sitting himself up he cupped his head in his hands and groaned.
“UUUGGHHH, Fuck! What the hells was that?”
When he opened his eyes he could only assume that it was some strange effect of the migraine he was currently experiencing because there was a string of text boxes, front and centre in his vision.
“Huh.”
System initiated, please stand by.
System activated.
Reincarnation protocol deployed successfully, welcome user Raphael Smith to Aetas
“Yeah, I've definitely gone insane.” Raph mumbled to himself as he moved his head around, whichever way he looked the text was always in the centre of his vision. Raph stared absentmindedly for a few minutes and tried to collect himself.
“Right Raph, this is completely fucked but you’re apparently in some game world now called Aetas?” again mumbling himself, he decided to experiment with boxes he could see. He waved his hands in front of his face with gestures he remembered from his old world, to no avail of course as nothing physical seemed to affect the boxes. Next he decided to try some verbal cues.
“Dismiss.” he said, and still nothing happened except for a hint of embarrassment on Raphs part as he realized the absurdity of the situation he found himself in.
Dismiss, Raph thought somewhat directed at the boxes and lo and behold, they did.
“Finally, getting somewhere.” Raph said, relieved.
“Right, so it seems I have to think about what I want them to do.” Raph paused and recalled his previous life, where he used to play games with systems like this one.
“Ok so how about…”
Show Notifications
System initiated, please stand by.
System activated.
Reincarnation protocol deployed successfully, welcome user Raphael Smith to Aetas
The text reappeared and Raph was getting more familiar with what he could do.
“Next, maybe inventory?”
Inventory
…
“Shit, well no magic storage spaces, for now at least.” Raph said somewhat sourly. “How about this?”
Status
Raphael Smith
1st Class
--
2nd Class
Locked
Status
Health
5/50
Stamina
5/50
Mana
50
Str.
7
End.
8
Vit.
5
Dex.
5
Int.
10
Wis.
9
Skills
Basic language pack
Gives the user the basic languages they will need to get around.
Reincarnator
???
“Well, this is new.” Raph said to himself as he examined his status screen. The first thing he noticed was that his health and stamina were low, which explained his frail body state. The next thing that caught his eye was right below his name, classes.
“So this world has classes, like a game? And there’s two slots? I wonder if I have to get one first then I can get a second or if there is some kind of trail?” Raph’s mind was going crazy with the implications of what this all meant. He took a few minutes to calm himself down and accept his fate that he was now stuck in this place, wherever the hells Aetas was.
Advertisement
Through the small gaps in the walls Raph could see daylight shining in from outside and realized that he should go out and take a look at the new world. He got up from the bed that he was currently sitting on, grabbed what looked like a rough shirt from the dresser, pulled open the rickety door, and went outside.
What he was greeted with as he walked down a small alley that his room was situated in was a fairly busy almost medieval looking ramshackled market, with stalls and hagglers all over the place selling; bread, vegetables, and even some livestock that reminded Raph of pigs except they around 1.5m tall and green. Forcing himself to stop staring at the ‘pigs’ he kept on looking around in wonder at the various and exotic looking food that was on display.
That was until he heard someone call out his name.
“Raph!” Someone shouted rather hurriedly. “Where have you been?” Raph turned around to see a large gruff-looking middle aged man heading in his direction. He was a bit taller than Raph and had a similar physique to the world strongest men that he had seen in his previous life, very strong but not lean and aggressively muscley.
The large man grabbed Raph by the shoulder and began to drag raph away from the market. “I’ve been wondering where you were all morning kid, you are supposed to be helping me put that fence up in the fields remember?” Raph had a sudden realization that he knew this man, his name was Hamish Morgan and he was a farmer that gave Raph some odd jobs.
‘This is so strange’ Raph thought to himself, ‘How do I know him?’ Then it hit him. ‘In the notification boxes it said reincarnation, so that means that I'm occupying the body of someone else? I guess that's why my health is so low, the previous Raph must have been terribly frail.’
Hamish pulled Raph along through what he now knew is a kind of slum outside the city of Langreth where he lived. It took them about 15 minutes before he was met with the sight of expansive fields that went on for as far as the eye could see. Another 5 minutes later they arrived at their destination, a pile of large wooden stakes and horizontal beams that they were using to make a fence.
“Right kid, since you were late starting you're going to have to stay later tonight to get this done. I have other things to do later but until lunch I can help you out, at least you won't be here all night that way.” Hamish said proudly.
Raph groaned but he came to the conclusion that he really didn't have any other options at the minute so he and Hamish began to put up the fence. Just before lunchtime Hamish left for a few minutes and came back with a pot and a loaf of bread from gods know where, the pot had some kind of vegetable stew in it and considering how hungry Raph was after working all morning it hit the spot.
Out of curiosity while he was eating the stew he decided to give his screens another look.
Status
Raphael Smith
1st Class
--
2nd Class
Locked
Status
Health
20/50
Stamina
20/50
Mana
50
Str.
7
End.
8
Vit.
5
Dex.
5
Int.
10
Wis.
9
Skills
Basic language pack
Gives the user the basic languages they will need to get around.
Reincarnator
???
‘Well I’ll be damned.’ he thought to himself as he looked at the screens. ‘My health went up from eating the stew.’
After the excellent lunch provided by Hamish he got back to work, although this time without his friend and boy was it a long day. The sun had long gone down by the time he was nearing the end of the length he needed to put up for the day and Raph was exhausted. By this time the fields were empty as everyone had gone home for the night and were probably already asleep.
Raph was finishing up his job hammering in the last stake for the fence, when he heard an unfamiliar low pitched screech come from behind him. He turned around sharply and caught a glimpse of a horror illuminated only by moonlight. The thing was fairly short, only around a meter, and from what Raph could tell was a sickly green color, with claw-like hands, long nails and pointy ragged ears.
“HOLY SHIT” Raph screamed as he scrambled backwards from the fence while trying to draw his eyes away from the creature.
DING.
General skill learned: Analyze
Lesser Feral Goblin Lv.6
“SHIT, SHIT, SHIT.” Raph continued to shout as he scrambled further away from the goblin. The goblin was now coming straight for Raph, claws scratching away at the air and saliva dripping from its rancid teeth. Backing away Raph fell down on to his backside as the goblin closed in on him, with the hammer he was using still tight in his grip Raph braced himself for what was about to come.
The goblin was upon him, it swiped its claws and Raph rolled over to his left barely dodging the incoming attack. Raph swung the hammer wildly hoping to score a hit as the goblin continued its frenzy, after a few unsuccessful hits one of Raphs swings landed. The claw he hit made a rather sickening crunch as it was struck by the hammer and it was now hanging limp by the goblins' side.
With the upper hand Raph managed to get up on his feet and assume what he thought to be a fighting stance; legs wide, low centre of mass, and hammer at the ready. The goblin came at him again with its one claw thrashing furiously Raph moved in to the goblin taking another swing he traded blows connecting with the shoulder above its limp arm. The goblin managed to claw at Raph's side, thankfully the adrenaline was keeping him focused.
“Ahhhhhhh.” Raph grunted, as he realized the pain that was emanating from the gouge in his side.
“SCcrrrrrr” The goblin had slowed down considerably now after taking two big hits to the side, it made a more feeble screech as it lunged back at Raph.
Raph saw the goblin come back at him and knew he had to end this quickly or they’d both be dead. He took an almighty swing and aimed straight for its head, the goblin clawed again this time scratching Raphs chest. Luckily for Raph the attack from the goblin left its head wide open, his hammer with as much force as he could muster smashed into the goblins head, its skull shattered and the top of its head exploded from the impact.
The goblins' body went limp and slumped down right in front of Raph as he dropped the hammer and gasped for air, shocked by the pain that was radiating from his chest.
“ARRGHHH!” Raph screamed as he fell to his knees onto the dirt. He gasped for air as he was overcome with what just happened, then once again he blacked out.
Just before Raph blacked out he failed to notice the notification noise he got from the system
DING.
DING.
DING.
Advertisement
- In Serial51 Chapters
A Girl and Her Fate
Avien Shepard heralded change with his arrival. Not only was he born on the dawn a solar eclipse, three meteors lit up the sky on the day of his birth. Seven sages visited across seven years to gift him with knowledge of the seven legal schools of magic, and a deceased outlaw fought his way up from the hells to grant knowledge of the tabooed eighth on the next. On his eleventh birthday, a sword fell from the sky and landed in a very important chair. Soldiers from far and wide traveled to attempt to extract the sword from the queen’s throne, but none could shift the blade, until Avien. When he was fourteen, Avien learned of a prophecy that foretold of his decade long battle with the Demon Prince of Invea. But this isn't his story. Avien is kind of a chump. This is the story of Amber Jewel, a girl who has only been Chosen as another Chosen one’s wife. Updates Thursday, & Sunday.
8 185 - In Serial23 Chapters
(Archived) The Badger Dungeon (Being Rewritten)
Please note: This is the old and original version of this story, it is currently being rewritten to be more cohesive and coherent. The new version will have additional content. Dungeons. They're supposed to be places full of danger and loot, where heroes come to fight monsters, gain experience, and hopefully walk out with some really cool armor. They're supposed to be controlled by a sentient mana crystal with an alien intelligence with goals only to expand, devour, and become stronger in order to protect itself. Sometimes, however, they're home to a family of badgers and an assortment of other strange creatures. Sometimes their core has absolutely no idea what they're doing and is really just trying their best, so can you all please stop judging them? It started out as a complete mistake and now they're just in way too deep to turn their back on the whole badger thing!
8 97 - In Serial14 Chapters
The Second Coming of Fate [A High Fantasy Story]
Prologue Arc: The Day That Begins Your Fate - COMPLETED Story Arc 1: Chaos in the Lamorian Kingdom - ONGOING Please consider following/leaving a rating. I plan to turn this into a long lasting series, and it would really mean a whole lot to me. :) ----- Having succumb to amnesia, Galvin one day appears in the Grand Forest east of the capital kingdom Lamora. For the next two months, he lives a perfectly carefree yet boring life until one fateful day changed everything. Encountering all sorts of characters and dealing with all sorts of shenanigans, Galvin begins to experience visions of what appears to be the future. With this newfound power in a world full of magic, yet plagued with war, discrimination, and brutality, will Galvin be able to change fate…or die trying? ----- Do you like stories where the protagonist doesn't start out strong and is deeply character driven (with a LOT of inner monologues)? A story that has its fair share of comedic and dark moments? Well then you've come to the right place! However, if you're looking for LitRPG mechanics, then unfortunately, this story doesn't contain too many of them. The dynamics of the story will be based on real life physics and mechanics (with a bit of magic of course!) Also, I delve deeply into a lot of disturbing topics, so readers do be warned. However, if any of this sounds interesting to you, then please come by and give my story a read. ----- Expect releases as soon as possible (which is like 4 - 10 days). Just know that I'm writing this story as it progresses, so a lot of first drafts are to be expected. :D
8 158 - In Serial18 Chapters
Tales of a Young God
Bai Hua, the young God of Rain, travels the world masquerading as an immortal with nothing but his shape-shifting sword. He helps a mortal woman to attain immortal-hood and goes on many adventures with her. He meets spiritual beasts and demons in his travels, makes many women sigh with longing for him. But no one knows that he is running away from something. Something the heavens had arranged. What will happen when people realize his identity? Will they worship him? Or form a kingdom with him as the emperor? What will happen when the heavens lose patience with him? Read to find out more!
8 216 - In Serial38 Chapters
Extra Life Online
Sim and virtu modder Joel is plucked from his outland life and thrown into a hyper-enhanced reality tournament. The stakes are the highest. Battles for survival in high-immersion virtual and augmented reailties against hardened opponents seem to be for life-and death stakes, but Joel suspects it could be worse than that. Joel’s fear grow as he begins to guess what the ultimate purpose of the contest might be.
8 216 - In Serial23 Chapters
The Exile
Kayden Yamada was once a great student at Royal Cross, a base of exorcists who specialize in combating the evil across the world. He was made for great things until a change in paths marked him a traitor and the Royal Cross was forced to banish him. Now, a giant evil is making its way around the world and their only hope is another gifted student by the name of Amy Downs and her medic partner, Kearney Nielsen who are tasked with locating the exile. Things await them in the outside world and with two threats on the table. The duo have a lot on their plate.
8 211

